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近年来，一些游客的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注及讨论。请你向学校网站投稿，根据以下内容，以“Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，呼吁大家做文明游客。
内容包括：1. 做文明游客的重要性；
2. 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰；
3. 礼貌待人，公共场所不大声讲话；
4. 遵守交通规则；
5. ……
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a
civilized tourist. ...
近年来，一些游客的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注及讨论。请你向学校网站投稿，根据以下内容，以“Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，呼吁大家做文明游客。
内容包括：1. 做文明游客的重要性；
2. 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰；
3. 礼貌待人，公共场所不大声讲话；
4. 遵守交通规则；
5. ……
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a
civilized tourist. ...
答案
(五)
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a
civilized tourist. A tourist's behaviour not only shows his/her personal character, but
also shapes his/her country's image on the world stage, so it's our responsibility to
behave properly when travelling.
Here are some of the things we can do. First, don't litter or spit. Remember to
keep the environment clean. Also, we'd better not talk loudly in public. It is
important to treat everyone in a polite way. Wherever we are, keep smiling and say
"Thank you". Those are always well regarded. Besides, make sure that we obey the
traffic rules. Last but not least, never scribble on anything when we go sightseeing.
Tourists' civilized behaviour is also part of the beautiful scenery.
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a
civilized tourist. A tourist's behaviour not only shows his/her personal character, but
also shapes his/her country's image on the world stage, so it's our responsibility to
behave properly when travelling.
Here are some of the things we can do. First, don't litter or spit. Remember to
keep the environment clean. Also, we'd better not talk loudly in public. It is
important to treat everyone in a polite way. Wherever we are, keep smiling and say
"Thank you". Those are always well regarded. Besides, make sure that we obey the
traffic rules. Last but not least, never scribble on anything when we go sightseeing.
Tourists' civilized behaviour is also part of the beautiful scenery.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇呼吁做文明游客的短文，需紧扣题目给出的要点展开。首先，开头要点明做文明游客的重要性，可从个人形象和国家形象两方面切入；接着，分点列出具体做法，对应题目要求的不乱扔垃圾、公共场所礼貌、遵守交通规则等内容，还可补充合理细节；最后，总结文明行为的意义，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头段：点明文明游客的重要性，说明游客行为既体现个人品格，也关乎国家形象，引出呼吁的主题。
2. 主体段：分点阐述具体做法：①不乱扔垃圾、不随地吐痰，保持环境整洁；②公共场所不大声讲话，礼貌待人；③遵守交通规则；④补充不随意涂鸦等细节。
3. 结尾段：总结文明行为是风景的一部分，再次强调做文明游客的意义。
【答案】
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a civilized tourist. A tourist's behaviour not only shows his/her personal character, but also shapes his/her country's image on the world stage, so it's our responsibility to behave properly when travelling.
Here are some of the things we can do. First, don't litter or spit. Remember to keep the environment clean. Also, we'd better not talk loudly in public. It is important to treat everyone in a polite way. Wherever we are, keep smiling and say "Thank you". Those are always well regarded. Besides, make sure that we obey the traffic rules. Last but not least, never scribble on anything when we go sightseeing.
Tourists' civilized behaviour is also part of the beautiful scenery.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言流畅自然，有效传递了呼吁做文明游客的核心思想，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇呼吁做文明游客的短文，需紧扣题目给出的要点展开。首先，开头要点明做文明游客的重要性，可从个人形象和国家形象两方面切入；接着，分点列出具体做法，对应题目要求的不乱扔垃圾、公共场所礼貌、遵守交通规则等内容，还可补充合理细节；最后，总结文明行为的意义，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头段：点明文明游客的重要性，说明游客行为既体现个人品格，也关乎国家形象，引出呼吁的主题。
2. 主体段：分点阐述具体做法：①不乱扔垃圾、不随地吐痰，保持环境整洁；②公共场所不大声讲话，礼貌待人；③遵守交通规则；④补充不随意涂鸦等细节。
3. 结尾段：总结文明行为是风景的一部分，再次强调做文明游客的意义。
【答案】
Be a Civilized Tourist
In recent years, there has been a growing awareness of the importance of being a civilized tourist. A tourist's behaviour not only shows his/her personal character, but also shapes his/her country's image on the world stage, so it's our responsibility to behave properly when travelling.
