51. 假设你是李华,读完上文作者暑假去旅行的故事后,你十分向往去旅行。趁着假期和朋友们开启了一次旅行,你的美国笔友May对此很感兴趣,请你写一封电子邮件,和她分享这次经历。要点如下:
(1)出行方式及到达时间:介绍你们的交通方式、抵达目的地的时间;
(2)旅行中的活动:介绍沿途打卡的美食和景点等;
(3)旅行感受:总结这次旅行中你的感受等。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
(1)出行方式及到达时间:介绍你们的交通方式、抵达目的地的时间;
(2)旅行中的活动:介绍沿途打卡的美食和景点等;
(3)旅行感受:总结这次旅行中你的感受等。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
答案
51. 参考范文:
Dear May,
How is it going? You want to know about my trip during the holidays. Now I'll tell you about it.
I went on a trip to Beijing with my friends. We went there by train and arrived there on 17th July. At first, we went to the hotel we booked before to have a rest. Then we went to eat Beijing roast duck, which was really delicious. The next day, it was very fine, so we visited the Great Wall. It is a symbol of China. On the third day, we went to a few museums. There we learnt a lot about the city.
All in all, I was tired but happy. I like Beijing. I hope to visit Beijing with you one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear May,
How is it going? You want to know about my trip during the holidays. Now I'll tell you about it.
I went on a trip to Beijing with my friends. We went there by train and arrived there on 17th July. At first, we went to the hotel we booked before to have a rest. Then we went to eat Beijing roast duck, which was really delicious. The next day, it was very fine, so we visited the Great Wall. It is a symbol of China. On the third day, we went to a few museums. There we learnt a lot about the city.
All in all, I was tired but happy. I like Beijing. I hope to visit Beijing with you one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封电子邮件分享假期旅行经历。解题思路:①明确邮件格式(称呼、问候、正文、署名);②紧扣三个要点:说明交通方式与到达时间、介绍旅行中的美食和景点、总结旅行感受;③控制词数80左右,避免真实信息,保证语句连贯。
【解析】按照邮件格式,开头问候后点明分享旅行;依次说明交通方式(乘火车)、到达时间(7月17日);接着讲述旅行活动:先休整,品尝北京烤鸭,游览长城、参观博物馆;最后总结感受(累但开心),表达对北京的喜爱及邀请笔友同游,调整语句使内容连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear May,
How is it going? You want to know about my trip during the holidays. Now I'll tell you about it.
I went on a trip to Beijing with my friends. We went there by train and arrived there on 17th July. At first, we went to the hotel we booked before to have a rest. Then we went to eat Beijing roast duck, which was really delicious. The next day, it was very fine, so we visited the Great Wall. It is a symbol of China. On the third day, we went to a few museums. There we learnt a lot about the city.
All in all, I was tired but happy. I like Beijing. I hope to visit Beijing with you one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、旅行话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语实用写作能力,围绕指定要点组织邮件内容,兼顾格式规范与语言连贯性,是初中英语常见写作题型,注重语言的实际运用。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照邮件格式,开头问候后点明分享旅行;依次说明交通方式(乘火车)、到达时间(7月17日);接着讲述旅行活动:先休整,品尝北京烤鸭,游览长城、参观博物馆;最后总结感受(累但开心),表达对北京的喜爱及邀请笔友同游,调整语句使内容连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear May,
How is it going? You want to know about my trip during the holidays. Now I'll tell you about it.
I went on a trip to Beijing with my friends. We went there by train and arrived there on 17th July. At first, we went to the hotel we booked before to have a rest. Then we went to eat Beijing roast duck, which was really delicious. The next day, it was very fine, so we visited the Great Wall. It is a symbol of China. On the third day, we went to a few museums. There we learnt a lot about the city.
All in all, I was tired but happy. I like Beijing. I hope to visit Beijing with you one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、旅行话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语实用写作能力,围绕指定要点组织邮件内容,兼顾格式规范与语言连贯性,是初中英语常见写作题型,注重语言的实际运用。
【难度系数】0.6
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