登录
写作任务
假如你是李华，上周你和同学一起参观了家乡的一座老石桥(old stone bridge)。根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，描述这次活动并谈谈让老石桥焕发生机的想法。
写作提示：
1.了解老石桥的历史(建于清代，方便村民过河)；
2.观察到桥面有裂缝，栏杆上有污渍；
3.提出让老石桥焕发生机的创新方法。
提示词语：
crack(裂缝)，surface，railing(栏杆)
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
假如你是李华，上周你和同学一起参观了家乡的一座老石桥(old stone bridge)。根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，描述这次活动并谈谈让老石桥焕发生机的想法。
写作提示：
1.了解老石桥的历史(建于清代，方便村民过河)；
2.观察到桥面有裂缝，栏杆上有污渍；
3.提出让老石桥焕发生机的创新方法。
提示词语：
crack(裂缝)，surface，railing(栏杆)
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Hello everyone! Today I want to share something about the old stone bridge in my hometown. The old stone bridge was built in the Qing Dynasty, and it was used to help villagers cross the river. It has stood there for over 200 years and is a special memory for local people.
Last week, I visited it with my classmates. When we walked on the bridge, we saw cracks on the surface and dirty marks on the railings. Those dirty marks might be left by careless people, so we should care for it.
To bring this old stone bridge to life, we can paint its past stories on nearby walls and put up protection signs.
Protecting it is protecting our hometown's memories. Let's protect it for future people to see.
答案
Hello everyone! Today I want to share something about the old stone bridge in my hometown. The old stone bridge was built in the Qing Dynasty, and it was used to help villagers cross the river. It has stood there for over 200 years and is a special memory for local people.
Last week, I visited it with my classmates. When we walked on the bridge, we saw cracks on the surface and dirty marks on the railings. Those dirty marks might be left by careless people, so we should care for it.
To bring this old stone bridge to life, we can paint its past stories on nearby walls and put up protection signs. Protecting it is protecting our hometown's memories. Let's protect it for future people to see.
Last week, I visited it with my classmates. When we walked on the bridge, we saw cracks on the surface and dirty marks on the railings. Those dirty marks might be left by careless people, so we should care for it.
To bring this old stone bridge to life, we can paint its past stories on nearby walls and put up protection signs. Protecting it is protecting our hometown's memories. Let's protect it for future people to see.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作身份为李华，需围绕三个核心要点完成写作：一是介绍老石桥的历史（建于清代，用于方便村民过河）；二是描述上周和同学参观时观察到的现状（桥面有裂缝、栏杆有污渍）；三是提出让老石桥焕发生机的创新方法（如在附近墙面绘制其历史故事、设置保护标识）。同时要注意词数80左右，不得出现真实姓名和校名，语言需简洁通顺，符合英语短文写作的基本要求。
【解析】
第一步，开篇引出话题，分享家乡老石桥的相关情况；第二步，说明老石桥的建造时间（清代）及最初用途（帮助村民过河）；第三步，描述上周和同学参观时发现的问题（桥面有裂缝、栏杆有污渍）；第四步，提出创新保护方法（在附近墙面绘制其历史故事、设置保护标识），最后升华主题，强调保护老石桥的意义，完成写作任务。
【答案】
Hello everyone! Today I want to share something about the old stone bridge in my hometown. The old stone bridge was built in the Qing Dynasty, and it was used to help villagers cross the river. It has stood there for over 200 years and is a special memory for local people.
Last week, I visited it with my classmates. When we walked on the bridge, we saw cracks on the surface and dirty marks on the railings. Those dirty marks might be left by careless people, so we should care for it.
To bring this old stone bridge to life, we can paint its past stories on nearby walls and put up protection signs. Protecting it is protecting our hometown's memories. Let's protect it for future people to see.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】
该短文紧扣写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，准确运用提示词汇，符合词数要求，有效完成了描述活动及提出建议的任务，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作身份为李华，需围绕三个核心要点完成写作：一是介绍老石桥的历史（建于清代，用于方便村民过河）；二是描述上周和同学参观时观察到的现状（桥面有裂缝、栏杆有污渍）；三是提出让老石桥焕发生机的创新方法（如在附近墙面绘制其历史故事、设置保护标识）。同时要注意词数80左右，不得出现真实姓名和校名，语言需简洁通顺，符合英语短文写作的基本要求。
【解析】
第一步，开篇引出话题，分享家乡老石桥的相关情况；第二步，说明老石桥的建造时间（清代）及最初用途（帮助村民过河）；第三步，描述上周和同学参观时发现的问题（桥面有裂缝、栏杆有污渍）；第四步，提出创新保护方法（在附近墙面绘制其历史故事、设置保护标识），最后升华主题，强调保护老石桥的意义，完成写作任务。
【答案】
Hello everyone! Today I want to share something about the old stone bridge in my hometown. The old stone bridge was built in the Qing Dynasty, and it was used to help villagers cross the river. It has stood there for over 200 years and is a special memory for local people.
Last week, I visited it with my classmates. When we walked on the bridge, we saw cracks on the surface and dirty marks on the railings. Those dirty marks might be left by careless people, so we should care for it.
To bring this old stone bridge to life, we can paint its past stories on nearby walls and put up protection signs. Protecting it is protecting our hometown's memories. Let's protect it for future people to see.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】
该短文紧扣写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，准确运用提示词汇，符合词数要求，有效完成了描述活动及提出建议的任务，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