Here are some of the things we can do. First, don't litter or spit. Remember to keep the environment clean. Also, we'd better not talk loudly in public. It is important to treat everyone in a polite way. Wherever we are, keep smiling and say "Thank you". Those are always well regarded. Besides, make sure that we obey the traffic rules. Last but not least, never scribble on anything when we go sightseeing.
Tourists' civilized behaviour is also part of the beautiful scenery.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言流畅自然，有效传递了呼吁做文明游客的核心思想，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
(六)
假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于玩智能手机，成绩日渐下降。作为好友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封80词左右的email，帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
要点提示：1. 说明玩智能手机的利弊；
2. 建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动；
3. 表达你对小明的期望。
参考词汇：be addicted to (doing)... 沉溺于(做)……
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
...
Yours,
Liu Chang
假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于玩智能手机，成绩日渐下降。作为好友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封80词左右的email，帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
要点提示：1. 说明玩智能手机的利弊；
2. 建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动；
3. 表达你对小明的期望。
参考词汇：be addicted to (doing)... 沉溺于(做)……
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
...
Yours,
Liu Chang
答案
(六)
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
I heard that you spend much time playing with your smartphone. Smartphones are
becoming more and more important in our lives, as they can help us search the
information we need and keep in touch with our friends, anytime, anywhere. But if
you become addicted to it, it'll be harmful to you. It is not only bad for your eyesight
but also has a bad influence on your study.
I think you should take a more active part in different kinds of activities in your free
time rather than always using your phone. We all know you are a smart boy. You are
sure to do better in your study if you spend less time using your phone.
Yours,
Liu Chang
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
I heard that you spend much time playing with your smartphone. Smartphones are
becoming more and more important in our lives, as they can help us search the
information we need and keep in touch with our friends, anytime, anywhere. But if
you become addicted to it, it'll be harmful to you. It is not only bad for your eyesight
but also has a bad influence on your study.
I think you should take a more active part in different kinds of activities in your free
time rather than always using your phone. We all know you are a smart boy. You are
sure to do better in your study if you spend less time using your phone.
Yours,
Liu Chang
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以刘畅的身份给小明写一封80词左右的电子邮件，针对小明沉溺智能手机导致成绩下降的问题，需覆盖三个核心要点：1.说明智能手机的利弊；2.建议课余参加有意义的活动；3.表达对小明的期望。写作时需遵循电子邮件格式，语言通顺，紧扣要点，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头问候并引出话题：点明听说小明花费大量时间玩手机；2. 阐述智能手机的利弊：利处是方便获取信息、联系亲友，弊端是沉溺后损害视力、影响学习；3. 给出具体建议：课余多参与有意义的活动，减少玩手机时间；4. 表达期望：相信小明能调整状态，提升成绩；5. 结尾使用正确的邮件署名格式。
【答案】
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
I heard that you spend much time playing with your smartphone. Smartphones are becoming more and more important in our lives, as they can help us search the information we need and keep in touch with our friends, anytime, anywhere. But if you become addicted to it, it'll be harmful to you. It is not only bad for your eyesight but also has a bad influence on your study.
I think you should take a more active part in different kinds of activities in your free time rather than always using your phone. We all know you are a smart boy. You are sure to do better in your study if you spend less time using your phone.
Yours,
Liu Chang
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，语言通顺自然，准确涵盖了所有要点，符合电子邮件的格式规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以刘畅的身份给小明写一封80词左右的电子邮件，针对小明沉溺智能手机导致成绩下降的问题，需覆盖三个核心要点：1.说明智能手机的利弊；2.建议课余参加有意义的活动；3.表达对小明的期望。写作时需遵循电子邮件格式，语言通顺，紧扣要点，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头问候并引出话题：点明听说小明花费大量时间玩手机；2. 阐述智能手机的利弊：利处是方便获取信息、联系亲友，弊端是沉溺后损害视力、影响学习；3. 给出具体建议：课余多参与有意义的活动，减少玩手机时间；4. 表达期望：相信小明能调整状态，提升成绩；5. 结尾使用正确的邮件署名格式。
【答案】
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
I heard that you spend much time playing with your smartphone. Smartphones are becoming more and more important in our lives, as they can help us search the information we need and keep in touch with our friends, anytime, anywhere. But if you become addicted to it, it'll be harmful to you. It is not only bad for your eyesight but also has a bad influence on your study.
