2026年通成学典课时作业本六年级英语上册译林版江苏专版第18页答案
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一天,你不小心弄坏了同桌的铅笔,你是怎么处理这件事的?请描述事情经过、你的做法以及你从中明白的道理。
One day, I broke my deskmate's pencil.
I felt very afraid at first and wanted to keep it secret. However, I knew I must be an honest person. I walked up to her and said sorry to her bravely. After that, I repaired the broken pencil carefully. My deskmate was happy and forgave me.
From this thing, I learn that we should always be honest and never tell lies.

答案

参考完整范文如下:
One day, I broke my deskmate's pencil. I felt very afraid at first and wanted to keep it secret.
However, I knew I must be an honest person. I walked up to her and said sorry to her bravely. After that, I repaired the broken pencil carefully. My deskmate was happy and forgave me.
From this thing, I learn that we should always be honest and never tell lies.

解析

这是一篇符合六年级英语写作要求的优秀范文,完全覆盖题目要求的三个写作要点:1. 完整描述了事件经过:不小心弄坏同桌铅笔后一开始害怕想保密,之后鼓起勇气主动认错、修好铅笔,最后得到同桌原谅,叙事逻辑流畅自然;2. 用到的词汇、句式均贴合六年级已学知识点,划线标注的重点表达都是非常实用的加分句型,分别精准写出了自己最初的心理活动、转折过渡引出后续正确行为、最后点明收获的道理,内容情感真挚,没有语法错误,非常适合参考学习。
今天是星期一,你不小心把同桌的笔记本撕坏了,你当时的心情是怎样的?后面又是怎么处理这件事情的?结果如何?请结合以下词汇,发挥想象,写一篇日记记录这件事。不少于5句话。
参考词汇: honest, sorry, truth, afraid, forgive, tell the truth
Monday Sunny
Today something happened to me.
I felt bad at first.
I tore my deskmate's notebook carelessly.

I was very afraid and wanted to hide it.

But I knew I must be honest.

I told her the truth bravely and said sorry to her.

She was very kind and forgave me.





Finally, I know we should be honest all the time.

答案

One possible version:
Monday
Sunny
Today something happened to me.
I felt bad at first. I tore my deskmate's notebook carelessly. I was very afraid and wanted to hide it. But I knew I must be honest. I told her the truth bravely and said sorry to her. She was very kind and forgave me.
Finally, I know we should be honest all the time.