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假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“A Life Choice That Shaped Me”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇不少于100词的短文投稿。
【要点】(1) What is the choice? (2) Why did you make this choice? (3) What did you do to stick to the choice? (4) What do you think of the choice?
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 追随本心
2. 坚持选择
3. 值得付出努力
重点句子
开头句：Life is full of small and big choices, but there is one choice I made three years ago which is so meaningful that it has shaped who I am today. 人生充满了大大小小的选择，但三年前我做出的一个选择，意义重大，以至于塑造了今天的我。
中间句：I kept writing English diaries every day so that I could improve my writing skills and stay focused on my goal. 我坚持每天写英语日记，以便提高我的写作能力，并始终专注于我的目标。
结尾句：This choice has taught me that every small step for what I believe in can lead to meaningful changes. 这个选择教会我，为信仰迈出的每一小步，都能带来有意义的改变。
【美文欣赏】
A Life Choice That Shaped Me
I have made an unusual life choice that truly shaped who I am today: to devote myself to environmental protection, even though it means stepping out of my comfort zone.
I made this choice because I have always loved nature and felt worried about the pollution around me. I wanted to make a real difference, not just talk about it. My parents would rather I focused only on my schoolwork wholeheartedly, but I wanted more. To stick to my choice, I volunteer at a local nature reserve every weekend, helping to clean up rivers and plant trees. I also take online courses to learn how to operate high-tech tools for environmental research. It is hard work, but I know it is worth the effort. Surprisingly, my small actions have inspired some classmates to join me, which makes me feel proud.
This choice has taught me that every meaningful dream requires courage and hard work. I will never regret choosing this path because it has made me more confident and purposeful.
【小试牛刀】
你校正在开展以“An Important Choice I’ve Made”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。
【要点】(1) The choice you made; (2) The story about your choice; (3) The influence of your choice (how it changed you or others).
【要求】(1) 须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；(2) 不得出现与你相关的真实信息；(3) 不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Important Choice I’ve Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that an important choice I’ve made is
假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“A Life Choice That Shaped Me”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇不少于100词的短文投稿。
【要点】(1) What is the choice? (2) Why did you make this choice? (3) What did you do to stick to the choice? (4) What do you think of the choice?
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 追随本心
2. 坚持选择
3. 值得付出努力
重点句子
开头句：Life is full of small and big choices, but there is one choice I made three years ago which is so meaningful that it has shaped who I am today. 人生充满了大大小小的选择，但三年前我做出的一个选择，意义重大，以至于塑造了今天的我。
中间句：I kept writing English diaries every day so that I could improve my writing skills and stay focused on my goal. 我坚持每天写英语日记，以便提高我的写作能力，并始终专注于我的目标。
结尾句：This choice has taught me that every small step for what I believe in can lead to meaningful changes. 这个选择教会我，为信仰迈出的每一小步，都能带来有意义的改变。
【美文欣赏】
A Life Choice That Shaped Me
I have made an unusual life choice that truly shaped who I am today: to devote myself to environmental protection, even though it means stepping out of my comfort zone.
I made this choice because I have always loved nature and felt worried about the pollution around me. I wanted to make a real difference, not just talk about it. My parents would rather I focused only on my schoolwork wholeheartedly, but I wanted more. To stick to my choice, I volunteer at a local nature reserve every weekend, helping to clean up rivers and plant trees. I also take online courses to learn how to operate high-tech tools for environmental research. It is hard work, but I know it is worth the effort. Surprisingly, my small actions have inspired some classmates to join me, which makes me feel proud.
This choice has taught me that every meaningful dream requires courage and hard work. I will never regret choosing this path because it has made me more confident and purposeful.
【小试牛刀】
你校正在开展以“An Important Choice I’ve Made”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。
【要点】(1) The choice you made; (2) The story about your choice; (3) The influence of your choice (how it changed you or others).
【要求】(1) 须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；(2) 不得出现与你相关的真实信息；(3) 不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Important Choice I’ve Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that an important choice I’ve made is
答案
【审题要领】
人生选择;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.follow one's heart 2.stick to one's choice
3.be worth the effort
【小试牛刀】
An Important Choice I've Made
Life is full of choices,big or small.Some are easy,while others require careful thought.Looking back,I find that an important choice I've made is to face setbacks bravely rather than give up halfway.
Once I struggled badly with my English.Long articles and difficult grammar left me feeling upset.I even wanted to give up completely.Yet I knew escaping from my problems would never help.I made up my mind to pull myself together and make a change.I got up early each morning to learn vocabulary,listened carefully in every lesson and took detailed notes.Whenever I came across difficult points,I asked my teachers and classmates for advice.I kept practising steadily every single day.
