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单元写作要求
本单元以“动物”为话题，谈论我们身边的动物朋友。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，介绍自己的宠物或者某种动物。
写作方法策略 如何写介绍动物的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，点明要介绍的动物是什么；主体部分需要从动物的外貌、习性、特征等方面详细介绍；最后抒情总结。
思路导引 佳作展示 高分词句
引出话题
I have a lovely pet rabbit ①named Luna, and she ②plays an important role in my life.
详细介绍
Luna is white and black. Her long ears stand up straight, and her big round blue eyes shine brightly, ③making her look really cute. ④When it comes to her habits, Luna mainly feeds on grass and fresh vegetables. She is very active. Sometimes she runs around the living room, and sometimes she jumps up and down beside my feet, ⑤as if she is playing a game with me. When she is tired, she will curl up in a corner of the cage and sleep quietly.
抒情总结
I love my pet rabbit, Luna, very much. She brings a lot of joy to my daily life. When I feel sad, seeing her lovely face can always cheer me up. I feel lucky to have such a lovely friend!
话题写作积累
1. 吃掉多达……
2. 表演绝技
3. 照顾；照料
4. 追着……跑
5. 忘记要做某事
6. 在一起玩得很开心
7. 尽管蚂蚁体型小，但它们可以举起比自身重量重 50 倍的东西。
8. “雷达”的想法来自蝙蝠，它可以让船只“看到”周围的东西，从而安全行驶。
9. 它的特别之处在于，无论我是快乐还是悲伤，它总是陪在我身边。
10. 动物和人类有着特殊的关系，我们应该尊重和爱护它们。
单元写作要求
本单元以“动物”为话题，谈论我们身边的动物朋友。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，介绍自己的宠物或者某种动物。
写作方法策略 如何写介绍动物的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，点明要介绍的动物是什么；主体部分需要从动物的外貌、习性、特征等方面详细介绍；最后抒情总结。
思路导引 佳作展示 高分词句
引出话题
I have a lovely pet rabbit ①named Luna, and she ②plays an important role in my life.
详细介绍
Luna is white and black. Her long ears stand up straight, and her big round blue eyes shine brightly, ③making her look really cute. ④When it comes to her habits, Luna mainly feeds on grass and fresh vegetables. She is very active. Sometimes she runs around the living room, and sometimes she jumps up and down beside my feet, ⑤as if she is playing a game with me. When she is tired, she will curl up in a corner of the cage and sleep quietly.
抒情总结
I love my pet rabbit, Luna, very much. She brings a lot of joy to my daily life. When I feel sad, seeing her lovely face can always cheer me up. I feel lucky to have such a lovely friend!
话题写作积累
1. 吃掉多达……
eat up to ...
2. 表演绝技
do wonderful tricks
3. 照顾；照料
look after/take care of/care for
4. 追着……跑
run after ...
5. 忘记要做某事
forget to do sth
6. 在一起玩得很开心
have so much fun together
7. 尽管蚂蚁体型小，但它们可以举起比自身重量重 50 倍的东西。
Although ants are small in size, they can lift things 50 times their own weight.
8. “雷达”的想法来自蝙蝠，它可以让船只“看到”周围的东西，从而安全行驶。
The idea of "radar" comes from bats, which allows ships to "see" things around them and travel safely.
9. 它的特别之处在于，无论我是快乐还是悲伤，它总是陪在我身边。
What makes it special is that it's always there for me, whether I'm happy or sad.
10. 动物和人类有着特殊的关系，我们应该尊重和爱护它们。
Animals and humans have a special relationship, and we should respect and care for them.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. eat up to ...
2. do wonderful tricks
3. look after/take care of/care for
4. run after ...
5. forget to do sth
6. have so much fun together
7. Although ants are small in size, they can lift things 50 times their own weight.
8. The idea of "radar" comes from bats, which allows ships to "see" things around them and travel safely.
9. What makes it special is that it's always there for me, whether I'm happy or sad.
10. Animals and humans have a special relationship, and we should respect and care for them.
话题写作积累
1. eat up to ...
2. do wonderful tricks
3. look after/take care of/care for
4. run after ...
5. forget to do sth
6. have so much fun together
7. Although ants are small in size, they can lift things 50 times their own weight.
8. The idea of "radar" comes from bats, which allows ships to "see" things around them and travel safely.
9. What makes it special is that it's always there for me, whether I'm happy or sad.
10. Animals and humans have a special relationship, and we should respect and care for them.
解析
【分析】
这道题是动物主题英语写作的配套积累训练，解题时首先要结合单元所学的和动物相关的核心固定短语，优先选用课标要求的地道常用表达，避免逐字生硬翻译；遇到句子翻译类题目时，要先梳理中文的逻辑关系，判断需要使用的从句类型（让步状语从句、定语从句等），保证语法正确，同时选用符合该写作话题的高分常用句型，最终输出准确、符合英语表达习惯的内容。
【解析】
1. 表示“吃掉多达……”，用核心动词eat搭配表“多达”的常用短语up to，对应表达为eat up to ...
