六、书面表达。
同学们,丰富多彩的校园生活一定给你们留下了许多美好的回忆。请选择一件令你印象深刻的事情,以下面四个问题为提示写一篇英语短文,分享自己在这件小事中的成长及感受。
1. What problem did you have?
2. How did you feel at first?
3. What did you do to deal with the problem?
4. How did you feel in the end?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含四个问题的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名或校名;
3. 词数70个左右。
同学们,丰富多彩的校园生活一定给你们留下了许多美好的回忆。请选择一件令你印象深刻的事情,以下面四个问题为提示写一篇英语短文,分享自己在这件小事中的成长及感受。
1. What problem did you have?
2. How did you feel at first?
3. What did you do to deal with the problem?
4. How did you feel in the end?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含四个问题的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名或校名;
3. 词数70个左右。
答案
Many interesting things took place in my junior high school. But I can't forget the problem I met when I first came to this new school. I didn't have any friends at first and I was lonely. I asked my headteacher for help. She advised me to join the story-telling club. And I tried to be brave there. I said hello to others and asked about their favorite stories. In the end, I made two new friends there. We shared stories and had fun together. I felt very happy.
解析
【分析】写作时需紧扣题目要求,围绕四个提示问题展开:首先确定校园中印象深刻的事件(如刚入新校的交友问题);其次依次对应四个问题:明确遇到的问题(无朋友)、最初感受(孤独)、解决办法(向老师求助,加入讲故事俱乐部并主动交流)、最终感受(开心并收获友谊);最后控制词数在70左右,不出现真实信息,适当补充细节使内容连贯。
【解析】按照分析思路,用英语组织内容,依次回应四个提示要点:开头引出难忘的校园事件,说明遇到的问题与最初感受,接着讲述解决问题的具体做法,最后点明最终感受与成长,确保语句通顺、要点齐全,符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】Many interesting things took place in my junior high school. But I can't forget the problem I met when I first came to this new school. I didn't have any friends at first and I was lonely. I asked my headteacher for help. She advised me to join the story-telling club. And I tried to be brave there. I said hello to others and asked about their favorite stories. In the end, I made two new friends there. We shared stories and had fun together. I felt very happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目四个提示要点,结构清晰,叙事完整,体现了校园生活中的成长,语言简洁流畅,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照分析思路,用英语组织内容,依次回应四个提示要点:开头引出难忘的校园事件,说明遇到的问题与最初感受,接着讲述解决问题的具体做法,最后点明最终感受与成长,确保语句通顺、要点齐全,符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】Many interesting things took place in my junior high school. But I can't forget the problem I met when I first came to this new school. I didn't have any friends at first and I was lonely. I asked my headteacher for help. She advised me to join the story-telling club. And I tried to be brave there. I said hello to others and asked about their favorite stories. In the end, I made two new friends there. We shared stories and had fun together. I felt very happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目四个提示要点,结构清晰,叙事完整,体现了校园生活中的成长,语言简洁流畅,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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