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俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举办主题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is your neighbourhood like?
What are your neighbours like?
How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?
注意事项：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举办主题为“My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is your neighbourhood like?
What are your neighbours like?
How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?
注意事项：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
答案
My Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is a quiet and nice place with green trees and small gardens. There’s a community centre where we often do fun activities. My neighbours are very friendly and helpful—when I forget my keys, they always invite me to stay at their home. I feel really happy to live here; it’s like a big warm family.
My neighbourhood is a quiet and nice place with green trees and small gardens. There’s a community centre where we often do fun activities. My neighbours are very friendly and helpful—when I forget my keys, they always invite me to stay at their home. I feel really happy to live here; it’s like a big warm family.
解析
本题为七年级英语写作题，要求以李华的身份围绕“My Neighbourhood”主题，结合三个问题提示写作，需表达清晰、语法正确，80词左右，开头已给出，适当发挥。
My Neighbourhood
I'm Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. It's a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood. There's a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there's a supermarket in our neighbourhood, so it's very easy for us to do some shopping.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us repair things like broken bikes and computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help younger students with their homework. They are patient enough to answer questions.
I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要有语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍社区的状况；
第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① take a walk 散步
② help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
[高分句型]
① There are some engineers among them. (There be 结构)
欣赏了以上内容，同学们试一试，自己再完成一篇征文稿吧！
My Neighbourhood
I'm Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community.
I'm Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. It's a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood. There's a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there's a supermarket in our neighbourhood, so it's very easy for us to do some shopping.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us repair things like broken bikes and computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help younger students with their homework. They are patient enough to answer questions.
I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要有语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍社区的状况；
第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① take a walk 散步
② help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
[高分句型]
① There are some engineers among them. (There be 结构)
欣赏了以上内容，同学们试一试，自己再完成一篇征文稿吧！
My Neighbourhood
I'm Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community.
答案
It is a nice place with many facilities. There is a beautiful park where people take a walk every day. A supermarket is also in the community, so shopping is very convenient. My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some are engineers, who can help repair broken things like bikes. Some college students here often help kids with their homework. I feel happy to live in such a warm neighbourhood. I hope it will be better and better.
解析
本题为七年级英语材料作文题，要求以“My Neighbourhood”为题，结合给定提示完成写作，需使用一般现在时，按照“总体介绍社区状况→具体介绍邻居的友善与互助→表达自身感受”的结构写作，注意语法正确、语句通顺，恰当运用亮点词汇与高分句型。
