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Ⅳ. Think and write.
Your school radio station will have a column called “Travel Stories”. Please write an article about your unforgettable holiday experience. The following questions may help you.
• Where did you go?
• What did you do?
• How did you feel?
• What did you learn?
Your school radio station will have a column called “Travel Stories”. Please write an article about your unforgettable holiday experience. The following questions may help you.
• Where did you go?
• What did you do?
• How did you feel?
• What did you learn?
答案
One possible version:
My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya
Last summer, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was an amazing holiday.
We flew there. The first day, we went to the beach. The sea was blue and the sand was soft. I built sandcastles with my dad and swam in the sea. It was so exciting! We also ate lots of fresh seafood, like shrimp and fish. They were delicious. Then, we visited a coconut farm. The farmer taught us how to pick coconuts and opened one for us to drink the sweet juice. It was my first time trying fresh coconut, and I loved it. During this trip, I felt really happy and relaxed.
I learnt that travelling is a great way to see new things and try different foods. I hope I can go to more places in the future.
My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya
Last summer, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was an amazing holiday.
We flew there. The first day, we went to the beach. The sea was blue and the sand was soft. I built sandcastles with my dad and swam in the sea. It was so exciting! We also ate lots of fresh seafood, like shrimp and fish. They were delicious. Then, we visited a coconut farm. The farmer taught us how to pick coconuts and opened one for us to drink the sweet juice. It was my first time trying fresh coconut, and I loved it. During this trip, I felt really happy and relaxed.
I learnt that travelling is a great way to see new things and try different foods. I hope I can go to more places in the future.
解析
【分析】本题要求撰写一篇用于学校电台“旅行故事”栏目的英语短文，主题是难忘的假期经历，需围绕“去哪、做了什么、感受、学到什么”四个问题展开，核心考查一般过去时的运用和记叙文写作能力。解题思路：先选定具体的假期地点，再按逻辑顺序梳理经历，对应四个问题补充细节，全程使用一般过去时，最后点明感悟，确保文章结构完整、内容生动真实。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 拟定标题，明确主题（如My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya）；2. 开篇交代时间、人物与事件（去年夏天和父母去三亚）；3. 主体部分按顺序叙述经历：写交通方式、海滩活动（堆沙堡、游泳）、美食（海鲜）、参观椰子园的细节，对应“做了什么”；4. 表达具体感受（开心、放松）；5. 结尾点明学到的内容（旅行能见识新事物、尝试新食物）；6. 运用一般过去时，加入细节描写（如海水蓝、沙子软、椰子汁甜）让内容更生动。
【答案】One possible version:
My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya
Last summer, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was an amazing holiday.
We flew there. The first day, we went to the beach. The sea was blue and the sand was soft. I built sandcastles with my dad and swam in the sea. It was so exciting! We also ate lots of fresh seafood, like shrimp and fish. They were delicious. Then, we visited a coconut farm. The farmer taught us how to pick coconuts and opened one for us to drink the sweet juice. It was my first time trying fresh coconut, and I loved it. During this trip, I felt really happy and relaxed.
I learnt that travelling is a great way to see new things and try different foods. I hope I can go to more places in the future.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用一般过去时描述假期经历的英语写作能力，要求内容具体、情感真实，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，能有效锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 拟定标题，明确主题（如My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya）；2. 开篇交代时间、人物与事件（去年夏天和父母去三亚）；3. 主体部分按顺序叙述经历：写交通方式、海滩活动（堆沙堡、游泳）、美食（海鲜）、参观椰子园的细节，对应“做了什么”；4. 表达具体感受（开心、放松）；5. 结尾点明学到的内容（旅行能见识新事物、尝试新食物）；6. 运用一般过去时，加入细节描写（如海水蓝、沙子软、椰子汁甜）让内容更生动。
【答案】One possible version:
My Unforgettable Trip to Sanya
Last summer, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was an amazing holiday.
We flew there. The first day, we went to the beach. The sea was blue and the sand was soft. I built sandcastles with my dad and swam in the sea. It was so exciting! We also ate lots of fresh seafood, like shrimp and fish. They were delicious. Then, we visited a coconut farm. The farmer taught us how to pick coconuts and opened one for us to drink the sweet juice. It was my first time trying fresh coconut, and I loved it. During this trip, I felt really happy and relaxed.
I learnt that travelling is a great way to see new things and try different foods. I hope I can go to more places in the future.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用一般过去时描述假期经历的英语写作能力，要求内容具体、情感真实，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，能有效锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
