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Ⅲ. 书面表达。
2026年3月20日是第14个“国际幸福日”,为响应节日“追求幸福”的号召,创造人类共同“平安和谐幸福”的生活,学校决定举行以“My happiest moment”为主题的英语征文活动。请根据以下问题,写一篇80词左右的短文参加征文活动。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。短文须包含:
1. When is your happiest moment?
2. What happened at that time?
3. What did you learn from this moment?
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
2026年3月20日是第14个“国际幸福日”,为响应节日“追求幸福”的号召,创造人类共同“平安和谐幸福”的生活,学校决定举行以“My happiest moment”为主题的英语征文活动。请根据以下问题,写一篇80词左右的短文参加征文活动。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。短文须包含:
1. When is your happiest moment?
2. What happened at that time?
3. What did you learn from this moment?
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
My parents were both teachers at the same school, so they were always busy. My happiest moment was at 7:30 pm yesterday, because my parents were both back home and stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with me. I felt the love full of the house. After dinner, my parents and I talked about what happened during the day and shared our feelings. All of us forgot about the time because we had so much to tell each other. After all, love is the key to happiness.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
答案
One possible version:
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
My parents were both teachers at the same school, so they were always busy. My
happiest moment was at 7:30 pm yesterday, because my parents were both back home and
stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with
me. I felt the love full of the house. After dinner, my parents and I talked about what
happened during the day and shared our feelings. All of us forgot about the time because we
had so much to tell each other. After all, love is the key to happiness.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
My parents were both teachers at the same school, so they were always busy. My
happiest moment was at 7:30 pm yesterday, because my parents were both back home and
stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with
me. I felt the love full of the house. After dinner, my parents and I talked about what
happened during the day and shared our feelings. All of us forgot about the time because we
had so much to tell each other. After all, love is the key to happiness.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，明确要回答三个核心问题：最幸福的时刻是什么时候、当时发生了什么、从中收获了什么。首先选择一个贴近生活、容易展开的场景，比如和父母团聚的时刻，这类场景有丰富的细节可以描写。然后按照时间顺序组织内容，先点明幸福时刻的时间，接着详细描述当时的具体事件，比如家人一起做饭、下棋、聊天的温馨场景，最后总结从中领悟到的道理，比如爱是幸福的关键。同时要注意控制字数，符合80词左右的要求，还要衔接自然，贴合开头结尾的语境。
【解析】
1. 确定核心场景：选取与父母团聚的温馨时刻作为最幸福的时刻，贴近学生生活，容易填充细节。
2. 回答第一个问题：明确给出时间“at 7:30 pm yesterday”，清晰回应“When is your happiest moment?”。
3. 回答第二个问题：详细描述事件，“my parents were both back home and stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with me...After dinner, my parents and I talked about what happened during the day”，通过具体的动作和场景展现当时的温馨。
4. 回答第三个问题：总结感悟“After all, love is the key to happiness”，回应“What did you learn from this moment?”。
5. 整体语言流畅，衔接自然，符合题目字数要求，贴合征文主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
My parents were both teachers at the same school, so they were always busy. My happiest moment was at 7:30 pm yesterday, because my parents were both back home and stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with me. I felt the love full of the house. After dinner, my parents and I talked about what happened during the day and shared our feelings. All of us forgot about the time because we had so much to tell each other. After all, love is the key to happiness.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
【知识点】
1. 英语记叙文写作
2. 情景主题表达
3. 幸福类话题写作
【点评】
这篇范文选取了贴近学生生活的家庭温馨场景，内容完整涵盖了题目要求的三个要点，语言表达流畅自然，细节描写生动，能让读者感受到满满的幸福感，同时点明了“爱是幸福的关键”这一感悟，紧扣“追求幸福”的节日主题，符合征文的要求，也容易引发读者共鸣。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，明确要回答三个核心问题：最幸福的时刻是什么时候、当时发生了什么、从中收获了什么。首先选择一个贴近生活、容易展开的场景，比如和父母团聚的时刻，这类场景有丰富的细节可以描写。然后按照时间顺序组织内容，先点明幸福时刻的时间，接着详细描述当时的具体事件，比如家人一起做饭、下棋、聊天的温馨场景，最后总结从中领悟到的道理，比如爱是幸福的关键。同时要注意控制字数，符合80词左右的要求，还要衔接自然，贴合开头结尾的语境。
【解析】
1. 确定核心场景：选取与父母团聚的温馨时刻作为最幸福的时刻，贴近学生生活，容易填充细节。
2. 回答第一个问题：明确给出时间“at 7:30 pm yesterday”，清晰回应“When is your happiest moment?”。
3. 回答第二个问题：详细描述事件，“my parents were both back home and stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with me...After dinner, my parents and I talked about what happened during the day”，通过具体的动作和场景展现当时的温馨。
4. 回答第三个问题：总结感悟“After all, love is the key to happiness”，回应“What did you learn from this moment?”。
5. 整体语言流畅，衔接自然，符合题目字数要求，贴合征文主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
My happiest moment
Life is full of happiness and I want to share my happiest moment with you.
My parents were both teachers at the same school, so they were always busy. My happiest moment was at 7:30 pm yesterday, because my parents were both back home and stayed with me. When my mother cooked dinner, my father played chess and read books with me. I felt the love full of the house. After dinner, my parents and I talked about what happened during the day and shared our feelings. All of us forgot about the time because we had so much to tell each other. After all, love is the key to happiness.
So, let's live a happy life together and enjoy the beauty of life.
【知识点】
1. 英语记叙文写作
2. 情景主题表达
3. 幸福类话题写作
【点评】
这篇范文选取了贴近学生生活的家庭温馨场景，内容完整涵盖了题目要求的三个要点，语言表达流畅自然，细节描写生动，能让读者感受到满满的幸福感，同时点明了“爱是幸福的关键”这一感悟，紧扣“追求幸福”的节日主题，符合征文的要求，也容易引发读者共鸣。
【难度系数】
0.6
