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[经典例题]
在春节，许多孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱。我们该如何管理这些钱，把压岁钱用得更有意义呢？请结合要点提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途。
2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少三点)。
3. 呼吁大家管理好压岁钱。
要求:1. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
[高分范文]
① I get some lucky money from my parents at the Spring Festival every year.
I usually ② spend some money on books, school things, shoes and clothes. Sometimes I buy some presents for my parents.
To make good use of lucky money, I think we can do the following things. ③ First, we should save part of the money. We can't buy everything we like. Second, we can buy some presents for our parents and teachers, so we can show our love to them. Last, we can use some money to help children in need. Helping others makes us happy.
④ Let's manage our money well!
[名师点评]
本文先介绍了压岁钱的来源和用途，接着对合理使用压岁钱提出了自己的建议，最后呼吁大家管理好自己的压岁钱。
① 开门见山介绍了压岁钱的来源。
② 熟练运用 spend some money on、buy some presents for 等短语，介绍了作者是如何使用压岁钱的。
③ First、Second 和 Last 的运用使文章结构清楚，叙述自然流畅。
④ 用祈使句呼吁大家管理好压岁钱。
[经典例题]
在春节，许多孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱。我们该如何管理这些钱，把压岁钱用得更有意义呢？请结合要点提示写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途。
2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少三点)。
3. 呼吁大家管理好压岁钱。
要求:1. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
[高分范文]
① I get some lucky money from my parents at the Spring Festival every year.
I usually ② spend some money on books, school things, shoes and clothes. Sometimes I buy some presents for my parents.
To make good use of lucky money, I think we can do the following things. ③ First, we should save part of the money. We can't buy everything we like. Second, we can buy some presents for our parents and teachers, so we can show our love to them. Last, we can use some money to help children in need. Helping others makes us happy.
④ Let's manage our money well!
[名师点评]
本文先介绍了压岁钱的来源和用途，接着对合理使用压岁钱提出了自己的建议，最后呼吁大家管理好自己的压岁钱。
① 开门见山介绍了压岁钱的来源。
② 熟练运用 spend some money on、buy some presents for 等短语，介绍了作者是如何使用压岁钱的。
③ First、Second 和 Last 的运用使文章结构清楚，叙述自然流畅。
④ 用祈使句呼吁大家管理好压岁钱。
答案
How to Use Lucky Money Wisely
I get some lucky money from my parents and other elders at the Spring Festival every year. I usually spend some money on books, school things and daily necessities. Sometimes I also buy small presents for my parents.
To use the lucky money well, here are my suggestions. First, we can save most of it for future use. Second, we can buy small gifts to show our love to our family and teachers. Third, we can give a little money to help children in need.
Let's manage our lucky money properly!
I get some lucky money from my parents and other elders at the Spring Festival every year. I usually spend some money on books, school things and daily necessities. Sometimes I also buy small presents for my parents.
To use the lucky money well, here are my suggestions. First, we can save most of it for future use. Second, we can buy small gifts to show our love to our family and teachers. Third, we can give a little money to help children in need.
Let's manage our lucky money properly!
解析
本题是符合七年级英语学习要求的话题写作题，围绕压岁钱的合理使用展开，可按要求分步完成写作：1. 首先说明自己压岁钱的来源，以及日常的使用途径，覆盖第一个内容要点；2. 使用First、Second、Last等序列连接词清晰列出至少三条合理使用压岁钱的建议，让文章逻辑清晰，覆盖第二个内容要点；3. 最后用简短的祈使句发出呼吁，覆盖第三个内容要点。写作时运用课内所学的spend...on、buy sth for sb等基础短语，保证语句连贯，词数控制在80左右，不出现个人真实姓名和学校名称即可。
写作演练
[小试身手]
你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花费零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，给出你的合理建议。
要求:1. 词数80左右，文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 意思连贯，表达清楚。
3. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement(成就) by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
[小试身手]
你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花费零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，给出你的合理建议。
要求:1. 词数80左右，文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 意思连贯，表达清楚。
3. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement(成就) by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案
One possible version:
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