This choice has changed me greatly.Not only have my English results improved,but I've also learnt the value of perseverance.I've come to realise that if we stick to the right choice and keep trying,we will finally grow into a better person.(共138词)
人生选择;第一人称;一般过去时和一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.follow one's heart 2.stick to one's choice
3.be worth the effort
【小试牛刀】
An Important Choice I've Made
Life is full of choices,big or small.Some are easy,while others require careful thought.Looking back,I find that an important choice I've made is to face setbacks bravely rather than give up halfway.
Once I struggled badly with my English.Long articles and difficult grammar left me feeling upset.I even wanted to give up completely.Yet I knew escaping from my problems would never help.I made up my mind to pull myself together and make a change.I got up early each morning to learn vocabulary,listened carefully in every lesson and took detailed notes.Whenever I came across difficult points,I asked my teachers and classmates for advice.I kept practising steadily every single day.
This choice has changed me greatly.Not only have my English results improved,but I've also learnt the value of perseverance.I've come to realise that if we stick to the right choice and keep trying,we will finally grow into a better person.(共138词)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题，主题是“An Important Choice I’ve Made”，需覆盖三个核心要点：明确自己做出的重要选择、叙述该选择的相关故事（缘由与过程）、说明选择带来的影响。写作时需注意：使用第一人称，时态结合一般过去时（讲述过去的经历）与一般现在时（阐述当下影响），字数不少于90词，不得出现真实信息，可适当发挥，同时运用积累的短语提升表达。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 补全开头的核心选择：明确写出自己的重要选择（如面对挫折不放弃）；2. 叙述选择的故事：结合具体事例（如英语学习遇困想放弃，后决定坚持），描述选择的缘由、困境及坚持的具体行动；3. 阐述选择的影响：从自身变化（如成绩提升、学会坚持）等方面说明改变；4. 检查要点完整性、字数及语言通顺度，确保符合要求。
【答案】
An Important Choice I’ve Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that an important choice I’ve made is to face setbacks bravely rather than give up halfway.
Once I struggled badly with my English. Long articles and difficult grammar left me feeling upset. I even wanted to give up completely. Yet I knew escaping from my problems would never help. I made up my mind to pull myself together and make a change. I got up early each morning to learn vocabulary, listened carefully in every lesson and took detailed notes. Whenever I came across difficult points, I asked my teachers and classmates for advice. I kept practising steadily every single day.
This choice has changed me greatly. Not only have my English results improved, but I've also learnt the value of perseverance. I've come to realise that if we stick to the right choice and keep trying, we will finally grow into a better person.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，要点式写作，时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，以具体事例支撑内容，语言流畅自然，恰当运用积累的短语，准确传达选择的意义，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语征文写作题，主题是“An Important Choice I’ve Made”，需覆盖三个核心要点：明确自己做出的重要选择、叙述该选择的相关故事（缘由与过程）、说明选择带来的影响。写作时需注意：使用第一人称，时态结合一般过去时（讲述过去的经历）与一般现在时（阐述当下影响），字数不少于90词，不得出现真实信息，可适当发挥，同时运用积累的短语提升表达。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 补全开头的核心选择：明确写出自己的重要选择（如面对挫折不放弃）；2. 叙述选择的故事：结合具体事例（如英语学习遇困想放弃，后决定坚持），描述选择的缘由、困境及坚持的具体行动；3. 阐述选择的影响：从自身变化（如成绩提升、学会坚持）等方面说明改变；4. 检查要点完整性、字数及语言通顺度，确保符合要求。
【答案】
An Important Choice I’ve Made
Life is full of choices, big or small. Some are easy, while others require careful thought. Looking back, I find that an important choice I’ve made is to face setbacks bravely rather than give up halfway.
Once I struggled badly with my English. Long articles and difficult grammar left me feeling upset. I even wanted to give up completely. Yet I knew escaping from my problems would never help. I made up my mind to pull myself together and make a change. I got up early each morning to learn vocabulary, listened carefully in every lesson and took detailed notes. Whenever I came across difficult points, I asked my teachers and classmates for advice. I kept practising steadily every single day.
This choice has changed me greatly. Not only have my English results improved, but I've also learnt the value of perseverance. I've come to realise that if we stick to the right choice and keep trying, we will finally grow into a better person.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，要点式写作，时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，以具体事例支撑内容，语言流畅自然，恰当运用积累的短语，准确传达选择的意义，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
