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五、书面表达。
暑假将至，学校将组织学生参加为期一周的英国伦敦游学活动。假设你是英语俱乐部成员李华，受邀用英语为俱乐部撰写题为“Tips for the summer tour”的指导文章，请根据海报中的三个方面给出建议。
注意事项：1. 短文内容须根据三个方面自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 括号内为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3. 不少于80词；4. 短文中不得提及真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Tips for the summer tour
暑假将至，学校将组织学生参加为期一周的英国伦敦游学活动。假设你是英语俱乐部成员李华，受邀用英语为俱乐部撰写题为“Tips for the summer tour”的指导文章，请根据海报中的三个方面给出建议。
注意事项：1. 短文内容须根据三个方面自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 括号内为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3. 不少于80词；4. 短文中不得提及真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Tips for the summer tour
答案
One possible version:
Tips for the summer tour
We are going to take part in the summer tour in London, the UK. In order to enjoy the meaningful trip, I have some useful tips for you.
British teachers love discussions, so it's important for you to share your ideas in class. Don't forget to finish your homework on time.
Since the weather in London changes often, it's necessary to take an umbrella with you. The city has excellent public transport. You can choose buses or the underground while travelling.
British people are always polite. When you greet them for the first time, you can shake hands with them. Moreover, always queue for your turn and keep your voice down in public places like museums or restaurants.
Hope you will have a good time!
Tips for the summer tour
We are going to take part in the summer tour in London, the UK. In order to enjoy the meaningful trip, I have some useful tips for you.
British teachers love discussions, so it's important for you to share your ideas in class. Don't forget to finish your homework on time.
Since the weather in London changes often, it's necessary to take an umbrella with you. The city has excellent public transport. You can choose buses or the underground while travelling.
British people are always polite. When you greet them for the first time, you can shake hands with them. Moreover, always queue for your turn and keep your voice down in public places like museums or restaurants.
Hope you will have a good time!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份为英国伦敦游学撰写题为“Tips for the summer tour”的指导文章，需依据海报给出的学习、生活、文化三个方面给出建议。解题思路：首先点明写作主题与目的，接着分别从学习（课堂表现、作业）、生活（天气、交通）、文化（礼仪、博物馆等）三个维度展开具体建议，最后表达对游学的祝愿，确保内容连贯、语句通顺，满足字数要求。
【解析】
写作时，开头引出游学主题，说明撰写建议的目的；学习方面，结合参考内容，建议课堂积极分享想法、按时完成作业；生活方面，提醒带伞应对伦敦多变的天气，选择公交或地铁等公共交通出行；文化方面，介绍英国的基本礼仪，如初次见面握手问候、排队等候、公共场合保持安静等，最后表达对游学的美好祝愿，注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，确保内容连贯流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Tips for the summer tour
We are going to take part in the summer tour in London, the UK. In order to enjoy the meaningful trip, I have some useful tips for you.
British teachers love discussions, so it's important for you to share your ideas in class. Don't forget to finish your homework on time.
Since the weather in London changes often, it's necessary to take an umbrella with you. The city has excellent public transport. You can choose buses or the underground while travelling.
British people are always polite. When you greet them for the first time, you can shake hands with them. Moreover, always queue for your turn and keep your voice down in public places like museums or restaurants.
Hope you will have a good time!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、建议类写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖了海报的三个核心方面，内容具体合理，语言通顺自然，符合游学指导的语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份为英国伦敦游学撰写题为“Tips for the summer tour”的指导文章，需依据海报给出的学习、生活、文化三个方面给出建议。解题思路：首先点明写作主题与目的，接着分别从学习（课堂表现、作业）、生活（天气、交通）、文化（礼仪、博物馆等）三个维度展开具体建议，最后表达对游学的祝愿，确保内容连贯、语句通顺，满足字数要求。
【解析】
写作时，开头引出游学主题，说明撰写建议的目的；学习方面，结合参考内容，建议课堂积极分享想法、按时完成作业；生活方面，提醒带伞应对伦敦多变的天气，选择公交或地铁等公共交通出行；文化方面，介绍英国的基本礼仪，如初次见面握手问候、排队等候、公共场合保持安静等，最后表达对游学的美好祝愿，注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，确保内容连贯流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Tips for the summer tour
We are going to take part in the summer tour in London, the UK. In order to enjoy the meaningful trip, I have some useful tips for you.
British teachers love discussions, so it's important for you to share your ideas in class. Don't forget to finish your homework on time.
Since the weather in London changes often, it's necessary to take an umbrella with you. The city has excellent public transport. You can choose buses or the underground while travelling.
British people are always polite. When you greet them for the first time, you can shake hands with them. Moreover, always queue for your turn and keep your voice down in public places like museums or restaurants.
Hope you will have a good time!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、建议类写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖了海报的三个核心方面，内容具体合理，语言通顺自然，符合游学指导的语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
