佳作赏析
假如你是丹尼尔(Daniel)，你想给表哥迈克(Mike)写一封邮件，介绍自己和家人在三亚旅游的情况。请你帮他写一写，不少于5句话。
Dear Mike,
How are you?
I am in Sanya now. It is hot and sunny here. I go to the beach(海滩) with my family. I can swim. My
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Dear Mike,
How are you?
I am in Sanya now. It is hot and sunny here. I go to the beach(海滩) with my family. I can swim. My father plays ball games on the beach happily. My mother takes many beautiful photos for us. We also eat sweet fruit and yummy seafood here. We all have a great time these days. I will bring you some lovely sea shells when I go back home.
Yours,
Daniel

【分析】
本题要求以丹尼尔的身份给表哥迈克写一封邮件，介绍在三亚的旅游情况，不少于5句话。解题思路：首先遵循英文邮件的格式（称呼、问候语、正文、署名）；其次围绕“三亚旅游”主题，结合给定开头补充合理内容（如家人的活动、当地美食、游玩感受、给表哥带的小礼物等），确保内容连贯、符合生活实际，句子数量达标。
【解析】
1. 按照英文邮件格式，开头写称呼“Dear Mike”和问候语“How are you?”；
2. 点明自己在三亚的状态，描述当地天气（hot and sunny）；
3. 补充和家人在三亚的具体活动：去海滩、自己游泳、爸爸打球、妈妈拍照、吃当地美食；
4. 表达游玩的愉快感受，提及给表哥带的礼物；
5. 结尾署名“Daniel”，确保内容完整、句子数量符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How are you?
I am in Sanya now. It is hot and sunny here. I go to the beach(海滩) with my family. I can swim. My father plays ball games on the beach happily. My mother takes many beautiful photos for us. We also eat sweet fruit and yummy seafood here. We all have a great time these days. I will bring you some lovely sea shells when I go back home.
Yours,
Daniel
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（邮件）、旅游话题英语表达
【点评】
本题为英语基础写作题，贴近学生生活场景，考查英文邮件格式掌握、主题内容拓展及语言表达能力，要求学生结合给定开头续写，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5

小试身手
请根据丹尼尔（Daniel）给迈克（Mike）的邮件内容和图片提示，帮迈克回一封电子邮件。
要求:1. 包含图片全部信息;2. 字母大、小写及标点符号规范;3. 不少于5句话。

Dear Daniel,
Nice to hear from you.
I am in Nanjing now.






Yours,
Mike

（三）写作专项训练
One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
Nice to hear from you.
I am in Nanjing now. It is windy. I go to the park with my brother. I can fly a kite. My brother can play basketball. We are happy.
Yours,
Mike

【分析】
本题要求根据图片提示完成电子邮件回复，需包含图片所有元素（风、笑脸、公园、风筝、打篮球的男孩），符合邮件格式，不少于5句话。解题思路：1. 承接开头先描述天气（对应图片的风）；2. 说明自己的活动（和哥哥去公园）；3. 分别写自己和哥哥的具体活动（放风筝、打篮球）；4. 表达心情（对应笑脸），确保所有图片信息融入，句子数量达标，格式规范。
【解析】
根据图片元素，结合邮件开头组织语句：先点明天气，再写和哥哥的活动，最后表达心情，确保符合要求。具体内容为：It is windy. I go to the park with my brother. I can fly a kite. My brother can play basketball. We are happy.
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Nice to hear from you.
I am in Nanjing now. It is windy. I go to the park with my brother. I can fly a kite. My brother can play basketball. We are happy.
Yours,
Mike
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作；词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合图片考查英语实用写作，需准确提取图片信息，符合邮件格式，难度适中，适合小学阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6