五、书面表达
动物园需要志愿者录制一段介绍小熊猫的视频配音。请你根据下面的提示,以第一人称的口吻写一篇英语短文,为视频配音做准备。

要求:(1)包含提示内容,语句通顺,行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
【背诵佳句】
1. As a red panda, I boast a fluffy coat that blends shades of russet and
动物园需要志愿者录制一段介绍小熊猫的视频配音。请你根据下面的提示,以第一人称的口吻写一篇英语短文,为视频配音做准备。
要求:(1)包含提示内容,语句通顺,行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
【背诵佳句】
1. As a red panda, I boast a fluffy coat that blends shades of russet and
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite. There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
(87 words)
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite. There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
(87 words)
解析
【分析】本题要求以第一人称口吻写介绍小熊猫的英语短文,需涵盖提示中的外貌、颜色、性格、生活习性、饮食、数量、节日等所有信息,语句通顺连贯,80词左右,开头已给出。解题时先梳理所有提示要点,再用第一人称将要点转化为符合英语表达习惯的句子,注意语法正确、行文自然,最后检查是否覆盖全部要求内容。
【解析】承接开头,依次介绍小熊猫的外貌:I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. 颜色:I have reddish brown fur. 性格:I'm shy and quiet. 生活习性:I sleep in the day and look for food at night. 饮食:Bamboo leaves are my favourite. 数量:There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China. 节日:The third Saturday of every September is International Red Panda Day. 调整语句使连贯,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite. There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
(87 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物介绍写作
【点评】该作文以第一人称口吻,完整覆盖所有提示信息,语言通顺自然,语法正确,符合词数要求,还加入呼吁内容增强感染力,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】承接开头,依次介绍小熊猫的外貌:I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. 颜色:I have reddish brown fur. 性格:I'm shy and quiet. 生活习性:I sleep in the day and look for food at night. 饮食:Bamboo leaves are my favourite. 数量:There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China. 节日:The third Saturday of every September is International Red Panda Day. 调整语句使连贯,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite. There are only about 3,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
(87 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物介绍写作
【点评】该作文以第一人称口吻,完整覆盖所有提示信息,语言通顺自然,语法正确,符合词数要求,还加入呼吁内容增强感染力,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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