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假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以"A nature explorer I look up to"为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇80~100词的短文,参加此次活动。内容包括:
1.介绍一位你钦佩的自然探索家;
2.描述其探索自然的经历;
3.说明这位自然探索家对你的启发或影响。
A nature explorer I look up to
1.介绍一位你钦佩的自然探索家;
2.描述其探索自然的经历;
3.说明这位自然探索家对你的启发或影响。
A nature explorer I look up to
One possible version:
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great
Chinese meteorologist who devoted
his life to exploring nature's laws. As
he once said, "Nature is a perfect
textbook." This sentence always
reminds me to stay curious about the
natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather
data every day for 38 years, covering
temperature, rainfall and plant
growth. He also travelled across
China to study climate change. He
believed scientific achievements needed
long-term accumulation, and his
work unlocked the secrets of China's
climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a
great nature explorer. From him, I
learn that perseverance is the key to
exploring nature. I'll keep my
interest in the natural world and try
my best to discover the beauty and
secrets of nature around me.
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great
Chinese meteorologist who devoted
his life to exploring nature's laws. As
he once said, "Nature is a perfect
textbook." This sentence always
reminds me to stay curious about the
natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather
data every day for 38 years, covering
temperature, rainfall and plant
growth. He also travelled across
China to study climate change. He
believed scientific achievements needed
long-term accumulation, and his
work unlocked the secrets of China's
climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a
great nature explorer. From him, I
learn that perseverance is the key to
exploring nature. I'll keep my
interest in the natural world and try
my best to discover the beauty and
secrets of nature around me.
答案
One possible version:
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great
Chinese meteorologist who devoted
his life to exploring nature's laws. As
he once said, "Nature is a perfect
textbook." This sentence always
reminds me to stay curious about the
natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather
data every day for 38 years, covering
temperature, rainfall and plant
growth. He also travelled across
China to study climate change. He
believed scientific achievements needed
long-term accumulation, and his
work unlocked the secrets of China's
climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a
great nature explorer. From him, I
learn that perseverance is the key to
exploring nature. I'll keep my
interest in the natural world and try
my best to discover the beauty and
secrets of nature around me.
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great
Chinese meteorologist who devoted
his life to exploring nature's laws. As
he once said, "Nature is a perfect
textbook." This sentence always
reminds me to stay curious about the
natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather
data every day for 38 years, covering
temperature, rainfall and plant
growth. He also travelled across
China to study climate change. He
believed scientific achievements needed
long-term accumulation, and his
work unlocked the secrets of China's
climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a
great nature explorer. From him, I
learn that perseverance is the key to
exploring nature. I'll keep my
interest in the natural world and try
my best to discover the beauty and
secrets of nature around me.
解析
【分析】
本次征文要求以"A nature explorer I look up to"为题，需涵盖三个核心内容：介绍一位钦佩的自然探索家、描述其探索自然的经历、说明该人物对自己的启发。解题思路为：首先选取符合"自然探索家"身份且有明确事迹的人物（如中国气象学家竺可桢）；其次采用"总-分-总"结构搭建文章框架，开头引出人物，中间用具体事例支撑探索经历，结尾点明启发；最后控制词数在80-100之间，确保语言简洁流畅、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：直接点明钦佩的自然探索家是竺可桢，说明他是致力于探索自然规律的中国气象学家，引出征文主题；
2. 中间：描述其探索经历——坚持38年每日记录温度、降雨、植物生长等气象数据，走遍中国研究气候变化，体现其对自然探索的执着与坚持；
3. 结尾：总结竺可桢的贡献，点明启发——探索自然需要长期坚持，要保持对自然的好奇心，努力发现自然的美与奥秘；
4. 注意词数控制，避免冗余，语言准确，符合征文的字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great Chinese meteorologist who devoted his life to exploring nature's laws. As he once said, "Nature is a perfect textbook." This sentence always reminds me to stay curious about the natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather data every day for 38 years, covering temperature, rainfall and plant growth. He also travelled across China to study climate change. He believed scientific achievements needed long-term accumulation, and his work unlocked the secrets of China's climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a great nature explorer. From him, I learn that perseverance is the key to exploring nature. I'll keep my interest in the natural world and try my best to discover the beauty and secrets of nature around me.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，内容完整，全面覆盖题目要求的三个要点；通过具体事例展现了竺可桢作为自然探索家的品质，结尾的启发真挚贴合主题；语言流畅自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的参赛作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次征文要求以"A nature explorer I look up to"为题，需涵盖三个核心内容：介绍一位钦佩的自然探索家、描述其探索自然的经历、说明该人物对自己的启发。解题思路为：首先选取符合"自然探索家"身份且有明确事迹的人物（如中国气象学家竺可桢）；其次采用"总-分-总"结构搭建文章框架，开头引出人物，中间用具体事例支撑探索经历，结尾点明启发；最后控制词数在80-100之间，确保语言简洁流畅、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：直接点明钦佩的自然探索家是竺可桢，说明他是致力于探索自然规律的中国气象学家，引出征文主题；
2. 中间：描述其探索经历——坚持38年每日记录温度、降雨、植物生长等气象数据，走遍中国研究气候变化，体现其对自然探索的执着与坚持；
3. 结尾：总结竺可桢的贡献，点明启发——探索自然需要长期坚持，要保持对自然的好奇心，努力发现自然的美与奥秘；
4. 注意词数控制，避免冗余，语言准确，符合征文的字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A nature explorer I look up to
I look up to Zhu Kezhen, a great Chinese meteorologist who devoted his life to exploring nature's laws. As he once said, "Nature is a perfect textbook." This sentence always reminds me to stay curious about the natural world.
Zhu Kezhen recorded weather data every day for 38 years, covering temperature, rainfall and plant growth. He also travelled across China to study climate change. He believed scientific achievements needed long-term accumulation, and his work unlocked the secrets of China's climate changes over 5,000 years.
In short, Zhu Kezhen was a great nature explorer. From him, I learn that perseverance is the key to exploring nature. I'll keep my interest in the natural world and try my best to discover the beauty and secrets of nature around me.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，内容完整，全面覆盖题目要求的三个要点；通过具体事例展现了竺可桢作为自然探索家的品质，结尾的启发真挚贴合主题；语言流畅自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的参赛作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
