任务情境
假如你是 Vera,你的美国朋友 Rose 想了解你的家庭情况,你给她发送了一张家庭照片,请根据提示写一封信向她介绍你的家庭成员。词数不少于 60,格式已给出,不计入总词数。
| Members | Characteristics | Hobbies |
|------------------|-----------------------|-----------------------|
| Grandpa | friendly | reading |
| Grandma | kind | listening to music |
| Dad | fu
| playing tennis |
| Mum | beautiful | playing the piano |
| Little brother Sam | short hair, clever | playing chess |
Dear Rose,
Yours,
Vera
思路点拨
审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
写作框架
开头:引出话题 → Here is a photo of my family.
中间:详细介绍 → My grandpa is...He likes...;My grandma is...She often...;My dad is...He spends...;My mum is...She often...;...is my little brother.He has...
结尾:总体评价 → I love my family.
假如你是 Vera,你的美国朋友 Rose 想了解你的家庭情况,你给她发送了一张家庭照片,请根据提示写一封信向她介绍你的家庭成员。词数不少于 60,格式已给出,不计入总词数。
| Members | Characteristics | Hobbies |
|------------------|-----------------------|-----------------------|
| Grandpa | friendly | reading |
| Grandma | kind | listening to music |
| Dad | fu
| Mum | beautiful | playing the piano |
| Little brother Sam | short hair, clever | playing chess |
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family. My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well. I love my family. Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
思路点拨
审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
写作框架
开头:引出话题 → Here is a photo of my family.
中间:详细介绍 → My grandpa is...He likes...;My grandma is...She often...;My dad is...He spends...;My mum is...She often...;...is my little brother.He has...
结尾:总体评价 → I love my family.
答案
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封介绍家庭情况的英文书信,属于应用文写作。解题思路:首先审题确定体裁为书信、人称用第三人称、时态用一般现在时;其次按照给定框架写作,开头引出家庭照片,中间依次介绍表格中每位家庭成员的特征与爱好,补充合理细节让内容连贯,结尾表达对家庭的喜爱;最后确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作框架,开头用指定的引出句,接着说明家庭有六口人,然后逐个介绍:爷爷友好,喜欢晚上读书;奶奶善良,空闲时听音乐;爸爸风趣,总逗大家笑,喜欢打网球,每天花一小时打;妈妈漂亮,常为家人弹钢琴;弟弟Sam有短发、聪明,下棋很棒;最后表达对家庭的爱,补充祝福语使书信完整。
【答案】
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family. My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well. I love my family. Best wishes!
【知识点】
英文书信写作,一般现在时,家庭成员介绍
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础应用文写作题,考查学生整合提示信息、运用正确时态人称写作的能力,提示清晰,注重基础表达,能有效检验学生的写作基本功。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求写一封介绍家庭情况的英文书信,属于应用文写作。解题思路:首先审题确定体裁为书信、人称用第三人称、时态用一般现在时;其次按照给定框架写作,开头引出家庭照片,中间依次介绍表格中每位家庭成员的特征与爱好,补充合理细节让内容连贯,结尾表达对家庭的喜爱;最后确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作框架,开头用指定的引出句,接着说明家庭有六口人,然后逐个介绍:爷爷友好,喜欢晚上读书;奶奶善良,空闲时听音乐;爸爸风趣,总逗大家笑,喜欢打网球,每天花一小时打;妈妈漂亮,常为家人弹钢琴;弟弟Sam有短发、聪明,下棋很棒;最后表达对家庭的爱,补充祝福语使书信完整。
【答案】
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family. My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well. I love my family. Best wishes!
【知识点】
英文书信写作,一般现在时,家庭成员介绍
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础应用文写作题,考查学生整合提示信息、运用正确时态人称写作的能力,提示清晰,注重基础表达,能有效检验学生的写作基本功。
【难度系数】
0.3
(一)短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 听音乐
2. 打网球
3. 每天
4. 弹钢琴
5. 下国际象棋
(二)句子翻译——结合(一)中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 这是一张我的全家福。(Here is 句型)
2. 他喜欢在晚上看书。(like doing sth)
3. 他每天花一小时打网球。(spend time doing sth)
4. 他留着短发,人很聪明。(and 连接并列句)
(三)篇章展示——运用(二)中句子组成语段。
Dear Rose,
Yours,
Vera
1. 听音乐
listen to music
2. 打网球
play tennis
3. 每天
every day
4. 弹钢琴
play the piano
5. 下国际象棋
play chess
(二)句子翻译——结合(一)中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 这是一张我的全家福。(Here is 句型)
Here is a photo of my family.
2. 他喜欢在晚上看书。(like doing sth)
He likes reading at night.
3. 他每天花一小时打网球。(spend time doing sth)
He spends an hour playing tennis every day.
4. 他留着短发,人很聪明。(and 连接并列句)
He has short hair and he is very clever.
(三)篇章展示——运用(二)中句子组成语段。
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night.
My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time.
My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh.
And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day.
My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us.
Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever.
He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
答案
(一)
1. listen to music 2. play tennis 3. every day
4. play the piano 5. play chess
(二)
1. Here is a photo of my family. 2. He likes reading at night. 3. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. 4. He has short hair and he is very clever.
