七、书面表达。
假如你是David,作为交换生来到中国某中学。请根据以下提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一封70词左右的邮件,向她介绍你现在的学校生活。

Dear Linda,
I’d like to tell you something about my new school life.
Best wishes,
David
假如你是David,作为交换生来到中国某中学。请根据以下提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一封70词左右的邮件,向她介绍你现在的学校生活。
Dear Linda,
I’d like to tell you something about my new school life.
Best wishes,
David
答案
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
My new school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise after school on Wednesday afternoon. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I always have a good time here. I like my new school.
Best wishes,
David
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
My new school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise after school on Wednesday afternoon. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I always have a good time here. I like my new school.
Best wishes,
David
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以交换生David的身份给家乡朋友Linda写邮件介绍新学校生活。解题思路:① 承接给定的开头句,围绕表格提供的四个核心维度(学习情况、课外活动、同学关系、个人感受)展开内容;② 每个维度结合具体细节(如学习的课程时间、课外活动的具体内容、同学相处的状态、个人的直观感受),采用一般现在时,保持邮件的亲切语气;③ 控制词数在70左右,确保所有提示信息都被覆盖,语言通顺自然,符合英语邮件的写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接开头后,先介绍学习情况:说明课程时间(如早上7:30上课,每天6节课),提及自己喜欢的科目(如中文,因为能了解中国文化);
2. 接着写课外活动:结合足球(加入校队,周三放学后训练)和读书(从图书馆借书);
3. 然后介绍同学关系:说明有很多新朋友,他们友好,一起聊天、互相帮助;
4. 最后表达个人感受:说明在学校过得开心,喜欢新学校,结尾使用指定的书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
My new school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise after school on Wednesday afternoon. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I always have a good time here. I like my new school.
Best wishes,
David
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定提示信息整合内容、完成英语邮件写作的能力,要求涵盖所有要点,语言符合日常交际习惯,是初中英语常见的书面表达题型,能有效锻炼学生的信息梳理和书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以交换生David的身份给家乡朋友Linda写邮件介绍新学校生活。解题思路:① 承接给定的开头句,围绕表格提供的四个核心维度(学习情况、课外活动、同学关系、个人感受)展开内容;② 每个维度结合具体细节(如学习的课程时间、课外活动的具体内容、同学相处的状态、个人的直观感受),采用一般现在时,保持邮件的亲切语气;③ 控制词数在70左右,确保所有提示信息都被覆盖,语言通顺自然,符合英语邮件的写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接开头后,先介绍学习情况:说明课程时间(如早上7:30上课,每天6节课),提及自己喜欢的科目(如中文,因为能了解中国文化);
2. 接着写课外活动:结合足球(加入校队,周三放学后训练)和读书(从图书馆借书);
3. 然后介绍同学关系:说明有很多新朋友,他们友好,一起聊天、互相帮助;
4. 最后表达个人感受:说明在学校过得开心,喜欢新学校,结尾使用指定的书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
My new school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise after school on Wednesday afternoon. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I always have a good time here. I like my new school.
Best wishes,
David
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定提示信息整合内容、完成英语邮件写作的能力,要求涵盖所有要点,语言符合日常交际习惯,是初中英语常见的书面表达题型,能有效锻炼学生的信息梳理和书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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