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五、书面表达
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情，不过万事都有规律可循。请根据下面的思维导图，结合自己的语言学习经历和经验，以“How Can We Be Good Language Learners?”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。（所给内容不计入总词数）
How Can We Be Good Language Learners?
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情，不过万事都有规律可循。请根据下面的思维导图，结合自己的语言学习经历和经验，以“How Can We Be Good Language Learners?”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。（所给内容不计入总词数）
How Can We Be Good Language Learners?
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
答案
How Can We Be Good Language Learners?
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
First, don't be afraid of problems. We shouldn't give up in the face of difficult grammar and pronunciation. Second, take notes in time. We can write down new words, useful sentences and correct spellings to remember them better. Third, use language learning apps. Many apps offer help for free. We can practise our pronunciation on them. Fourth, do group activities. We can find a way to make daily conversation with classmates in class and after school. Finally, watch movies or shows in that language. It's a fun way to learn new words. Try to repeat the sentences to practise speaking.
It's hard to learn a new language, but if we do it in the right way, it will be a lot easier.
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
First, don't be afraid of problems. We shouldn't give up in the face of difficult grammar and pronunciation. Second, take notes in time. We can write down new words, useful sentences and correct spellings to remember them better. Third, use language learning apps. Many apps offer help for free. We can practise our pronunciation on them. Fourth, do group activities. We can find a way to make daily conversation with classmates in class and after school. Finally, watch movies or shows in that language. It's a fun way to learn new words. Try to repeat the sentences to practise speaking.
It's hard to learn a new language, but if we do it in the right way, it will be a lot easier.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How Can We Be Good Language Learners?”为题，结合思维导图给出的语言学习要点（不要害怕问题、记笔记、使用学习应用、参与小组活动）及自身经验写作。解题思路：首先沿用题目开头引出学习方法；其次用First、Second等连接词分点阐述思维导图的核心要点，每个要点补充具体做法丰富内容；接着适当补充合理的语言学习方法（如观看外语影视）；最后总结鼓励，确保总词数符合要求，结构清晰、要点明确。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：使用题目给定的开头，引出下文的学习方法；2. 分点论述：①对应“Don’t be afraid of problems”，说明遇到语法、发音等困难不放弃；②对应“Take notes”，说明记录生词、有用句子等帮助记忆；③对应“Use an learning app”，说明利用免费app练习发音；④对应“Do group activities”，说明通过小组活动练习日常对话；3. 补充思维导图省略的要点：观看外语电影，重复台词练习口语；4. 结尾总结，强调用正确方法学习语言会更轻松，呼应主题。
【答案】
How Can We Be Good Language Learners?
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
First, don't be afraid of problems. We shouldn't give up in the face of difficult grammar and pronunciation. Second, take notes in time. We can write down new words, useful sentences and correct spellings to remember them better. Third, use language learning apps. Many apps offer help for free. We can practise our pronunciation on them. Fourth, do group activities. We can find a way to make daily conversation with classmates in class and after school. Finally, watch movies or shows in that language. It's a fun way to learn new words. Try to repeat the sentences to practise speaking.
It's hard to learn a new language, but if we do it in the right way, it will be a lot easier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生梳理给定要点并合理拓展，结构清晰，内容贴合语言学习主题，既考查语言组织能力，又考查对学习方法的理解，是一道综合性较强的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How Can We Be Good Language Learners?”为题，结合思维导图给出的语言学习要点（不要害怕问题、记笔记、使用学习应用、参与小组活动）及自身经验写作。解题思路：首先沿用题目开头引出学习方法；其次用First、Second等连接词分点阐述思维导图的核心要点，每个要点补充具体做法丰富内容；接着适当补充合理的语言学习方法（如观看外语影视）；最后总结鼓励，确保总词数符合要求，结构清晰、要点明确。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：使用题目给定的开头，引出下文的学习方法；2. 分点论述：①对应“Don’t be afraid of problems”，说明遇到语法、发音等困难不放弃；②对应“Take notes”，说明记录生词、有用句子等帮助记忆；③对应“Use an learning app”，说明利用免费app练习发音；④对应“Do group activities”，说明通过小组活动练习日常对话；3. 补充思维导图省略的要点：观看外语电影，重复台词练习口语；4. 结尾总结，强调用正确方法学习语言会更轻松，呼应主题。
【答案】
How Can We Be Good Language Learners?
Studying a new language is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. To be good language learners, we can follow these ways.
First, don't be afraid of problems. We shouldn't give up in the face of difficult grammar and pronunciation. Second, take notes in time. We can write down new words, useful sentences and correct spellings to remember them better. Third, use language learning apps. Many apps offer help for free. We can practise our pronunciation on them. Fourth, do group activities. We can find a way to make daily conversation with classmates in class and after school. Finally, watch movies or shows in that language. It's a fun way to learn new words. Try to repeat the sentences to practise speaking.
It's hard to learn a new language, but if we do it in the right way, it will be a lot easier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生梳理给定要点并合理拓展，结构清晰，内容贴合语言学习主题，既考查语言组织能力，又考查对学习方法的理解，是一道综合性较强的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.5