(三)
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
1. listen to music 2. play tennis 3. every day
4. play the piano 5. play chess
(二)
1. Here is a photo of my family. 2. He likes reading at night. 3. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. 4. He has short hair and he is very clever.
(三)
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
解析
【分析】
本题分为短语翻译、句子翻译、篇章展示三部分。解题思路:1. 短语翻译需牢记英语固定搭配,注意球类、乐器前的冠词规则(球类前不加the,乐器前加the),以及“下国际象棋”的固定表达;2. 句子翻译要紧扣括号提示的句型(Here is句型、like doing sth、spend time doing sth、and连接并列句),注意主语单三形式、介词搭配等细节;3. 篇章展示需结合(二)的句子,补充合理内容,组成符合格式的连贯书信,融入(一)的短语,确保内容通顺。
【解析】
(一)短语翻译:
1. “听音乐”固定搭配为listen to music;
2. “打网球”中球类名词前不加冠词,译为play tennis;
3. “每天”对应固定短语every day;
4. “弹钢琴”中乐器名词前加定冠词the,译为play the piano;
5. “下国际象棋”固定表达为play chess。
(二)句子翻译:
1. Here is句型后接单数名词短语,“全家福”译为a photo of my family,故为Here is a photo of my family;
2. like doing sth表“喜欢做某事”,主语he为第三人称单数,like变likes,“看书”译为reading,“在晚上”译为at night,故为He likes reading at night;
3. spend time doing sth表“花费时间做某事”,主语he为第三人称单数,spend变spends,“一小时”译为an hour,“打网球”用playing tennis,时间状语“每天”放句末,故为He spends an hour playing tennis every day;
4. and连接两个并列句,主语均为he,“留着短发”译为has short hair,“人很聪明”译为he is very clever,故为He has short hair and he is very clever。
(三)篇章展示:结合(二)的句子,补充介绍家人的合理内容,融入(一)的短语(如listen to music、play tennis等),组成符合书信格式的连贯语段,内容通顺自然。
【答案】
(一)
1. listen to music 2. play tennis 3. every day
4. play the piano 5. play chess
(二)
1. Here is a photo of my family. 2. He likes reading at night. 3. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. 4. He has short hair and he is very clever.
(三)
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
【知识点】
英语短语搭配、英语句型运用、英语书信写作
【点评】
本题考查英语基础短语翻译、常用句型运用及语篇组织能力,注重基础知识的综合应用,适合巩固英语基础,提升语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题分为短语翻译、句子翻译、篇章展示三部分。解题思路:1. 短语翻译需牢记英语固定搭配,注意球类、乐器前的冠词规则(球类前不加the,乐器前加the),以及“下国际象棋”的固定表达;2. 句子翻译要紧扣括号提示的句型(Here is句型、like doing sth、spend time doing sth、and连接并列句),注意主语单三形式、介词搭配等细节;3. 篇章展示需结合(二)的句子,补充合理内容,组成符合格式的连贯书信,融入(一)的短语,确保内容通顺。
【解析】
(一)短语翻译:
1. “听音乐”固定搭配为listen to music;
2. “打网球”中球类名词前不加冠词,译为play tennis;
3. “每天”对应固定短语every day;
4. “弹钢琴”中乐器名词前加定冠词the,译为play the piano;
5. “下国际象棋”固定表达为play chess。
(二)句子翻译:
1. Here is句型后接单数名词短语,“全家福”译为a photo of my family,故为Here is a photo of my family;
2. like doing sth表“喜欢做某事”,主语he为第三人称单数,like变likes,“看书”译为reading,“在晚上”译为at night,故为He likes reading at night;
3. spend time doing sth表“花费时间做某事”,主语he为第三人称单数,spend变spends,“一小时”译为an hour,“打网球”用playing tennis,时间状语“每天”放句末,故为He spends an hour playing tennis every day;
4. and连接两个并列句,主语均为he,“留着短发”译为has short hair,“人很聪明”译为he is very clever,故为He has short hair and he is very clever。
(三)篇章展示:结合(二)的句子,补充介绍家人的合理内容,融入(一)的短语(如listen to music、play tennis等),组成符合书信格式的连贯语段,内容通顺自然。
【答案】
(一)
1. listen to music 2. play tennis 3. every day
4. play the piano 5. play chess
(二)
1. Here is a photo of my family. 2. He likes reading at night. 3. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. 4. He has short hair and he is very clever.
(三)
Dear Rose,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family.
My grandpa is friendly to others. He likes reading at night. My grandma is a kind woman. She often listens to music in her free time. My dad is so funny and he always makes us laugh. And he likes playing tennis. He spends an hour playing tennis every day. My mum is beautiful. She often plays the piano for us. Sam is my little brother. He has short hair and he is very clever. He can play chess really well.
I love my family.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Vera
【知识点】
英语短语搭配、英语句型运用、英语书信写作
【点评】
本题考查英语基础短语翻译、常用句型运用及语篇组织能力,注重基础知识的综合应用,适合巩固英语基础,提升语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
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