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七、书面表达(满分35分)
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 这个餐厅在购物中心旁边,而且占地面积超过300平方米。
This restaurant is
67. 我的卧室在一楼,这是属于我自己的房间。
My bedroom
68. 在周末,我们通常去公园搭帐篷或者去湖边钓鱼。
At the weekend, we usually
69. 我住在城镇东南角的一个小村舍里。
70. 中秋节在中国农历八月十五。
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 这个餐厅在购物中心旁边,而且占地面积超过300平方米。
This restaurant is
next to
the shopping centre and has an area of over 300 square metres
.67. 我的卧室在一楼,这是属于我自己的房间。
My bedroom
is on the ground floor
and this is a room of my own
.68. 在周末,我们通常去公园搭帐篷或者去湖边钓鱼。
At the weekend, we usually
put up a tent
in the park or go fishing
by the lake.69. 我住在城镇东南角的一个小村舍里。
I live in a cottage in the south-east corner of the town.
70. 中秋节在中国农历八月十五。
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar.
答案
A)句子翻译
66. next to; an area of over 300 square metres
67. is on the ground floor; of my own
68. put up a tent; go fishing
69. I live in a cottage in the south-east corner of the town.
70. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar.
66. next to; an area of over 300 square metres
67. is on the ground floor; of my own
68. put up a tent; go fishing
69. I live in a cottage in the south-east corner of the town.
70. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar.
解析
【分析】
这是初中英语基础句子翻译题型，分为半开放填空翻译和全整句翻译两类，解题时首先要对应中文提示匹配教材所学的固定短语，注意时态、名词数的变化、英语表达语序的规则：1. 先看挖空题，逐空对应中文含义，回忆对应的核心短语，比如“在…旁边”“搭帐篷”这类课本重点搭配；2. 整句翻译题先拆分中文句子成分，把主干（主谓宾）先写出来，再把地点、时间类的状语放到对应位置，符合英语“先主后状”的表达习惯，避免逐字硬翻的错误，同时注意节日、方位类的固定规范表达。
【解析】
66. 第一空对应中文“在购物中心旁边”，填入方位固定短语next to；第二空对应“占地面积超过300平方米”，固定结构have an area of表示“占地面积为…”，“超过”用over，300后接metre的复数形式square metres，因此填入an area of over 300 square metres。
67. 第一空对应中文“我的卧室在一楼”，主语My bedroom是单数，be动词用is，表达在某楼层用介词on，教材常用英式表达“一楼”为the ground floor，因此填入is on the ground floor；第二空对应“属于我自己的”，固定搭配of my own表示“属于我自己的”，因此填入of my own。
68. 句子为一般现在时，主语是we，谓语用动词原形，第一空对应“搭帐篷”，固定短语put up a tent；第二空对应“去钓鱼”，固定搭配go fishing。
69. 梳理句子成分：主语I，谓语live in，宾语a cottage，地点状语“城镇的东南角”译为in the south-east corner of the town，按英语语序组合即可。
70. 梳理句子成分：主语The Mid-Autumn Festival，用fall on表示节日“适逢、在（某日期）”，“中国农历八月十五”译为the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar，组合得到规范句子。
