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1.写作任务
如今人们越来越重视健康饮食。某英语报向中学生发起征文活动,主题是“饮食习惯”。请结合下列内容要求和表格,写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
内容要求:(1)你父母的饮食习惯是否健康,请简述理由。
(2)你的饮食习惯是否健康,请简述理由。
(3)请你提出健康饮食的建议。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
(2)词数:不少于80个。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) three people in my family. 我家有三口人。
(2)We have . 我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents eating habits. 我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
(3)My mother wants , so she eats a lot of chicken and fruit.
我妈妈想减肥,所以她吃很多鸡肉和水果。
(4)My eating habit is not healthy because I to eat vegetables.
我的饮食习惯不健康,因为我不喜欢吃蔬菜。
结尾句:
I think we should try to eat lots of fruit and vegetables because they can healthy.
我认为我们应该尽量吃许多水果和蔬菜,因为它们可以使我们变得健康。
名言名句:
(1)An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一个苹果,医生远离我。
(2)One man's meat is another man's poison! 萝卜青菜,各有所爱!
1.写作任务
如今人们越来越重视健康饮食。某英语报向中学生发起征文活动,主题是“饮食习惯”。请结合下列内容要求和表格,写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
内容要求:(1)你父母的饮食习惯是否健康,请简述理由。
(2)你的饮食习惯是否健康,请简述理由。
(3)请你提出健康饮食的建议。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
(2)词数:不少于80个。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) three people in my family. 我家有三口人。
(2)We have . 我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents eating habits. 我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
(3)My mother wants , so she eats a lot of chicken and fruit.
我妈妈想减肥,所以她吃很多鸡肉和水果。
(4)My eating habit is not healthy because I to eat vegetables.
我的饮食习惯不健康,因为我不喜欢吃蔬菜。
结尾句:
I think we should try to eat lots of fruit and vegetables because they can healthy.
我认为我们应该尽量吃许多水果和蔬菜,因为它们可以使我们变得健康。
名言名句:
(1)An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一个苹果,医生远离我。
(2)One man's meat is another man's poison! 萝卜青菜,各有所爱!
答案
第一步:审题 体裁:
$\underline{记叙文}$ 人称: $\underline{第一、三人称}$ 时态: $\underline{一般现在时}$
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) $\mathrm{There}$ $\mathrm{are}$ three people in my family.我家有三口人。
(2)We have $\mathrm{different}$ $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{habits}$.我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents $\mathrm{have}$ $\mathrm{healthy}$ eating habits.我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{vegetables}$ $\mathrm{because}$ they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) $\mathrm{There}$ $\mathrm{are}$ three people in my family.我家有三口人。
(2)We have $\mathrm{different}$ $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{habits}$.我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents $\mathrm{have}$ $\mathrm{healthy}$ eating habits.我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{vegetables}$ $\mathrm{because}$ they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
There are three people in my family. We have different eating habits.
My parents have healthy eating habits. My father likes eating vegetables because they are healthy. My mother wants to lose weight, so she eats a lot of chicken and fruit. However, my eating habit is not healthy because I don't like to eat vegetables. I always eat a lot of meat.
I think we should try to eat lots of fruit and vegetables because they can make us become healthy. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." Let's develop healthy eating habits from now on.
$\underline{记叙文}$ 人称: $\underline{第一、三人称}$ 时态: $\underline{一般现在时}$
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) $\mathrm{There}$ $\mathrm{are}$ three people in my family.我家有三口人。
(2)We have $\mathrm{different}$ $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{habits}$.我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents $\mathrm{have}$ $\mathrm{healthy}$ eating habits.我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{vegetables}$ $\mathrm{because}$ they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) $\mathrm{There}$ $\mathrm{are}$ three people in my family.我家有三口人。
(2)We have $\mathrm{different}$ $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{habits}$.我们有不同的饮食习惯。
中间句:
(1)My parents $\mathrm{have}$ $\mathrm{healthy}$ eating habits.我父母有健康的饮食习惯。
(2)My father likes $\mathrm{eating}$ $\mathrm{vegetables}$ $\mathrm{because}$ they are healthy.
我爸爸喜欢吃蔬菜,因为它们很健康。
There are three people in my family. We have different eating habits.
My parents have healthy eating habits. My father likes eating vegetables because they are healthy. My mother wants to lose weight, so she eats a lot of chicken and fruit. However, my eating habit is not healthy because I don't like to eat vegetables. I always eat a lot of meat.
I think we should try to eat lots of fruit and vegetables because they can make us become healthy. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." Let's develop healthy eating habits from now on.
