八、书面表达
假如你是莉莉(Lily),你将参加校园广播台举办的“Colourful school life”系列征文。请根据以下要点,写一篇不少于80词的文章。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1. 你最好的朋友(外貌、品质及你对友谊的理解);
2. 你的学习经历(遇到的困难及解决的方法);
3. 你参加的校园俱乐部及其活动(举一例即可)。
Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
假如你是莉莉(Lily),你将参加校园广播台举办的“Colourful school life”系列征文。请根据以下要点,写一篇不少于80词的文章。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1. 你最好的朋友(外貌、品质及你对友谊的理解);
2. 你的学习经历(遇到的困难及解决的方法);
3. 你参加的校园俱乐部及其活动(举一例即可)。
Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
答案
Sample writing:
Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
My best friend is Anna. She has short black hair and a cheerful smile. She is hard-working and always encourages me when I feel down. I think friendship means being there for each other and sharing both happy and difficult times.
In my studies, I once found English grammar very challenging. I couldn't understand some rules at first. To improve myself in this respect, I started practising more, asked my teacher for help and used online resources. Slowly, I became more confident.
I'm also a member of the school's Music Club. Last month, we performed at the School Art Festival and I played the piano. It was an exciting experience to share my passion with others.
My school life is full of growth, fun and unforgettable memories!
Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
My best friend is Anna. She has short black hair and a cheerful smile. She is hard-working and always encourages me when I feel down. I think friendship means being there for each other and sharing both happy and difficult times.
In my studies, I once found English grammar very challenging. I couldn't understand some rules at first. To improve myself in this respect, I started practising more, asked my teacher for help and used online resources. Slowly, I became more confident.
I'm also a member of the school's Music Club. Last month, we performed at the School Art Festival and I played the piano. It was an exciting experience to share my passion with others.
My school life is full of growth, fun and unforgettable memories!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“Colourful school life”,需根据给定的三个要点完成征文(开头已给出)。解题思路:1. 紧扣三个核心要点:①描述最好的朋友的外貌、品质并表达对友谊的理解;②讲述学习中遇到的困难及解决方法;③介绍参加的校园俱乐部及活动(举一例);2. 注意词数要求(不少于80词,开头不计入),语言需通顺自然,符合初中生英语表达水平,确保所有要点都覆盖。
【解析】写作时按要点分段:第一段写最好的朋友:介绍朋友Anna的外貌(短黑发、开朗的笑容),品质(努力、在自己低落时鼓励自己),并点明对友谊的理解(互相陪伴、分享喜怒哀乐);第二段写学习经历:以英语语法困难为例,说明解决方法(多练习、请教老师、利用在线资源),最终变得自信;第三段写校园俱乐部:加入音乐俱乐部,举例上个月在校园艺术节表演钢琴,最后总结校园生活的美好,呼应主题。
【答案】Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
My best friend is Anna. She has short black hair and a cheerful smile. She is hard-working and always encourages me when I feel down. I think friendship means being there for each other and sharing both happy and difficult times.
In my studies, I once found English grammar very challenging. I couldn't understand some rules at first. To improve myself in this respect, I started practising more, asked my teacher for help and used online resources. Slowly, I became more confident.
I'm also a member of the school's Music Club. Last month, we performed at the School Art Festival and I played the piano. It was an exciting experience to share my passion with others.
My school life is full of growth, fun and unforgettable memories!
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、校园主题应用文
【点评】本文紧扣“Colourful school life”主题,全面覆盖题目要求的三个要点,语言流畅自然,有具体事例支撑,符合初中生英语写作要求,是一篇优秀的校园征文范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时按要点分段:第一段写最好的朋友:介绍朋友Anna的外貌(短黑发、开朗的笑容),品质(努力、在自己低落时鼓励自己),并点明对友谊的理解(互相陪伴、分享喜怒哀乐);第二段写学习经历:以英语语法困难为例,说明解决方法(多练习、请教老师、利用在线资源),最终变得自信;第三段写校园俱乐部:加入音乐俱乐部,举例上个月在校园艺术节表演钢琴,最后总结校园生活的美好,呼应主题。
【答案】Colourful school life
My school is such a wonderful place for me to study, and I really enjoy the colourful school life here.
My best friend is Anna. She has short black hair and a cheerful smile. She is hard-working and always encourages me when I feel down. I think friendship means being there for each other and sharing both happy and difficult times.
In my studies, I once found English grammar very challenging. I couldn't understand some rules at first. To improve myself in this respect, I started practising more, asked my teacher for help and used online resources. Slowly, I became more confident.
I'm also a member of the school's Music Club. Last month, we performed at the School Art Festival and I played the piano. It was an exciting experience to share my passion with others.
My school life is full of growth, fun and unforgettable memories!
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、校园主题应用文
【点评】本文紧扣“Colourful school life”主题,全面覆盖题目要求的三个要点,语言流畅自然,有具体事例支撑,符合初中生英语写作要求,是一篇优秀的校园征文范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】0.7
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