随着国家大力倡导“五育并举”,学校更加重视学生体育运动。同学们,你的学校开展了哪些体育运动项目?在学习之余,你喜欢什么运动?请你以“My Favorite Sport”为题,根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜爱的体育运动。
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地点;
3.词数70左右,正文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:
人称:
二、写作要点提示
1.许多不同种类的
2.例如
3.我最喜欢的运动是
4.放学后
5.使我感觉放松
6.不仅……而且……
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on sports."
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地点;
3.词数70左右,正文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:
说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:
第一人称
二、写作要点提示
1.许多不同种类的
many different kinds of
2.例如
such as/For example
3.我最喜欢的运动是
my favourite sport is...
4.放学后
after school
5.使我感觉放松
make me feel relaxed
6.不仅……而且……
not only...but also...
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on sports."
There are many different kinds of
sports for me to play at school, such as
basketball, football, running, table tennis
and so on. Among them, my favorite sport
is basketball. I like basketball because it is
exciting and interesting. I usually play
basketball with my friends on the school
playground after school. Playing basketball
makes me feel relaxed. It is also important
for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only
become strong but also learn the importance of
teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from
study and makes me more confident in my life.
sports for me to play at school, such as
basketball, football, running, table tennis
and so on. Among them, my favorite sport
is basketball. I like basketball because it is
exciting and interesting. I usually play
basketball with my friends on the school
playground after school. Playing basketball
makes me feel relaxed. It is also important
for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only
become strong but also learn the importance of
teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from
study and makes me more confident in my life.
答案
一、说明文 一般现在时 第一人称
二、写作要点提示
1. many different kinds of
2. such as/For example
3. my favourite sport is...
4. after school
5. make me feel relaxed
6. not only...but also...
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on
sports."
There are many different kinds of
sports for me to play at school, such as
basketball, football, running, table tennis
and so on. Among them, my favorite sport
is basketball. I like basketball because it is
exciting and interesting. I usually play
basketball with my friends on the school
playground after school. Playing basketball
makes me feel relaxed. It is also important
for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only
become strong but also learn the importance of
teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from
study and makes me more confident in my life.
二、写作要点提示
1. many different kinds of
2. such as/For example
3. my favourite sport is...
4. after school
5. make me feel relaxed
6. not only...but also...
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on
sports."
There are many different kinds of
sports for me to play at school, such as
basketball, football, running, table tennis
and so on. Among them, my favorite sport
is basketball. I like basketball because it is
exciting and interesting. I usually play
basketball with my friends on the school
playground after school. Playing basketball
makes me feel relaxed. It is also important
for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only
become strong but also learn the importance of
teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from
study and makes me more confident in my life.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先第一步要完成审题,先明确文章的体裁、时态和人称:这是介绍自己喜爱的校园运动的说明类文章,描述日常的运动习惯和客观情况,用一般现在时,以第一人称来叙述。第二步要对照思维导图的三个问题逐一落实内容:首先先列举学校开设的各类体育运动,接着说明自己最喜欢的运动,讲清楚喜爱的原因和日常参与的时间,最后说明自己从运动中获得的收获,过程中可以使用提示给出的固定短语,适当补充细节让行文连贯,同时注意不要出现真实人名和地点,把总词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
1. 审题部分填空:该文是介绍自身相关运动情况的说明文,全文描述日常习惯和客观事实,统一使用一般现在时,叙述视角为第一人称。
2. 写作要点提示填空:对照给出的中文提示,逐一写出对应的初中阶段核心常用英文固定搭配即可。
3. 完成整篇短文:承接给出的开头句,先介绍学校开设的各类运动项目,对应第一个问题;接着点明自己最爱的运动,说明喜爱的理由和日常运动的时间,对应第二个问题;最后说明运动给自己带来的收获,用上not only...but also结构,对应第三个问题,所有要点全部覆盖,逻辑通顺,符合写作要求。
【答案】
一、说明文 一般现在时 第一人称
二、写作要点提示
1. many different kinds of
2. such as/For example
3. my favourite sport is...
4. after school
5. make me feel relaxed
6. not only...but also...
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on sports."
There are many different kinds of sports for me to play at school, such as basketball, football, running, table tennis and so on. Among them, my favorite sport is basketball. I like basketball because it is exciting and interesting. I usually play basketball with my friends on the school playground after school. Playing basketball makes me feel relaxed. It is also important for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only become strong but also learn the importance of teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from study and makes me more confident in my life.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,固定短语搭配,时态判定
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的话题写作,难度适中,解题核心是先完成审题确定文章的基础要素,再对照所有给定的写作要点逐一填充内容,合理使用提示的固定搭配可以让文章表达更地道,同时注意规避真实个人信息,控制词数,就能写出符合要求的高分作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题,首先第一步要完成审题,先明确文章的体裁、时态和人称:这是介绍自己喜爱的校园运动的说明类文章,描述日常的运动习惯和客观情况,用一般现在时,以第一人称来叙述。第二步要对照思维导图的三个问题逐一落实内容:首先先列举学校开设的各类体育运动,接着说明自己最喜欢的运动,讲清楚喜爱的原因和日常参与的时间,最后说明自己从运动中获得的收获,过程中可以使用提示给出的固定短语,适当补充细节让行文连贯,同时注意不要出现真实人名和地点,把总词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
1. 审题部分填空:该文是介绍自身相关运动情况的说明文,全文描述日常习惯和客观事实,统一使用一般现在时,叙述视角为第一人称。
2. 写作要点提示填空:对照给出的中文提示,逐一写出对应的初中阶段核心常用英文固定搭配即可。
3. 完成整篇短文:承接给出的开头句,先介绍学校开设的各类运动项目,对应第一个问题;接着点明自己最爱的运动,说明喜爱的理由和日常运动的时间,对应第二个问题;最后说明运动给自己带来的收获,用上not only...but also结构,对应第三个问题,所有要点全部覆盖,逻辑通顺,符合写作要求。
【答案】
一、说明文 一般现在时 第一人称
二、写作要点提示
1. many different kinds of
2. such as/For example
3. my favourite sport is...
4. after school
5. make me feel relaxed
6. not only...but also...
【写作练习】
My Favorite Sport
As the goes saying, "Life depends on sports."
There are many different kinds of sports for me to play at school, such as basketball, football, running, table tennis and so on. Among them, my favorite sport is basketball. I like basketball because it is exciting and interesting. I usually play basketball with my friends on the school playground after school. Playing basketball makes me feel relaxed. It is also important for me to keep healthy.
Through playing basketball, I not only become strong but also learn the importance of teamwork. It helps me to relieve stress from study and makes me more confident in my life.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,固定短语搭配,时态判定
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的话题写作,难度适中,解题核心是先完成审题确定文章的基础要素,再对照所有给定的写作要点逐一填充内容,合理使用提示的固定搭配可以让文章表达更地道,同时注意规避真实个人信息,控制词数,就能写出符合要求的高分作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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