I think you should take a more active part in different kinds of activities in your free time rather than always using your phone. We all know you are a smart boy. You are sure to do better in your study if you spend less time using your phone.
Yours,
Liu Chang
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，语言通顺自然，准确涵盖了所有要点，符合电子邮件的格式规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
(七)
最近，你在班上就“父母能成为我们的朋友吗？”的话题发起了调查。以下是调查结果：
请你就调查数据写一份调查报告，不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our
friends. ...
最近，你在班上就“父母能成为我们的朋友吗？”的话题发起了调查。以下是调查结果：
请你就调查数据写一份调查报告，不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our
friends. ...
答案
(七)
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our
friends. According to the survey, 40% of the students in my class think it impossible
to be friends with their parents, because parents are always too busy to show their
concern. On the other hand, 60% of the students believe they can befriend their
parents. Their parents often talk with them like friends at home.
In my opinion, it is natural for parents and children to be friends as long as they
trust each other. Parents should often talk with their children and be willing to share
their feelings with them.
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our
friends. According to the survey, 40% of the students in my class think it impossible
to be friends with their parents, because parents are always too busy to show their
concern. On the other hand, 60% of the students believe they can befriend their
parents. Their parents often talk with them like friends at home.
In my opinion, it is natural for parents and children to be friends as long as they
trust each other. Parents should often talk with their children and be willing to share
their feelings with them.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定的调查数据写调查报告，开头已给出。解题思路：首先承接开头，准确转述调查的两组数据（40%同学认为父母不能成为朋友及原因、60%同学认为父母能成为朋友及原因）；其次加入自己的观点，说明父母与孩子成为朋友的合理条件，确保内容完整、语言通顺，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用“According to the survey”引出调查结果；2. 分别表述40%同学的观点（不可能）及原因（父母太忙没时间关心），60%同学的观点（可能）及原因（父母常谈心像朋友），注意使用正确句式（如too...to...、like friends）；3. 表达个人看法，说明父母与孩子成为朋友的关键（如相互信任、多交流）；4. 检查词数，确保不少于80词，修正语法错误。
【答案】
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our friends. According to the survey, 40% of the students in my class think it impossible to be friends with their parents, because parents are always too busy to show their concern. On the other hand, 60% of the students believe they can befriend their parents. Their parents often talk with them like friends at home.
In my opinion, it is natural for parents and children to be friends as long as they trust each other. Parents should often talk with their children and be willing to share their feelings with them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，调查报告撰写，观点表达
【点评】
本题以贴近学生生活的话题为载体，要求结合调查数据完成写作，既考查信息转述能力，又考查个人观点表达，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定的调查数据写调查报告，开头已给出。解题思路：首先承接开头，准确转述调查的两组数据（40%同学认为父母不能成为朋友及原因、60%同学认为父母能成为朋友及原因）；其次加入自己的观点，说明父母与孩子成为朋友的合理条件，确保内容完整、语言通顺，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用“According to the survey”引出调查结果；2. 分别表述40%同学的观点（不可能）及原因（父母太忙没时间关心），60%同学的观点（可能）及原因（父母常谈心像朋友），注意使用正确句式（如too...to...、like friends）；3. 表达个人看法，说明父母与孩子成为朋友的关键（如相互信任、多交流）；4. 检查词数，确保不少于80词，修正语法错误。
【答案】
I did a survey on my classmates about their views on whether parents can be our friends. According to the survey, 40% of the students in my class think it impossible to be friends with their parents, because parents are always too busy to show their concern. On the other hand, 60% of the students believe they can befriend their parents. Their parents often talk with them like friends at home.
In my opinion, it is natural for parents and children to be friends as long as they trust each other. Parents should often talk with their children and be willing to share their feelings with them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，调查报告撰写，观点表达
【点评】
本题以贴近学生生活的话题为载体，要求结合调查数据完成写作，既考查信息转述能力，又考查个人观点表达，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
