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四、根据下面的思维导图,进行一次未来24小时各地的天气预报
答案
四、One possible version:
Here is the weather report for the next twenty-four hours.
Harbin will be very cold and the temperature will be minus two degrees in the
early morning. Although it will be cold, it might not be safe to skate on lakes. You
must be very careful because the ice may not be thick enough. Beijing will be rainy
and the temperature will be six to twenty-one degrees. There will be some clouds.
Perhaps it will rain. When you go out, don't forget to take a raincoat with you.
Xi'an will be sunny in the day later on. The temperature will be nine to eighteen
degrees. In Hangzhou, it will be cloudy. There will be a storm later, and it'll be
between seventeen and twenty degrees.
That's all. Thank you.
Here is the weather report for the next twenty-four hours.
Harbin will be very cold and the temperature will be minus two degrees in the
early morning. Although it will be cold, it might not be safe to skate on lakes. You
must be very careful because the ice may not be thick enough. Beijing will be rainy
and the temperature will be six to twenty-one degrees. There will be some clouds.
Perhaps it will rain. When you go out, don't forget to take a raincoat with you.
Xi'an will be sunny in the day later on. The temperature will be nine to eighteen
degrees. In Hangzhou, it will be cloudy. There will be a storm later, and it'll be
between seventeen and twenty degrees.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
这是一道实用类英语情景写作题，解题思路如下：1. 首先确定文体是天气预报，开篇先用标准播报语句点明本次播报的主题是未来24小时的天气情况；2. 按照思维导图给出的四个城市的先后顺序，逐个梳理每个城市对应的所有信息点：哈尔滨的寒冷、-2℃、湖面滑冰不安全，北京的降雨、6-21℃、多云、提醒带雨衣，西安的晴朗、9-18℃，杭州的多云、后续有风暴、17-20℃，将这些信息点用通顺的英文语句串联起来，符合天气预报的口语播报风格；3. 最后用天气预报常规的结束语收尾，完成整篇播报内容，确保所有图中给出的信息都没有遗漏。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起：使用天气预报的标准开头句，直接点明播报的核心内容是未来24小时的天气预报。
2. 分城市逐一播报：
① 哈尔滨部分：说明当地天气寒冷，气温为零下2摄氏度，补充提示在湖面滑冰并不安全，提醒大家注意冰层厚度，规避风险；
② 北京部分：说明当地有降雨，气温区间为6到21摄氏度，伴随多云天气，提醒市民外出时随身携带雨衣；
③ 西安部分：说明当地天气晴朗，气温区间为9到18摄氏度；
④ 杭州部分：说明当地当前为多云天气，后续将迎来风暴，气温区间为17到20摄氏度。
3. 结尾收尾：使用天气预报常用结束语，完成本次播报。
【答案】
One possible version:
Here is the weather report for the next twenty-four hours.
Harbin will be very cold and the temperature will be minus two degrees in the early morning. Although it will be cold, it might not be safe to skate on lakes. You must be very careful because the ice may not be thick enough. Beijing will be rainy and the temperature will be six to twenty-one degrees. There will be some clouds. Perhaps it will rain. When you go out, don't forget to take a raincoat with you. Xi'an will be sunny in the day later on. The temperature will be nine to eighteen degrees. In Hangzhou, it will be cloudy. There will be a storm later, and it'll be between seventeen and twenty degrees.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语天气预报写作，气温英文表达，情景应用文写作
【点评】
本题考察实用文体的写作能力，要求学生完整覆盖思维导图给出的所有天气信息点，同时符合天气预报的播报逻辑和表达习惯，难度适中，既巩固了天气相关的英语词汇，也锻炼了学生将零散信息整合成通顺完整语篇的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道实用类英语情景写作题，解题思路如下：1. 首先确定文体是天气预报，开篇先用标准播报语句点明本次播报的主题是未来24小时的天气情况；2. 按照思维导图给出的四个城市的先后顺序，逐个梳理每个城市对应的所有信息点：哈尔滨的寒冷、-2℃、湖面滑冰不安全，北京的降雨、6-21℃、多云、提醒带雨衣，西安的晴朗、9-18℃，杭州的多云、后续有风暴、17-20℃，将这些信息点用通顺的英文语句串联起来，符合天气预报的口语播报风格；3. 最后用天气预报常规的结束语收尾，完成整篇播报内容，确保所有图中给出的信息都没有遗漏。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起：使用天气预报的标准开头句，直接点明播报的核心内容是未来24小时的天气预报。
2. 分城市逐一播报：
① 哈尔滨部分：说明当地天气寒冷，气温为零下2摄氏度，补充提示在湖面滑冰并不安全，提醒大家注意冰层厚度，规避风险；
② 北京部分：说明当地有降雨，气温区间为6到21摄氏度，伴随多云天气，提醒市民外出时随身携带雨衣；
③ 西安部分：说明当地天气晴朗，气温区间为9到18摄氏度；
④ 杭州部分：说明当地当前为多云天气，后续将迎来风暴，气温区间为17到20摄氏度。
3. 结尾收尾：使用天气预报常用结束语，完成本次播报。
【答案】
One possible version:
Here is the weather report for the next twenty-four hours.
Harbin will be very cold and the temperature will be minus two degrees in the early morning. Although it will be cold, it might not be safe to skate on lakes. You must be very careful because the ice may not be thick enough. Beijing will be rainy and the temperature will be six to twenty-one degrees. There will be some clouds. Perhaps it will rain. When you go out, don't forget to take a raincoat with you. Xi'an will be sunny in the day later on. The temperature will be nine to eighteen degrees. In Hangzhou, it will be cloudy. There will be a storm later, and it'll be between seventeen and twenty degrees.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语天气预报写作，气温英文表达，情景应用文写作
【点评】
本题考察实用文体的写作能力，要求学生完整覆盖思维导图给出的所有天气信息点，同时符合天气预报的播报逻辑和表达习惯，难度适中，既巩固了天气相关的英语词汇，也锻炼了学生将零散信息整合成通顺完整语篇的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
