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假设你是Tom，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一
封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
假设你是Tom，你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友Linda写一
封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons.
I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me.
We often chat together after lunch.
We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Tom的身份给家乡朋友Linda写邮件介绍中国中学的学校生活，需覆盖学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点，时态采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，开头和结尾已给出，需补充中间内容，确保语言简洁、要点齐全、符合邮件格式。
【解析】
1. 确定时态与人称：全文使用一般现在时，以第一人称I叙述；
2. 第二段（对应学习情况）：补充学校上课时间、每日课程数量、喜欢的科目及原因，如“Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.”；
3. 第三段（对应课外活动）：补充喜欢的活动及相关情况，如“ I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.”；
4. 第四段（对应同学关系）：补充新朋友的情况及相处细节，如“I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.”；
5. 检查词数，确保符合要求，语法正确，要点完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】
英语书信写作，一般现在时，要点式书面表达
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，考查学生的书面表达能力，要求学生根据给定要点介绍学校生活，需注意时态、人称及要点覆盖，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题要求以Tom的身份给家乡朋友Linda写邮件介绍中国中学的学校生活，需覆盖学习情况、课外活动、同学关系三个要点，时态采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，开头和结尾已给出，需补充中间内容，确保语言简洁、要点齐全、符合邮件格式。
【解析】
1. 确定时态与人称：全文使用一般现在时，以第一人称I叙述；
2. 第二段（对应学习情况）：补充学校上课时间、每日课程数量、喜欢的科目及原因，如“Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.”；
3. 第三段（对应课外活动）：补充喜欢的活动及相关情况，如“ I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.”；
4. 第四段（对应同学关系）：补充新朋友的情况及相处细节，如“I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.”；
5. 检查词数，确保符合要求，语法正确，要点完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】
英语书信写作，一般现在时，要点式书面表达
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，考查学生的书面表达能力，要求学生根据给定要点介绍学校生活，需注意时态、人称及要点覆盖，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