2. 表示“表演绝技”，是动物话题的常用固定搭配，trick可表示把戏、绝技，对应表达为do wonderful tricks
3. 表示“照顾；照料”，课标要求掌握的同义常用表达有三个：look after、take care of、care for
4. 表示“追着……跑”，是固定动词短语run after ...
5. 表示“忘记要做某事”，区分forget to do sth（忘记要做未做的事）和forget doing sth（忘记做过某事），对应表达为forget to do sth
6. 表示“在一起玩得很开心”，是该话题常用的高分表达，对应为have so much fun together
7. 该句是让步逻辑，用although引导让步状语从句，“体型小”译为small in size，“自身重量的50倍”符合英语倍数表达习惯译为50 times their own weight，最终得到正确译句
8. 该句用which引导非限制性定语从句指代前文雷达的创意来源这件事，符合语法规则，准确传递原句含义
9. 该句用What引导主语从句、that引导表语从句、whether引导让步状语从句，是写作常用高分句型，准确对应原句语义
10. 该句用并列句结构，清晰传递人和动物的特殊关系以及我们的正确做法，符合话题表达要求
【答案】
1. eat up to ...
2. do wonderful tricks
3. look after/take care of/care for
4. run after ...
5. forget to do sth
6. have so much fun together
7. Although ants are small in size, they can lift things 50 times their own weight.
8. The idea of "radar" comes from bats, which allows ships to "see" things around them and travel safely.
9. What makes it special is that it's always there for me, whether I'm happy or sad.
10. Animals and humans have a special relationship, and we should respect and care for them.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，汉译英翻译，话题写作语料
【点评】
本题聚焦动物主题英语写作的核心语料积累，从基础短语到完整句子逐层递进，既巩固了课内要求掌握的核心短语，也引导学生掌握该话题下的高分复合句表达，能有效帮助学生在写作时输出更地道丰富的内容，避免表达单调。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题是动物主题英语写作的配套积累训练，解题时首先要结合单元所学的和动物相关的核心固定短语，优先选用课标要求的地道常用表达，避免逐字生硬翻译；遇到句子翻译类题目时，要先梳理中文的逻辑关系，判断需要使用的从句类型（让步状语从句、定语从句等），保证语法正确，同时选用符合该写作话题的高分常用句型，最终输出准确、符合英语表达习惯的内容。
【解析】
1. 表示“吃掉多达……”，用核心动词eat搭配表“多达”的常用短语up to，对应表达为eat up to ...
2. 表示“表演绝技”，是动物话题的常用固定搭配，trick可表示把戏、绝技，对应表达为do wonderful tricks
3. 表示“照顾；照料”，课标要求掌握的同义常用表达有三个：look after、take care of、care for
4. 表示“追着……跑”，是固定动词短语run after ...
5. 表示“忘记要做某事”，区分forget to do sth（忘记要做未做的事）和forget doing sth（忘记做过某事），对应表达为forget to do sth
6. 表示“在一起玩得很开心”，是该话题常用的高分表达，对应为have so much fun together
7. 该句是让步逻辑，用although引导让步状语从句，“体型小”译为small in size，“自身重量的50倍”符合英语倍数表达习惯译为50 times their own weight，最终得到正确译句
8. 该句用which引导非限制性定语从句指代前文雷达的创意来源这件事，符合语法规则，准确传递原句含义
9. 该句用What引导主语从句、that引导表语从句、whether引导让步状语从句，是写作常用高分句型，准确对应原句语义
10. 该句用并列句结构，清晰传递人和动物的特殊关系以及我们的正确做法，符合话题表达要求
【答案】
1. eat up to ...
2. do wonderful tricks
3. look after/take care of/care for
4. run after ...
5. forget to do sth
6. have so much fun together
7. Although ants are small in size, they can lift things 50 times their own weight.
8. The idea of "radar" comes from bats, which allows ships to "see" things around them and travel safely.
9. What makes it special is that it's always there for me, whether I'm happy or sad.
10. Animals and humans have a special relationship, and we should respect and care for them.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，汉译英翻译，话题写作语料
【点评】
本题聚焦动物主题英语写作的核心语料积累，从基础短语到完整句子逐层递进，既巩固了课内要求掌握的核心短语，也引导学生掌握该话题下的高分复合句表达，能有效帮助学生在写作时输出更地道丰富的内容，避免表达单调。
【难度系数】
0.6