【答案】
66. next to; an area of over 300 square metres
67. is on the ground floor; of my own
68. put up a tent; go fishing
69. I live in a cottage in the south-east corner of the town.
70. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，英语方位表达，节日日期表述
【点评】
本题全部围绕初中英语“地点描述、日常活动、传统节日”单元的核心基础知识点出题，都是课本要求熟记的重点内容，没有偏难怪考点，学生只要平时落实短语背诵，注意主谓一致、名词复数的细节，调整好英语状语的语序就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是初中英语基础句子翻译题型，分为半开放填空翻译和全整句翻译两类，解题时首先要对应中文提示匹配教材所学的固定短语，注意时态、名词数的变化、英语表达语序的规则：1. 先看挖空题，逐空对应中文含义，回忆对应的核心短语，比如“在…旁边”“搭帐篷”这类课本重点搭配；2. 整句翻译题先拆分中文句子成分，把主干（主谓宾）先写出来，再把地点、时间类的状语放到对应位置，符合英语“先主后状”的表达习惯，避免逐字硬翻的错误，同时注意节日、方位类的固定规范表达。
【解析】
66. 第一空对应中文“在购物中心旁边”，填入方位固定短语next to；第二空对应“占地面积超过300平方米”，固定结构have an area of表示“占地面积为…”，“超过”用over，300后接metre的复数形式square metres，因此填入an area of over 300 square metres。
67. 第一空对应中文“我的卧室在一楼”，主语My bedroom是单数，be动词用is，表达在某楼层用介词on，教材常用英式表达“一楼”为the ground floor，因此填入is on the ground floor；第二空对应“属于我自己的”，固定搭配of my own表示“属于我自己的”，因此填入of my own。
68. 句子为一般现在时，主语是we，谓语用动词原形，第一空对应“搭帐篷”，固定短语put up a tent；第二空对应“去钓鱼”，固定搭配go fishing。
69. 梳理句子成分：主语I，谓语live in，宾语a cottage，地点状语“城镇的东南角”译为in the south-east corner of the town，按英语语序组合即可。
70. 梳理句子成分：主语The Mid-Autumn Festival，用fall on表示节日“适逢、在（某日期）”，“中国农历八月十五”译为the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar，组合得到规范句子。
【答案】
66. next to; an area of over 300 square metres
67. is on the ground floor; of my own
68. put up a tent; go fishing
69. I live in a cottage in the south-east corner of the town.
70. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th (day) of the eighth month of Chinese lunar calendar.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，英语方位表达，节日日期表述
【点评】
本题全部围绕初中英语“地点描述、日常活动、传统节日”单元的核心基础知识点出题，都是课本要求熟记的重点内容，没有偏难怪考点，学生只要平时落实短语背诵，注意主谓一致、名词复数的细节，调整好英语状语的语序就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
B)写作(满分25分)
假设你是Jack,你刚搬进你的新家,迫不及待地想向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你的家。请根据下列提示,用英语写一封信描绘一下你的新公寓。80词左右。信件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you? It has been a long time since we last heard from each other.
I have good news to tell you. My new flat has just been finished. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
假设你是Jack,你刚搬进你的新家,迫不及待地想向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你的家。请根据下列提示,用英语写一封信描绘一下你的新公寓。80词左右。信件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How are you? It has been a long time since we last heard from each other.
I have good news to tell you. My new flat has just been finished. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My new flat is in the city centre. It's about five minutes' walk from school. There are 32 floors in my building and my flat is on the 17th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. The house is in a modern style with three bedrooms, a living room, a dining room, a bathroom, a kitchen and a big balcony.
I like the balcony best because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I always have to share it with other family members.
I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
答案
B)写作
【审题指导】
本文是一篇材料作文。由于作文主要介绍新家,所以作文时态为一般现在时,主语为第三人称单数。注意在写作的时候运用一些衔接词使得文章表达更加流畅,运用本单元所学的短语、句型更能体现“学以致用”的效果。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 交代写作背景——新家最近刚刚装修完毕；
第二步 介绍新家的楼层、面积和布局；
第三步 介绍最喜爱之处和不满意之处。
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you? It has been a long time since we last heard from each other.
I have good news to tell you. My new flat has just been finished. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My new flat is in the city centre. It's about five minutes' walk from school. There are 32 floors in my building and my flat is on the 17th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. The house is in a modern style with three bedrooms, a living room, a dining room, a bathroom, a kitchen and a big balcony.
I like the balcony best because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I always have to share it with other family members.
I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
【审题指导】
本文是一篇材料作文。由于作文主要介绍新家,所以作文时态为一般现在时,主语为第三人称单数。注意在写作的时候运用一些衔接词使得文章表达更加流畅,运用本单元所学的短语、句型更能体现“学以致用”的效果。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 交代写作背景——新家最近刚刚装修完毕；
第二步 介绍新家的楼层、面积和布局；
第三步 介绍最喜爱之处和不满意之处。
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you? It has been a long time since we last heard from each other.
I have good news to tell you. My new flat has just been finished. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My new flat is in the city centre. It's about five minutes' walk from school. There are 32 floors in my building and my flat is on the 17th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. The house is in a modern style with three bedrooms, a living room, a dining room, a bathroom, a kitchen and a big balcony.
