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一 Read and write. 书面表达。
同学们,本单元我们学习了如何介绍自己的旅行经历,描述旅行活动。通过本单元的学习,我们能掌握部分不规则动词过去时的变化形式。你有过难忘的旅行经历吗?请以此为主题写一篇短文。
写作指导:
My trip to Beijing was great. You should visit there./I want to go there again.
开头
A Nice Tr
中间
We walked around the Palace Museum ... We visited the Great Wall ... We ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We took many photos there.
结尾
同学们,本单元我们学习了如何介绍自己的旅行经历,描述旅行活动。通过本单元的学习,我们能掌握部分不规则动词过去时的变化形式。你有过难忘的旅行经历吗?请以此为主题写一篇短文。
写作指导:
My trip to Beijing was great. You should visit there./I want to go there again.
开头
A Nice Tr
中间
We walked around the Palace Museum ... We visited the Great Wall ... We ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We took many photos there.
结尾
答案
参考范文：
A Nice Trip
My trip to Beijing was great. I went there with my parents last summer holiday.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. It is very big and there are many old interesting things in it. The next day, we visited the Great Wall. We climbed the wall and saw the beautiful view far away. We ate Beijing Roast Duck for dinner, it was delicious. We also took many lovely photos during the trip.
I had a wonderful time in Beijing. I want to go there again.
A Nice Trip
My trip to Beijing was great. I went there with my parents last summer holiday.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. It is very big and there are many old interesting things in it. The next day, we visited the Great Wall. We climbed the wall and saw the beautiful view far away. We ate Beijing Roast Duck for dinner, it was delicious. We also took many lovely photos during the trip.
I had a wonderful time in Beijing. I want to go there again.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以“A Nice Trip”为主题，结合给定的思维导图（开头、中间、结尾的要点）完成短文写作。解题思路：1. 明确文章结构，开头用给定语句“My trip to Beijing was great.”引出主题，补充简单背景（如同行者、时间）；2. 中间部分将给定的旅行活动（逛故宫、爬长城、吃烤鸭、拍照）展开，添加少量细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾用给定语句“I want to go there again.”总结感受，呼应主题，确保语句通顺、符合语法。
【解析】
写作时遵循思维导图结构：①开头：点明旅行主题，补充简单背景（如和父母去年暑假去的）；②中间：依次描述逛故宫、爬长城、吃烤鸭、拍照的经历，适当添加细节（如故宫有很多有趣的老东西，长城风景很美）；③结尾：表达对北京旅行的喜爱，写出再去的愿望，完成短文。
【答案】
A Nice Trip
My trip to Beijing was great. I went there with my parents last summer holiday.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. It is very big and there are many old interesting things in it. The next day, we visited the Great Wall. We climbed the wall and saw the beautiful view far away. We ate Beijing Roast Duck for dinner, it was delicious. We also took many lovely photos during the trip.
I had a wonderful time in Beijing. I want to go there again.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、旅行话题词汇、不规则动词过去式
【点评】
本题结合思维导图降低写作难度，要求学生掌握旅行经历的描述方法，合理运用单元所学的不规则动词过去式，结构清晰，内容贴合给定要点，是巩固单元知识的典型写作题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以“A Nice Trip”为主题，结合给定的思维导图（开头、中间、结尾的要点）完成短文写作。解题思路：1. 明确文章结构，开头用给定语句“My trip to Beijing was great.”引出主题，补充简单背景（如同行者、时间）；2. 中间部分将给定的旅行活动（逛故宫、爬长城、吃烤鸭、拍照）展开，添加少量细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾用给定语句“I want to go there again.”总结感受，呼应主题，确保语句通顺、符合语法。
【解析】
写作时遵循思维导图结构：①开头：点明旅行主题，补充简单背景（如和父母去年暑假去的）；②中间：依次描述逛故宫、爬长城、吃烤鸭、拍照的经历，适当添加细节（如故宫有很多有趣的老东西，长城风景很美）；③结尾：表达对北京旅行的喜爱，写出再去的愿望，完成短文。
【答案】
A Nice Trip
My trip to Beijing was great. I went there with my parents last summer holiday.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. It is very big and there are many old interesting things in it. The next day, we visited the Great Wall. We climbed the wall and saw the beautiful view far away. We ate Beijing Roast Duck for dinner, it was delicious. We also took many lovely photos during the trip.
I had a wonderful time in Beijing. I want to go there again.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、旅行话题词汇、不规则动词过去式
【点评】
本题结合思维导图降低写作难度，要求学生掌握旅行经历的描述方法，合理运用单元所学的不规则动词过去式，结构清晰，内容贴合给定要点，是巩固单元知识的典型写作题。
【难度系数】
0.3
A Nice Trip to Beijing
My trip to Beijing was great. It was sunny.
I walked around the Palace Museum and saw many old things. I learnt a lot. I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was amazing. I ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We took many photos there.
You should go there!
开头介绍活动的地点与人物。可以用一两句话交代天气与环境。
中间讲述发生的故事，按时间顺序叙述过程。
结尾表达自己的感受和心情。
My trip to Beijing was great. It was sunny.
I walked around the Palace Museum and saw many old things. I learnt a lot. I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was amazing. I ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We took many photos there.
You should go there!
