九、书面表达。
明智地管理好自己的金钱对每个人都很重要。请你写几条关于明智地存钱和花钱的小贴士,提醒大家。不少于5句话。开头句已给出,不计入总句数。
Here are my tips for saving and spending money wisely.
明智地管理好自己的金钱对每个人都很重要。请你写几条关于明智地存钱和花钱的小贴士,提醒大家。不少于5句话。开头句已给出,不计入总句数。
Here are my tips for saving and spending money wisely.
答案
First, you can save at least 20% of your pocket money every month, and put it in your piggy bank. Second, make a shopping list before you go shopping, and only buy the things you really need. Third, don't spend all your money on junk food or useless toys that you will soon throw away. Fourth, you can help your parents do some housework to get pocket money, so you will know it is not easy to make money. Fifth, if you want to buy an expensive item, wait for a few days, and you may find you don't really want it at all. Sixth, you can use a small part of your money to help people in need, and it will make your money more meaningful.
解析
【分析】
本题为话题类英语书面表达,要求围绕“明智存钱与花钱”给出实用小贴士,开头句已提供,需完成不少于5句话的内容。解题思路:首先紧扣主题,选取贴合学生生活的具体建议(如储蓄零花钱、制定购物计划等);其次采用分点表述使内容条理清晰;最后确保句子通顺、逻辑连贯,符合英语表达习惯,满足句数要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意:1. 围绕“明智存钱和花钱”主题,选取具体可行的建议,如储蓄比例、购物清单、避免无用消费等;2. 采用分点形式呈现,使内容清晰易懂;3. 确保句子通顺,衔接开头自然,不少于5句话。
【答案】
First, you can save at least 20% of your pocket money every month, and put it in your piggy bank. Second, make a shopping list before you go shopping, and only buy the things you really need. Third, don't spend all your money on junk food or useless toys that you will soon throw away. Fourth, you can help your parents do some housework to get pocket money, so you will know it is not easy to make money. Fifth, if you want to buy an expensive item, wait for a few days, and you may find you don't really want it at all. Sixth, you can use a small part of your money to help people in need, and it will make your money more meaningful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、实用建议类写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题,选取的建议贴合学生日常,分点清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁易懂,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇优秀的话题类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为话题类英语书面表达,要求围绕“明智存钱与花钱”给出实用小贴士,开头句已提供,需完成不少于5句话的内容。解题思路:首先紧扣主题,选取贴合学生生活的具体建议(如储蓄零花钱、制定购物计划等);其次采用分点表述使内容条理清晰;最后确保句子通顺、逻辑连贯,符合英语表达习惯,满足句数要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意:1. 围绕“明智存钱和花钱”主题,选取具体可行的建议,如储蓄比例、购物清单、避免无用消费等;2. 采用分点形式呈现,使内容清晰易懂;3. 确保句子通顺,衔接开头自然,不少于5句话。
【答案】
First, you can save at least 20% of your pocket money every month, and put it in your piggy bank. Second, make a shopping list before you go shopping, and only buy the things you really need. Third, don't spend all your money on junk food or useless toys that you will soon throw away. Fourth, you can help your parents do some housework to get pocket money, so you will know it is not easy to make money. Fifth, if you want to buy an expensive item, wait for a few days, and you may find you don't really want it at all. Sixth, you can use a small part of your money to help people in need, and it will make your money more meaningful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、实用建议类写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题,选取的建议贴合学生日常,分点清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁易懂,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇优秀的话题类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
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