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Ⅸ. 书面表达。(20分)
(A)在生活中颜色也能影响人。假如你是王华,是一位中学生,你喜欢红色。因为红色代表成功,能给人带来好运。红色使人感到舒服。穿红色衣服的人,显得更漂亮。请根据内容提示,写一篇40词左右的小短文,说明你对颜色的认识。(5分)
写作要求: 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
(A)在生活中颜色也能影响人。假如你是王华,是一位中学生,你喜欢红色。因为红色代表成功,能给人带来好运。红色使人感到舒服。穿红色衣服的人,显得更漂亮。请根据内容提示,写一篇40词左右的小短文,说明你对颜色的认识。(5分)
写作要求: 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
One possible version:
Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. This is because red represents success. It can bring people good luck, too. And it can make people comfortable.
If people wear red clothes, they will look more beautiful. So many people like wearing red skirts or red hats, they will feel warmer. However, different people like different colors.
Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. This is because red represents success. It can bring people good luck, too. And it can make people comfortable.
If people wear red clothes, they will look more beautiful. So many people like wearing red skirts or red hats, they will feel warmer. However, different people like different colors.
答案
One possible version:
Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. This is because red represents success. It can bring people good luck, too. And it can make people comfortable.
If people wear red clothes, they will look more beautiful. So many people like wearing red skirts or red hats, they will feel warmer. However, different people like different colors.
Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. This is because red represents success. It can bring people good luck, too. And it can make people comfortable.
If people wear red clothes, they will look more beautiful. So many people like wearing red skirts or red hats, they will feel warmer. However, different people like different colors.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以中学生王华的身份，围绕“颜色影响人”的主题，介绍自己对红色的喜爱及原因，词数约40词。解题思路：1. 开篇点明身份（王华，中学生）和最喜欢的颜色；2. 依次说明喜欢红色的原因：代表成功、带来好运、让人舒适、穿红色显漂亮；3. 确保语句通顺，紧扣要点，符合字数要求。
【解析】写作时需注意：① 开头介绍身份与喜好：My name is Wang Hua, a middle school student. My favorite color is red. ② 阐述红色的意义与作用：Red represents success, brings good luck and makes people comfortable. Wearing red clothes makes people look more beautiful. ③ 语句连贯，总词数控制在40左右，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version: Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. Red represents success, brings good luck and makes people comfortable. Wearing red clothes makes people look more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、颜色相关表达
【点评】本题为基础书面表达题，考查学生围绕指定主题组织语言的能力，要求紧扣要点，语句通顺，适合初中学生巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时需注意：① 开头介绍身份与喜好：My name is Wang Hua, a middle school student. My favorite color is red. ② 阐述红色的意义与作用：Red represents success, brings good luck and makes people comfortable. Wearing red clothes makes people look more beautiful. ③ 语句连贯，总词数控制在40左右，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version: Colors can affect people. My name is Wang Hua. I'm a middle school student. My favorite color is red. Red represents success, brings good luck and makes people comfortable. Wearing red clothes makes people look more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、颜色相关表达
【点评】本题为基础书面表达题，考查学生围绕指定主题组织语言的能力，要求紧扣要点，语句通顺，适合初中学生巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】0.6
(B)生活中有欢笑、有泪水、有感动、有遗憾,总有让我们记忆深刻的事情。假如你是李玲,请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你自身的经历和感受,以及收获。(15分)
写作要求:1. 语言流畅,意思连贯,层次清晰,语法正确;
2. 用多种句式叙述内心感受,注意时态。
An Unforgettable Experience
写作要求:1. 语言流畅,意思连贯,层次清晰,语法正确;
2. 用多种句式叙述内心感受,注意时态。
An Unforgettable Experience
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
答案
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，围绕自身难忘经历撰写80词左右的短文。解题思路：① 选取贴近学生生活的真实事例（如校园运动会赛事），确保内容具体可写；② 搭建“点题-叙事-感悟”的清晰结构，开篇呼应题干中“生活有各类情绪、总有难忘事”的表述，中间详细叙述经历的起因、经过、结果，结尾点明经历带来的收获；③ 严格遵循写作要求：以一般过去时叙述经历，运用多种句式保证语言流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，首先开篇点题，呼应生活中难忘事物的主题；中间具体叙述二年级参加1000米赛跑的经历：报名参赛、中途疲惫想放弃、同学加油鼓励、坚持完成比赛；结尾点明感悟——坚持的重要性，同时确保语言连贯、语法正确，符合80词左右的篇幅要求。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、英语短文主题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，叙事具体真实，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，通过具体事例体现“难忘”，结尾点明感悟升华主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，围绕自身难忘经历撰写80词左右的短文。解题思路：① 选取贴近学生生活的真实事例（如校园运动会赛事），确保内容具体可写；② 搭建“点题-叙事-感悟”的清晰结构，开篇呼应题干中“生活有各类情绪、总有难忘事”的表述，中间详细叙述经历的起因、经过、结果，结尾点明经历带来的收获；③ 严格遵循写作要求：以一般过去时叙述经历，运用多种句式保证语言流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，首先开篇点题，呼应生活中难忘事物的主题；中间具体叙述二年级参加1000米赛跑的经历：报名参赛、中途疲惫想放弃、同学加油鼓励、坚持完成比赛；结尾点明感悟——坚持的重要性，同时确保语言连贯、语法正确，符合80词左右的篇幅要求。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
Life is full of joys, sorrows, touches and regrets, with unforgettable things always lingering in our minds.
I will never forget the race in Grade Two. I joined a 1000-meter race. I felt tired halfway and wanted to give up. My classmates shouted loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to keep running and finally finished the race. Though I didn't win, I was proud of myself.
This experience taught me that persistence brings success. No matter how hard it is, never give up easily.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、英语短文主题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，叙事具体真实，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，通过具体事例体现“难忘”，结尾点明感悟升华主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