开头介绍活动的地点与人物。可以用一两句话交代天气与环境。
中间讲述发生的故事，按时间顺序叙述过程。
结尾表达自己的感受和心情。
答案
A Nice Trip to Beijing
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. The weather there was sunny and comfortable.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. I saw lots of special old things there and learnt a lot about Chinese history. On the second day, I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was really amazing. On the last day, we went to a famous restaurant and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It tasted very delicious. We also took many nice photos during the whole trip.
I had a great time in Beijing. This trip is so wonderful that I will never forget it. You should go there for a visit too!
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. The weather there was sunny and comfortable.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. I saw lots of special old things there and learnt a lot about Chinese history. On the second day, I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was really amazing. On the last day, we went to a famous restaurant and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It tasted very delicious. We also took many nice photos during the whole trip.
I had a great time in Beijing. This trip is so wonderful that I will never forget it. You should go there for a visit too!
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求围绕“北京之旅”展开，需遵循给定结构：开头介绍旅行的时间、人物、地点及天气环境；中间按时间顺序叙述旅行中的具体经历；结尾表达个人感受并给出推荐。解题时需注意使用一般过去时，内容贴合旅行主题，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】首先确定文章时态为一般过去时；开头部分点明旅行的时间（如Last summer holiday）、同行人物（如my parents）、地点（Beijing），描述天气（sunny and comfortable）；中间按时间顺序（first day/second day/last day）依次叙述参观故宫（了解历史）、游览长城（景色惊艳）、品尝北京烤鸭（味道美味）及拍照的经历；结尾表达旅行的愉快感受，强调难忘并推荐他人前往。
【答案】A Nice Trip to Beijing
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. The weather there was sunny and comfortable.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. I saw lots of special old things there and learnt a lot about Chinese history. On the second day, I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was really amazing. On the last day, we went to a famous restaurant and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It tasted very delicious. We also took many nice photos during the whole trip.
I had a great time in Beijing. This trip is so wonderful that I will never forget it. You should go there for a visit too!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题为基础英语写作题，考查学生对旅行类话题的写作结构掌握及一般过去时的运用，要求内容完整、逻辑清晰，适合初中低年级学生巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先确定文章时态为一般过去时；开头部分点明旅行的时间（如Last summer holiday）、同行人物（如my parents）、地点（Beijing），描述天气（sunny and comfortable）；中间按时间顺序（first day/second day/last day）依次叙述参观故宫（了解历史）、游览长城（景色惊艳）、品尝北京烤鸭（味道美味）及拍照的经历；结尾表达旅行的愉快感受，强调难忘并推荐他人前往。
【答案】A Nice Trip to Beijing
Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. The weather there was sunny and comfortable.
On the first day, we walked around the Palace Museum. I saw lots of special old things there and learnt a lot about Chinese history. On the second day, I visited the Great Wall. The view from the wall was really amazing. On the last day, we went to a famous restaurant and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It tasted very delicious. We also took many nice photos during the whole trip.
I had a great time in Beijing. This trip is so wonderful that I will never forget it. You should go there for a visit too!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题为基础英语写作题，考查学生对旅行类话题的写作结构掌握及一般过去时的运用，要求内容完整、逻辑清晰，适合初中低年级学生巩固写作基础。
【难度系数】0.5
【小试身手】
根据所给提示写一篇短文。要求:语句通顺,语法正确,不少于5句话。
My trip to
根据所给提示写一篇短文。要求:语句通顺,语法正确,不少于5句话。
My trip to
Hangzhou
was interesting
!I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake.
I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi.
The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good.
We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
答案
My trip to Hangzhou was interesting! I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake. I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi. The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good. We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题是“一次愉快的旅行”，需依据思维导图的5个提示问题（去了哪里、做了什么、看到了什么、吃了什么、感受如何）组织内容，要求语句通顺、语法正确且不少于5句话。写作时先确定旅行地点，再围绕地点展开描述做的事、看到的景物、吃的美食，最后表达感受，覆盖所有提示要点，使用正确的一般过去时。
【解析】围绕“A Nice Trip”主题，按照“地点+感受→做的事→看到的景物→吃的美食→整体感受”的结构，用一般过去时描述旅行经历，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合要求。具体短文如下：
My trip to Hangzhou was interesting! I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake. I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi. The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good. We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
【答案】My trip to Hangzhou was interesting! I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake. I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi. The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good. We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
【知识点】英语话题写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】本题是旅行主题的写作题，以思维导图为提示，考查学生组织语言描述经历的能力，需结合给定要点串联内容，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】围绕“A Nice Trip”主题，按照“地点+感受→做的事→看到的景物→吃的美食→整体感受”的结构，用一般过去时描述旅行经历，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合要求。具体短文如下：
My trip to Hangzhou was interesting! I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake. I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi. The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good. We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
【答案】My trip to Hangzhou was interesting! I walked around the West Lake for hours. It is a beautiful lake. I climbed the Leifeng Tower and read the story about Bainiangzi. The view from the tower was very amazing! I ate the West Lake Vinegar Fish and drank Longjing tea. They were good. We took many nice photos in Hangzhou. You should go there!
【知识点】英语话题写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】本题是旅行主题的写作题，以思维导图为提示，考查学生组织语言描述经历的能力，需结合给定要点串联内容，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
