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Ⅵ. Writing（作文）
71. Write a report of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的报告，标点符号不占格）
学校近期对本校学生在上学日的睡眠情况进行了问卷调查。请你作为校报编辑Li Hua，根据图表内容写一篇题为“A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits”的英文报告。报告必须包含以下内容：
1）简要描述柱状图所呈现的结果。
2）针对调查结果提出改善建议，并说明理由。
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits
71. Write a report of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的报告，标点符号不占格）
学校近期对本校学生在上学日的睡眠情况进行了问卷调查。请你作为校报编辑Li Hua，根据图表内容写一篇题为“A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits”的英文报告。报告必须包含以下内容：
1）简要描述柱状图所呈现的结果。
2）针对调查结果提出改善建议，并说明理由。
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits
答案
One possible version:
A Report on Students' Sleep Habits
Recently, our school carried out a survey on students' sleep habits on school days. The results are as follows. 40% of students sleep less than 7 hours, which means a large number of students do not get enough rest. 35% of students sleep 7 - 8 hours, while only 25% sleep over 8 hours — the healthiest amount.
The result shows that many students are experiencing a lack of sleep. To improve the situation, students should try to manage their time better and avoid staying up late doing homework or using electronic devices. They can also make simple changes such as setting a regular bedtime and reducing screen time before sleeping. Getting enough sleep helps students stay focused in class, improves memory, and keeps them in a good mood throughout the day.
In a word, forming good sleep habits is key to a healthier and more successful school life.
A Report on Students' Sleep Habits
Recently, our school carried out a survey on students' sleep habits on school days. The results are as follows. 40% of students sleep less than 7 hours, which means a large number of students do not get enough rest. 35% of students sleep 7 - 8 hours, while only 25% sleep over 8 hours — the healthiest amount.
The result shows that many students are experiencing a lack of sleep. To improve the situation, students should try to manage their time better and avoid staying up late doing homework or using electronic devices. They can also make simple changes such as setting a regular bedtime and reducing screen time before sleeping. Getting enough sleep helps students stay focused in class, improves memory, and keeps them in a good mood throughout the day.
In a word, forming good sleep habits is key to a healthier and more successful school life.
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确写作任务：作为校报编辑，需写题为“A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits”的英文报告，核心要包含两点：1. 描述柱状图呈现的学生上学日睡眠时长占比结果；2. 针对睡眠不足的问题提改善建议并说明理由。解题思路：第一步，准确提取图表数据：睡眠＜7小时占40%、7-8小时占35%、＞8小时占25%，点明多数学生睡眠不足的现状；第二步，结合现状提出合理建议，如规划时间、避免熬夜、减少睡前电子设备使用等，并说明充足睡眠对课堂专注、记忆、情绪的益处；第三步，组织语言，符合报告文体，确保字数达标、无个人信息。
【解析】
按照报告结构依次展开：1. 开头引出学校开展睡眠习惯调查的背景；2. 清晰列出三个睡眠时长的占比，点明多数学生睡眠不足的问题；3. 针对问题提出具体建议，如合理管理时间、避免熬夜、减少睡前屏幕时间；4. 说明充足睡眠对学习和健康的好处；5. 总结良好睡眠习惯的重要性，语言需流畅，符合英语写作规范，满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A Report on Students' Sleep Habits
Recently, our school carried out a survey on students' sleep habits on school days. The results are as follows. 40% of students sleep less than 7 hours, which means a large number of students do not get enough rest. 35% of students sleep 7 - 8 hours, while only 25% sleep over 8 hours — the healthiest amount.
The result shows that many students are experiencing a lack of sleep. To improve the situation, students should try to manage their time better and avoid staying up late doing homework or using electronic devices. They can also make simple changes such as setting a regular bedtime and reducing screen time before sleeping. Getting enough sleep helps students stay focused in class, improves memory, and keeps them in a good mood throughout the day.
In a word, forming good sleep habits is key to a healthier and more successful school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、图表信息描述、建议类写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，准确解读并呈现了图表数据，提出的建议合理且理由充分，语言流畅自然，符合报告的文体规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题明确写作任务：作为校报编辑，需写题为“A Report on Students’ Sleep Habits”的英文报告，核心要包含两点：1. 描述柱状图呈现的学生上学日睡眠时长占比结果；2. 针对睡眠不足的问题提改善建议并说明理由。解题思路：第一步，准确提取图表数据：睡眠＜7小时占40%、7-8小时占35%、＞8小时占25%，点明多数学生睡眠不足的现状；第二步，结合现状提出合理建议，如规划时间、避免熬夜、减少睡前电子设备使用等，并说明充足睡眠对课堂专注、记忆、情绪的益处；第三步，组织语言，符合报告文体，确保字数达标、无个人信息。
【解析】
按照报告结构依次展开：1. 开头引出学校开展睡眠习惯调查的背景；2. 清晰列出三个睡眠时长的占比，点明多数学生睡眠不足的问题；3. 针对问题提出具体建议，如合理管理时间、避免熬夜、减少睡前屏幕时间；4. 说明充足睡眠对学习和健康的好处；5. 总结良好睡眠习惯的重要性，语言需流畅，符合英语写作规范，满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A Report on Students' Sleep Habits
Recently, our school carried out a survey on students' sleep habits on school days. The results are as follows. 40% of students sleep less than 7 hours, which means a large number of students do not get enough rest. 35% of students sleep 7 - 8 hours, while only 25% sleep over 8 hours — the healthiest amount.
The result shows that many students are experiencing a lack of sleep. To improve the situation, students should try to manage their time better and avoid staying up late doing homework or using electronic devices. They can also make simple changes such as setting a regular bedtime and reducing screen time before sleeping. Getting enough sleep helps students stay focused in class, improves memory, and keeps them in a good mood throughout the day.
In a word, forming good sleep habits is key to a healthier and more successful school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、图表信息描述、建议类写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，准确解读并呈现了图表数据，提出的建议合理且理由充分，语言流畅自然，符合报告的文体规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
