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Ⅵ. Writing（作文）
71. Write an email of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格）
假设你是Li Hua，你所在的学校计划举行一次“校园环境改进行动（Campus Improvement Action）”，鼓励学生向学校管理部门提出实际问题并给出可行建议。你决定写一封电子邮件给负责校园管理的Mr. Wang反映情况并寻求帮助。
注意：1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Wang,
All the best!
Li Hua
71. Write an email of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格）
假设你是Li Hua，你所在的学校计划举行一次“校园环境改进行动（Campus Improvement Action）”，鼓励学生向学校管理部门提出实际问题并给出可行建议。你决定写一封电子邮件给负责校园管理的Mr. Wang反映情况并寻求帮助。
注意：1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm writing to report several problems on our campus and to offer some suggestions for the Campus Improvement Action. Recently, I noticed that the rubbish in some areas is not sorted properly, and a few classroom lights are still broken, which makes it difficult for students to study.
To solve these problems, I suggest adding clearer signs for waste sorting and arranging regular checks on classroom equipment. It may also help to set up a student volunteer group to assist with daily management.
I hope the school can take action soon. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
答案
71. One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm writing to report several problems on our campus and to offer some suggestions for the Campus Improvement Action. Recently, I noticed that the rubbish in some areas is not sorted properly, and a few classroom lights are still broken, which makes it difficult for students to study.
To solve these problems, I suggest adding clearer signs for waste sorting and arranging regular checks on classroom equipment. It may also help to set up a student volunteer group to assist with daily management.
I hope the school can take action soon. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm writing to report several problems on our campus and to offer some suggestions for the Campus Improvement Action. Recently, I noticed that the rubbish in some areas is not sorted properly, and a few classroom lights are still broken, which makes it difficult for students to study.
To solve these problems, I suggest adding clearer signs for waste sorting and arranging regular checks on classroom equipment. It may also help to set up a student volunteer group to assist with daily management.
I hope the school can take action soon. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封符合要求的电子邮件，属于校园改进行动的反馈类应用文写作。解题思路：1. 遵循标准邮件格式（称呼、正文、结尾问候、落款）；2. 正文需明确写信目的（响应校园改进行动，反映校园问题并提建议）；3. 列举2-3个真实的校园具体问题；4. 针对问题给出可行建议；5. 结尾表达期待与感谢，确保字数达标，不出现个人信息、不抄袭阅读语篇。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：称呼Dear Mr. Wang，点明写信背景（校园改进行动）和核心目的（反馈校园问题、提建议）；2. 正文第一段：具体举例校园问题（如垃圾未分类、教室灯损坏）；3. 正文第二段：针对问题给出对应可行建议（增设分类标识、定期检查设备、成立学生志愿组）；4. 结尾：表达希望学校行动的意愿，感谢并期待回复；5. 落款All the best! Li Hua，确保内容连贯、符合邮件规范，字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm writing to report several problems on our campus and to offer some suggestions for the Campus Improvement Action. Recently, I noticed that the rubbish in some areas is not sorted properly, and a few classroom lights are still broken, which makes it difficult for students to study.
To solve these problems, I suggest adding clearer signs for waste sorting and arranging regular checks on classroom equipment. It may also help to set up a student volunteer group to assist with daily management.
I hope the school can take action soon. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】
本题结合学生校园实际情境，考查实用英语写作能力，要求内容贴合主题、结构清晰、语言准确，符合邮件格式，能有效检验学生运用英语解决实际问题的能力，是贴近学生生活的典型写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封符合要求的电子邮件，属于校园改进行动的反馈类应用文写作。解题思路：1. 遵循标准邮件格式（称呼、正文、结尾问候、落款）；2. 正文需明确写信目的（响应校园改进行动，反映校园问题并提建议）；3. 列举2-3个真实的校园具体问题；4. 针对问题给出可行建议；5. 结尾表达期待与感谢，确保字数达标，不出现个人信息、不抄袭阅读语篇。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：称呼Dear Mr. Wang，点明写信背景（校园改进行动）和核心目的（反馈校园问题、提建议）；2. 正文第一段：具体举例校园问题（如垃圾未分类、教室灯损坏）；3. 正文第二段：针对问题给出对应可行建议（增设分类标识、定期检查设备、成立学生志愿组）；4. 结尾：表达希望学校行动的意愿，感谢并期待回复；5. 落款All the best! Li Hua，确保内容连贯、符合邮件规范，字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm writing to report several problems on our campus and to offer some suggestions for the Campus Improvement Action. Recently, I noticed that the rubbish in some areas is not sorted properly, and a few classroom lights are still broken, which makes it difficult for students to study.
To solve these problems, I suggest adding clearer signs for waste sorting and arranging regular checks on classroom equipment. It may also help to set up a student volunteer group to assist with daily management.
I hope the school can take action soon. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】
本题结合学生校园实际情境，考查实用英语写作能力，要求内容贴合主题、结构清晰、语言准确，符合邮件格式，能有效检验学生运用英语解决实际问题的能力，是贴近学生生活的典型写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
