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Ⅴ. 书面表达。
新学期伊始,英语老师为了让同学们分享暑假故事,布置了“My Summer Vacation”写作任务,并将挑选优秀文章张贴在校园“文化长廊”。请以“My Summer Vacation”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1. Where did you go in summer vacation?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
新学期伊始,英语老师为了让同学们分享暑假故事,布置了“My Summer Vacation”写作任务,并将挑选优秀文章张贴在校园“文化长廊”。请以“My Summer Vacation”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1. Where did you go in summer vacation?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
My Summer Vacation
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
In Qingdao, we spent most of our time at the beach. Every morning, I walked along the shore, picking up colorful shells and watching seagulls fly above the blue sea. One afternoon, my father taught me to swim in the sea. Though I felt a bit nervous at first, the cool water and my father's cheers made me brave enough to try.
We also visited the Tsingtao Beer Museum, where we learned about the history of beer making and even tasted some fresh beer (non-alcoholic for kids, of course!).
The best part was the seafood—we ate fresh shrimp, crabs, and fish at a local market, and the flavors were so great that I still remember them!
Looking back, this trip made me feel truly happy and relaxed.
Qingdao not only showed me the beauty of the sea but also gave me wonderful memories with my family. I hope to go there again someday!
答案
One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
In Qingdao, we spent most of our time at the beach. Every morning, I walked along the shore, picking up colorful shells and watching seagulls fly above the blue sea. One afternoon, my father taught me to swim in the sea. Though I felt a bit nervous at first, the cool water and my father's cheers made me brave enough to try. We also visited the Tsingtao Beer Museum, where we learned about the history of beer making and even tasted some fresh beer (non-alcoholic for kids, of course!). The best part was the seafood—we ate fresh shrimp, crabs, and fish at a local market, and the flavors were so great that I still remember them!
Looking back, this trip made me feel truly happy and relaxed. Qingdao not only showed me the beauty of the sea but also gave me wonderful memories with my family. I hope to go there again someday!
My Summer Vacation
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
In Qingdao, we spent most of our time at the beach. Every morning, I walked along the shore, picking up colorful shells and watching seagulls fly above the blue sea. One afternoon, my father taught me to swim in the sea. Though I felt a bit nervous at first, the cool water and my father's cheers made me brave enough to try. We also visited the Tsingtao Beer Museum, where we learned about the history of beer making and even tasted some fresh beer (non-alcoholic for kids, of course!). The best part was the seafood—we ate fresh shrimp, crabs, and fish at a local market, and the flavors were so great that I still remember them!
Looking back, this trip made me feel truly happy and relaxed. Qingdao not only showed me the beauty of the sea but also gave me wonderful memories with my family. I hope to go there again someday!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My Summer Vacation”，需覆盖三个核心要点：暑假去的地点、在当地的活动、旅行的感受。写作时要先确定具体的旅行地点（如青岛），结合要点补充合理细节（出行方式、具体活动内容），控制词数在80左右，语言通顺，符合英语记叙文的表达逻辑，适当发挥让内容更充实。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明暑假旅行的地点（青岛）、同行人员及出行方式；2. 中间围绕要点展开具体活动：海滩散步捡贝壳、学游泳、参观啤酒博物馆、品尝海鲜；3. 结尾总结旅行的感受，表达对此次旅行的喜爱与期待。注意语言准确，涵盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
In Qingdao, we spent most of our time at the beach. Every morning, I walked along the shore, picking up colorful shells and watching seagulls fly above the blue sea. One afternoon, my father taught me to swim in the sea. Though I felt a bit nervous at first, the cool water and my father's cheers made me brave enough to try. We also visited the Tsingtao Beer Museum, where we learned about the history of beer making and even tasted some fresh beer (non-alcoholic for kids, of course!). The best part was the seafood—we ate fresh shrimp, crabs, and fish at a local market, and the flavors were so great that I still remember them!
Looking back, this trip made me feel truly happy and relaxed. Qingdao not only showed me the beauty of the sea but also gave me wonderful memories with my family. I hope to go there again someday!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容充实具体，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作主题为“My Summer Vacation”，需覆盖三个核心要点：暑假去的地点、在当地的活动、旅行的感受。写作时要先确定具体的旅行地点（如青岛），结合要点补充合理细节（出行方式、具体活动内容），控制词数在80左右，语言通顺，符合英语记叙文的表达逻辑，适当发挥让内容更充实。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明暑假旅行的地点（青岛）、同行人员及出行方式；2. 中间围绕要点展开具体活动：海滩散步捡贝壳、学游泳、参观啤酒博物馆、品尝海鲜；3. 结尾总结旅行的感受，表达对此次旅行的喜爱与期待。注意语言准确，涵盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. It's a beautiful seaside city in Shandong. We chose to go there by train because I love watching the scenery through the window during the journey.
In Qingdao, we spent most of our time at the beach. Every morning, I walked along the shore, picking up colorful shells and watching seagulls fly above the blue sea. One afternoon, my father taught me to swim in the sea. Though I felt a bit nervous at first, the cool water and my father's cheers made me brave enough to try. We also visited the Tsingtao Beer Museum, where we learned about the history of beer making and even tasted some fresh beer (non-alcoholic for kids, of course!). The best part was the seafood—we ate fresh shrimp, crabs, and fish at a local market, and the flavors were so great that I still remember them!
Looking back, this trip made me feel truly happy and relaxed. Qingdao not only showed me the beauty of the sea but also gave me wonderful memories with my family. I hope to go there again someday!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容充实具体，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
