Ⅲ. Think and write.
The School English Corner is asking students to share how they use pocket money. Please write a short passage to show your way to spend pocket money. (About 80 words)

A (wise / ...) way to spend my pocket money
The School English Corner is asking students to share how they use pocket money. Please write a short passage to show your way to spend pocket money. (About 80 words)
A (wise / ...) way to spend my pocket money
答案
One possible version:
A wise way to spend my pocket money
I usually spend my pocket money on buying books. I think this is a very wise way to use money because books can open up a new world for me. Reading helps me learn about history, science, and different cultures. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day of study. I have learnt that knowledge is more valuable than toys or snacks. As a saying goes, reading makes a full man. I will definitely keep buying books and reading them in the future. I'm sure reading will make me a better person.
A wise way to spend my pocket money
I usually spend my pocket money on buying books. I think this is a very wise way to use money because books can open up a new world for me. Reading helps me learn about history, science, and different cultures. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day of study. I have learnt that knowledge is more valuable than toys or snacks. As a saying goes, reading makes a full man. I will definitely keep buying books and reading them in the future. I'm sure reading will make me a better person.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“明智使用零花钱的方式”写一篇约80词的短文,需结合思维导图的四个问题展开:1. 通常买什么/花在什么上;2. 为什么有意义;3. 感受或学到什么;4. 未来是否继续及原因。解题思路是先确定一个明智的花钱方式(如买书籍),再依次对应四个问题组织内容,使短文逻辑连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心话题:选择“买书籍”作为明智的零花钱使用方式;
2. 对应思维导图要点写作:
回答“买什么”:I usually spend my pocket money on buying books.
回答“为什么有意义”:Books open up a new world, help learn history, science and cultures.
回答“感受/学到的”:Makes me happy and relaxed, learns knowledge is valuable.
回答“未来计划”:Will keep buying and reading books, as it makes me a better person.
3. 串联内容,调整语句流畅度,控制在约80词,形成完整短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
A wise way to spend my pocket money
I usually spend my pocket money on buying books. I think this is a very wise way to use money because books can open up a new world for me. Reading helps me learn about history, science, and different cultures. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day of study. I have learnt that knowledge is more valuable than toys or snacks. As a saying goes, reading makes a full man. I will definitely keep buying books and reading them in the future. I'm sure reading will make me a better person.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;形容词wise的运用
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、完成短文写作的能力,需结合思维导图的四个要点清晰表达观点,语言需通顺、符合字数要求,是基础的话题写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求围绕“明智使用零花钱的方式”写一篇约80词的短文,需结合思维导图的四个问题展开:1. 通常买什么/花在什么上;2. 为什么有意义;3. 感受或学到什么;4. 未来是否继续及原因。解题思路是先确定一个明智的花钱方式(如买书籍),再依次对应四个问题组织内容,使短文逻辑连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心话题:选择“买书籍”作为明智的零花钱使用方式;
2. 对应思维导图要点写作:
回答“买什么”:I usually spend my pocket money on buying books.
回答“为什么有意义”:Books open up a new world, help learn history, science and cultures.
回答“感受/学到的”:Makes me happy and relaxed, learns knowledge is valuable.
回答“未来计划”:Will keep buying and reading books, as it makes me a better person.
3. 串联内容,调整语句流畅度,控制在约80词,形成完整短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
A wise way to spend my pocket money
I usually spend my pocket money on buying books. I think this is a very wise way to use money because books can open up a new world for me. Reading helps me learn about history, science, and different cultures. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day of study. I have learnt that knowledge is more valuable than toys or snacks. As a saying goes, reading makes a full man. I will definitely keep buying books and reading them in the future. I'm sure reading will make me a better person.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;形容词wise的运用
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、完成短文写作的能力,需结合思维导图的四个要点清晰表达观点,语言需通顺、符合字数要求,是基础的话题写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
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