根据中文内容要点提示用英文写一篇文章,简要介绍一下中国的国宝(national treasure)——大熊猫(giant panda)。词数70左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
(1)栖息地:中国四川、陕西、甘肃等省份(province)。
(2)体貌特征:黑白相间的皮毛(black and white fur),大眼睛、圆耳朵,身体虽胖但动作敏捷(move nimbly),非常招人喜欢。
(3)喜好:最爱吃竹子(bamboo)。
(4)技能:会爬树(climb trees)、游泳。
(5)数量:现存约2000只,我们须尽力保护好它们。
Giant pandas are China’s national treasure
提示:
(1)栖息地:中国四川、陕西、甘肃等省份(province)。
(2)体貌特征:黑白相间的皮毛(black and white fur),大眼睛、圆耳朵,身体虽胖但动作敏捷(move nimbly),非常招人喜欢。
(3)喜好:最爱吃竹子(bamboo)。
(4)技能:会爬树(climb trees)、游泳。
(5)数量:现存约2000只,我们须尽力保护好它们。
Giant pandas are China’s national treasure
答案
Lesson 5写作专项
One possible version:
Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces and so on. They have black and white fur, big eyes and round ears. Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. They are very cute and most people love them. They like eating bamboo best. Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. They can climb trees and swim. A panda usually lives twenty-five years. There are about 2,000 pandas in the world. We must try our best to protect them.
One possible version:
Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces and so on. They have black and white fur, big eyes and round ears. Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. They are very cute and most people love them. They like eating bamboo best. Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. They can climb trees and swim. A panda usually lives twenty-five years. There are about 2,000 pandas in the world. We must try our best to protect them.
解析
【解析】
根据题目给出的要点,围绕首句依次展开写作:先介绍大熊猫的栖息地,接着描述体貌特征,再说明其喜好、技能,最后提及现存数量并发出保护呼吁。写作时需保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces and so on. They have black and white fur, big eyes and round ears. Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. They are very cute and most people love them. They like eating bamboo best. Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. They can climb trees and swim. There are about 2,000 pandas in the world now. We must try our best to protect them.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、动物类话题表达、句子衔接技巧
【点评】
该范文紧扣所有提示要点,内容完整全面,逻辑清晰,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,既清晰介绍了大熊猫的相关信息,又自然发出保护呼吁,是一篇规范的写作范例。
根据题目给出的要点,围绕首句依次展开写作:先介绍大熊猫的栖息地,接着描述体貌特征,再说明其喜好、技能,最后提及现存数量并发出保护呼吁。写作时需保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces and so on. They have black and white fur, big eyes and round ears. Although they are very fat, they can move nimbly. They are very cute and most people love them. They like eating bamboo best. Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. They can climb trees and swim. There are about 2,000 pandas in the world now. We must try our best to protect them.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、动物类话题表达、句子衔接技巧
【点评】
该范文紧扣所有提示要点,内容完整全面,逻辑清晰,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,既清晰介绍了大熊猫的相关信息,又自然发出保护呼吁,是一篇规范的写作范例。
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