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(2025·江苏连云港期中改编)在这个充满挑战与机遇的时代，奥运精神不仅是体育竞技中的灯塔，更是我们每个人人生旅途中的宝贵指南。亲爱的同学们，让我们将奥运精神内化于心，外化于行。在学习上追求卓越，在生活中勇于挑战，在团队中团结协作，在世界上传递和平与友谊。让我们以奥运之名，书写属于自己的精彩篇章，共同创造更加辉煌的未来！请根据要点提示，以“The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most”为题写一则演讲稿。
【要点】
【要求】
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，语法正确。
2.要点齐全，适当拓展。
3.不少于90词，不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等相关信息。
(2025·江苏连云港期中改编)在这个充满挑战与机遇的时代，奥运精神不仅是体育竞技中的灯塔，更是我们每个人人生旅途中的宝贵指南。亲爱的同学们，让我们将奥运精神内化于心，外化于行。在学习上追求卓越，在生活中勇于挑战，在团队中团结协作，在世界上传递和平与友谊。让我们以奥运之名，书写属于自己的精彩篇章，共同创造更加辉煌的未来！请根据要点提示，以“The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most”为题写一则演讲稿。
【要点】
【要求】
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，语法正确。
2.要点齐全，适当拓展。
3.不少于90词，不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等相关信息。
答案
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
Dear classmates,
Today my topic is "The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most".
In my opinion, the Olympic spirit is not only about winning medals in competitions. It also stands for the courage to challenge ourselves, the determination to never give up and the power of teamwork. It is not far away from our daily life, and it guides every step of our growth. It tells me that the value of the fight lies in the process of trying my best, not just the final result.
The Olympic spirit of never giving up has influenced me most. I used to be poor at long-distance running, and I nearly gave up when I failed my running test again. I thought of many Olympic athletes who kept training hard even after getting serious injuries, then I kept practicing running for 20 minutes every day after school. Finally I got a full mark in the PE exam. Now whenever I meet difficult problems in my study, I will never back down easily.
Let's put the Olympic spirit into our daily life, and create our own wonderful future together!
That's all. Thank you!
Dear classmates,
Today my topic is "The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most".
In my opinion, the Olympic spirit is not only about winning medals in competitions. It also stands for the courage to challenge ourselves, the determination to never give up and the power of teamwork. It is not far away from our daily life, and it guides every step of our growth. It tells me that the value of the fight lies in the process of trying my best, not just the final result.
The Olympic spirit of never giving up has influenced me most. I used to be poor at long-distance running, and I nearly gave up when I failed my running test again. I thought of many Olympic athletes who kept training hard even after getting serious injuries, then I kept practicing running for 20 minutes every day after school. Finally I got a full mark in the PE exam. Now whenever I meet difficult problems in my study, I will never back down easily.
Let's put the Olympic spirit into our daily life, and create our own wonderful future together!
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求以演讲稿形式围绕“影响自己最深的奥运精神”展开，需遵循思维导图的四个要点：先明确奥运精神的内涵，再确定影响最深的具体精神，结合个人经历说明其影响，最后呼应主题。解题思路：1. 采用演讲稿格式，开头点明主题，结尾致谢；2. 阐述奥运精神的多元内涵，打破“仅赢奖牌”的认知；3. 选定“永不放弃”作为影响最深的奥运精神，结合自身长跑测试的真实事例（失败→受奥运运动员启发→坚持训练→成功）；4. 说明该精神对学习、生活的后续影响，确保内容连贯、要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 格式规范：使用演讲稿的标准结构，开头称呼“Dear classmates”，结尾致谢“That's all. Thank you!”；2. 内容构建：① 开篇引出演讲主题，点明奥运精神不仅是竞技奖牌，更是挑战自我、永不放弃、团队协作的成长指引；② 明确“永不放弃”是影响自己最深的奥运精神；③ 结合个人经历：曾长跑成绩差，多次测试失败想放弃，受奥运运动员坚持训练的启发，每天坚持练习，最终通过体育考试，现在学习中遇困难不退缩；④ 结尾呼吁将奥运精神融入日常，创造精彩未来；3. 语言要求：语句通顺，语法正确，适当拓展，确保不少于90词，无真实姓名、校名等信息。
【答案】
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
Dear classmates,
Today my topic is "The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most".
In my opinion, the Olympic spirit is not only about winning medals in competitions. It also stands for the courage to challenge ourselves, the determination to never give up and the power of teamwork. It is not far away from our daily life, and it guides every step of our growth. It tells me that the value of the fight lies in the process of trying my best, not just the final result.
The Olympic spirit of never giving up has influenced me most. I used to be poor at long-distance running, and I nearly gave up when I failed my running test again. I thought of many Olympic athletes who kept training hard even after getting serious injuries, then I kept practicing running for 20 minutes every day after school. Finally I got a full mark in the PE exam. Now whenever I meet difficult problems in my study, I will never back down easily.
Let's put the Olympic spirit into our daily life, and create our own wonderful future together!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、奥运精神内涵、个人经历叙述
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，以具体事例支撑观点，语言通顺流畅，符合演讲稿格式要求，准确传达了奥运精神对个人成长的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作要求以演讲稿形式围绕“影响自己最深的奥运精神”展开，需遵循思维导图的四个要点：先明确奥运精神的内涵，再确定影响最深的具体精神，结合个人经历说明其影响，最后呼应主题。解题思路：1. 采用演讲稿格式，开头点明主题，结尾致谢；2. 阐述奥运精神的多元内涵，打破“仅赢奖牌”的认知；3. 选定“永不放弃”作为影响最深的奥运精神，结合自身长跑测试的真实事例（失败→受奥运运动员启发→坚持训练→成功）；4. 说明该精神对学习、生活的后续影响，确保内容连贯、要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 格式规范：使用演讲稿的标准结构，开头称呼“Dear classmates”，结尾致谢“That's all. Thank you!”；2. 内容构建：① 开篇引出演讲主题，点明奥运精神不仅是竞技奖牌，更是挑战自我、永不放弃、团队协作的成长指引；② 明确“永不放弃”是影响自己最深的奥运精神；③ 结合个人经历：曾长跑成绩差，多次测试失败想放弃，受奥运运动员坚持训练的启发，每天坚持练习，最终通过体育考试，现在学习中遇困难不退缩；④ 结尾呼吁将奥运精神融入日常，创造精彩未来；3. 语言要求：语句通顺，语法正确，适当拓展，确保不少于90词，无真实姓名、校名等信息。
【答案】
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
Dear classmates,
Today my topic is "The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most".
In my opinion, the Olympic spirit is not only about winning medals in competitions. It also stands for the courage to challenge ourselves, the determination to never give up and the power of teamwork. It is not far away from our daily life, and it guides every step of our growth. It tells me that the value of the fight lies in the process of trying my best, not just the final result.
The Olympic spirit of never giving up has influenced me most. I used to be poor at long-distance running, and I nearly gave up when I failed my running test again. I thought of many Olympic athletes who kept training hard even after getting serious injuries, then I kept practicing running for 20 minutes every day after school. Finally I got a full mark in the PE exam. Now whenever I meet difficult problems in my study, I will never back down easily.
Let's put the Olympic spirit into our daily life, and create our own wonderful future together!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、奥运精神内涵、个人经历叙述
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，以具体事例支撑观点，语言通顺流畅，符合演讲稿格式要求，准确传达了奥运精神对个人成长的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
