五、书面表达(共20分)
Ⅵ. (A)作为“冰雪城市”的长春,冬天一定会有很多独特之处,请你以李华的身份向你的外国朋友Rick介绍一下长春的冬天,并邀请他来长春游玩。(5分)
要求:1.语言准确,逻辑清晰;
2.不得出现真实的人名及校名;
3.40词左右。
Dear Rick,





Yours,
Li Hua

One possible version:
Dear Rick,
Changchun is my favorite city, it is very cold in winter, and people wear thick down jackets. But it is the dreamy world of ice and snow, like a white painting. The ski resorts and skating rink in Changchun are very modern. Skiing and skating let me experience the feeling of flying. Do you like sugar-coated haws? I hope you can come to Changchun and have a try.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本题是英语书面表达中的书信写作题，要求以李华的身份向外国朋友Rick介绍长春冬天的独特之处并发出游玩邀请，需满足语言准确、逻辑清晰、40词左右、无真实人名校名的要求。解题时需先确定写作核心：介绍长春冬天的寒冷、冰雪特色（如冰雪景观、滑雪滑冰活动）或特色事物（如糖葫蘆），再自然发出邀请，同时控制词数，使用简单准确的英语表达，避免复杂句式。
【解析】写作时，首先点明长春是“冰雪城市”，说明冬天寒冷且有冰雪美景，提及可参与的滑雪滑冰活动，再引出特色美食糖葫蘆，最后发出邀请，确保内容紧扣主题，语言简洁，符合词数要求，逻辑连贯。
【答案】Dear Rick,
Changchun is a famous "ice and snow city". Its winter is very cold with wonderful ice and snow views. We can ski and skate here, and taste delicious sugar-coated haws. I hope you can come to visit Changchun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题介绍类写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，围绕“介绍城市特色并发出邀请”的主题，要求学生运用简单英语传递信息，符合初中英语写作考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5

(B)我们童年时拥有的物品中,一定有一件是自己最喜爱的,它可能是一个礼物、一张照片、一件衣服……请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文短文,介绍你童年时期最喜爱的一件物品,晒晒你童年的美好回忆。不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。(15分)
要点:1. What's it and how long have you had it?
2. Who gave it to you?
3. Why do you like it best?
I'm glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you.

One possible version:
I'm glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it's dressed in my favorite color. It's special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was scared at night because I didn't like the dark. I held my teddy bear when I went to bed. It made me feel safe. It was one of my best friends in my childhood.

【分析】这是一篇英语记叙文写作题，要求围绕童年最喜爱的物品展开，需覆盖三个核心要点：明确物品及拥有时长、说明赠送者、阐述喜爱的原因并结合童年回忆。开头已给出，需衔接自然，运用正确时态（现在完成时表拥有时长，一般过去时叙述过往经历），确保内容充实、词数达标，体现真情实感。
【解析】1. 确定写作对象：选择童年喜爱的泰迪熊（teddy bear）；2. 回应要点1：用现在完成时说明拥有时长，如“I have had it since I was five years old”；3. 回应要点2：说明赠送者为祖母，如“My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday”；4. 回应要点3：从外观（喜欢的颜色）、特殊意义（祖母亲手制作）、具体回忆（夜晚怕黑时陪伴）等角度阐述喜爱原因，结合事例让内容饱满；5. 收尾表达珍视之情，确保总词数不少于80词，语言通顺流畅。
【答案】I'm glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it's dressed in my favorite color. It's special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was scared at night because I didn't like the dark. I held my teddy bear when I went to bed. It made me feel safe. It was one of my best friends in my childhood.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、现在完成时、一般过去时
【点评】该范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容具体详实，情感真挚自然，通过真实的童年事例体现物品的特殊意义，语言通顺，时态运用准确，符合英语写作要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6