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九、书面表达。（满分15分）
八年级(1)班的同学将举行演讲比赛,演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是Daniel,请准备90词左右的英文演讲稿参加本次比赛。演讲稿的具体内容如下：
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并作适当发挥；
3. 90词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
Thanks for your listening!
八年级(1)班的同学将举行演讲比赛,演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是Daniel,请准备90词左右的英文演讲稿参加本次比赛。演讲稿的具体内容如下：
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并作适当发挥；
3. 90词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I have developed the habit of reading for at least one hour every day because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike to school instead of taking my dad's car. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I have developed the habit of reading for at least one hour every day because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike to school instead of taking my dad's car. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I have developed the habit of reading for at least one hour every day because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike to school instead of taking my dad's car. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需以Daniel的身份写90词左右的演讲稿，主题为成长与变化，必须覆盖表格中学习、环保、礼仪、爱心等所有要点，适当发挥，语法正确、上下文连贯，开头结尾已给出。解题思路为：用连接词分点呈现各要点，学习部分说明阅读习惯的变化及原因，环保部分列举两个具体做法，礼仪部分补充排队等车的延伸行为，爱心部分说明零花钱捐赠，最后加入展望未来的内容，确保符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头，用First引出学习变化：说明过去少阅读，现在养成每天读1小时的习惯，原因是阅读能帮助放松；
2. 用Second讲环保：点明意识到环保重要性，举例骑车上学代替坐车、离开房间关灯节约能源；
3. 用Third讲礼仪：除排队等车外，补充给老人让座；
4. 用Fourth讲爱心：说明将零花钱捐给贫困地区儿童；
5. 最后加入展望未来的内容，控制总词数在90左右，确保连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I have developed the habit of reading for at least one hour every day because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike to school instead of taking my dad's car. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文（成长变化）
【点评】
本题围绕“成长与变化”话题，要求整合表格要点并适当发挥，考查学生的语言组织与话题表达能力，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，是八年级常见的书面表达题型，注重基础语言运用。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：需以Daniel的身份写90词左右的演讲稿，主题为成长与变化，必须覆盖表格中学习、环保、礼仪、爱心等所有要点，适当发挥，语法正确、上下文连贯，开头结尾已给出。解题思路为：用连接词分点呈现各要点，学习部分说明阅读习惯的变化及原因，环保部分列举两个具体做法，礼仪部分补充排队等车的延伸行为，爱心部分说明零花钱捐赠，最后加入展望未来的内容，确保符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头，用First引出学习变化：说明过去少阅读，现在养成每天读1小时的习惯，原因是阅读能帮助放松；
2. 用Second讲环保：点明意识到环保重要性，举例骑车上学代替坐车、离开房间关灯节约能源；
3. 用Third讲礼仪：除排队等车外，补充给老人让座；
4. 用Fourth讲爱心：说明将零花钱捐给贫困地区儿童；
5. 最后加入展望未来的内容，控制总词数在90左右，确保连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I have developed the habit of reading for at least one hour every day because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike to school instead of taking my dad's car. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文（成长变化）
【点评】
本题围绕“成长与变化”话题，要求整合表格要点并适当发挥，考查学生的语言组织与话题表达能力，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，是八年级常见的书面表达题型，注重基础语言运用。
【难度系数】
0.6
