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王梅的英国朋友 Jenny 去了一所新学校，遇到了一些问题，她向王梅寻求帮助。下面是 Jenny 发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
I have some problems now. I came to my new school one month ago, but I don't have any friends. And I also have some trouble with my schoolwork. I don't know what to do. Can you give me some suggestions?
要求：词数80~100。
审题指导：1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第一人称和第二人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems①.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with② your classmates more often to let them get to know you. ⑥ What's more③, join a club or take part in④ some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. ⑦ It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of⑤ your time. ⑧
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
亮点词块
①how to solve the problems 怎么解决问题
②communicate with 和……交流
③what's more 而且
④take part in 参加
⑤make full use of 充分利用
高分句子
⑥...to let them get to know you.（不定式结构作目的状语）……来让他们认识你。
⑦ It can not only help you solve your problems but also...（not only...but also 连接并列动词短语）它不仅可以帮助你解决你的问题，还能……
⑧...because it can help you make full use of your time.（because 引导的原因状语从句）……因为它可以帮助你充分利用你的时间。
王梅的英国朋友 Jenny 去了一所新学校，遇到了一些问题，她向王梅寻求帮助。下面是 Jenny 发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
I have some problems now. I came to my new school one month ago, but I don't have any friends. And I also have some trouble with my schoolwork. I don't know what to do. Can you give me some suggestions?
要求：词数80~100。
审题指导：1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第一人称和第二人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems①.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with② your classmates more often to let them get to know you. ⑥ What's more③, join a club or take part in④ some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. ⑦ It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of⑤ your time. ⑧
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
亮点词块
①how to solve the problems 怎么解决问题
②communicate with 和……交流
③what's more 而且
④take part in 参加
⑤make full use of 充分利用
高分句子
⑥...to let them get to know you.（不定式结构作目的状语）……来让他们认识你。
⑦ It can not only help you solve your problems but also...（not only...but also 连接并列动词短语）它不仅可以帮助你解决你的问题，还能……
⑧...because it can help you make full use of your time.（because 引导的原因状语从句）……因为它可以帮助你充分利用你的时间。
答案
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What's more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What's more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以王梅的名义给Jenny写建议信。首先需明确体裁是建议类书信，时态用一般现在时，人称结合第一人称（提建议）和第二人称（针对Jenny的问题）；其次要紧扣Jenny的两个核心问题（无朋友、学业有困难），分点给出具体可行的建议；还要运用指定的亮点词块和高分句式，控制词数在80~100之间，语言需得体自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：先表达收到邮件的高兴，安抚Jenny的情绪，引出要给出的建议；
2. 解决交友问题：建议Jenny多和同学交流（用不定式表目的），还可参加社团或活动，帮助认识更多人；
3. 解决学业问题：建议Jenny向同学或老师求助，说明该方法的双重好处，再补充制定学习计划的重要性（用原因状语从句）；
4. 结尾：表达希望建议有用，按书信格式署名。
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What's more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、建议类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，针对Jenny的两个问题给出具体可行的建议，结构清晰，运用了不定式、not only...but also、原因状语从句等高分句式，语言得体自然，符合词数要求，是优秀的建议信范例。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以王梅的名义给Jenny写建议信。首先需明确体裁是建议类书信，时态用一般现在时，人称结合第一人称（提建议）和第二人称（针对Jenny的问题）；其次要紧扣Jenny的两个核心问题（无朋友、学业有困难），分点给出具体可行的建议；还要运用指定的亮点词块和高分句式，控制词数在80~100之间，语言需得体自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：先表达收到邮件的高兴，安抚Jenny的情绪，引出要给出的建议；
2. 解决交友问题：建议Jenny多和同学交流（用不定式表目的），还可参加社团或活动，帮助认识更多人；
3. 解决学业问题：建议Jenny向同学或老师求助，说明该方法的双重好处，再补充制定学习计划的重要性（用原因状语从句）；
4. 结尾：表达希望建议有用，按书信格式署名。
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear from you. Don't worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What's more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. It's best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、建议类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，针对Jenny的两个问题给出具体可行的建议，结构清晰，运用了不定式、not only...but also、原因状语从句等高分句式，语言得体自然，符合词数要求，是优秀的建议信范例。
【难度系数】
0.3