I like the balcony best because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I always have to share it with other family members.
I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Jack
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先审题：明确文体是给笔友的书信，写作主题是介绍自己的新公寓，要求覆盖表格给出的全部信息，词数控制在80左右，时态以一般现在时为主，语气要贴合好友交流的轻松自然的风格。接下来梳理所有必写要点避免漏点：首先交代公寓的位置优势，其次说明楼层、面积参数，接着介绍房屋的整体布局风格，之后补充自己喜爱阳台的合理原因，最后自行补充符合生活逻辑的不满意之处。最后把所有要点用通顺的英文搭配少量衔接词串联起来，不要生硬堆砌信息，保证行文流畅符合词数要求即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 承接题干给出的信件开头，先介绍公寓的区位：点明公寓位于市中心，步行到学校仅需5分钟，体现位置的便利性。
2. 接着介绍房屋基础参数：说明楼栋总高32层，自家公寓在17层，总面积120平方米，再介绍房屋是现代风格，布局为三室两厅一厨一卫，还带有一个大阳台。
3. 最后补充个人感受：说明自己最喜欢阳台，补充合理原因比如能在阳台和朋友聊天、眺望城市风景，再补充符合逻辑的不足，比如只有一个卫生间，全家共用早晚使用很不方便，最后衔接题干给出的信件结尾即可。
【答案】
My new flat is in the city centre. It's about five minutes' walk from school. There are 32 floors in my building and my flat is on the 17th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. The house is in a modern style with three bedrooms, a living room, a dining room, a bathroom, a kitchen and a big balcony.
I like the balcony best because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I always have to share it with other family members.
【知识点】
英语书信写作
房屋场景词汇
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于要点提示类的应用文写作，所有核心信息都已经在表格中给出，学生只需要将信息用正确的英文表达串联，补充少量符合逻辑的细节即可完成写作，既考察了本单元关于房屋描述的相关词汇句型的掌握，也锻炼了学生的逻辑表达能力，自行补充优缺点的设置也给了学生一定的发挥空间，避免写作内容千篇一律。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先审题：明确文体是给笔友的书信，写作主题是介绍自己的新公寓，要求覆盖表格给出的全部信息，词数控制在80左右，时态以一般现在时为主，语气要贴合好友交流的轻松自然的风格。接下来梳理所有必写要点避免漏点：首先交代公寓的位置优势，其次说明楼层、面积参数，接着介绍房屋的整体布局风格，之后补充自己喜爱阳台的合理原因，最后自行补充符合生活逻辑的不满意之处。最后把所有要点用通顺的英文搭配少量衔接词串联起来，不要生硬堆砌信息，保证行文流畅符合词数要求即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 承接题干给出的信件开头，先介绍公寓的区位：点明公寓位于市中心，步行到学校仅需5分钟，体现位置的便利性。
2. 接着介绍房屋基础参数：说明楼栋总高32层，自家公寓在17层，总面积120平方米，再介绍房屋是现代风格，布局为三室两厅一厨一卫，还带有一个大阳台。
3. 最后补充个人感受：说明自己最喜欢阳台，补充合理原因比如能在阳台和朋友聊天、眺望城市风景，再补充符合逻辑的不足，比如只有一个卫生间，全家共用早晚使用很不方便，最后衔接题干给出的信件结尾即可。
【答案】
My new flat is in the city centre. It's about five minutes' walk from school. There are 32 floors in my building and my flat is on the 17th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. The house is in a modern style with three bedrooms, a living room, a dining room, a bathroom, a kitchen and a big balcony.
I like the balcony best because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I always have to share it with other family members.
【知识点】
英语书信写作
房屋场景词汇
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于要点提示类的应用文写作，所有核心信息都已经在表格中给出，学生只需要将信息用正确的英文表达串联，补充少量符合逻辑的细节即可完成写作，既考察了本单元关于房屋描述的相关词汇句型的掌握，也锻炼了学生的逻辑表达能力，自行补充优缺点的设置也给了学生一定的发挥空间，避免写作内容千篇一律。
【难度系数】
0.7
