登录
五、书面表达
假设你是李华，收到加拿大笔友David 的来信，针对他在信中提到的问题，请你用英语给他写一封回信，并给予适当的建议。
假设你是李华，收到加拿大笔友David 的来信，针对他在信中提到的问题，请你用英语给他写一封回信，并给予适当的建议。
答案
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are upset these days. It's normal for teenagers to have such problems. Here is my advice for you.
First, why don't you talk to your parents? Tell them you are tired and need free time to relax, maybe they will cut down some after-school classes for you. Second, you could send a message to your best friend to say sorry, and you will get on well soon.
Hope things work out for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm sorry to hear that you are upset these days. It's normal for teenagers to have such problems. Here is my advice for you.
First, why don't you talk to your parents? Tell them you are tired and need free time to relax, maybe they will cut down some after-school classes for you. Second, you could send a message to your best friend to say sorry, and you will get on well soon.
Hope things work out for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
1. 审题：本题为书信类应用文写作，对应本单元"礼貌提出合理建议"的核心知识点，要求以李华的身份给笔友David写回信，需使用八年级下册本单元所学的提建议常用句型如Why don't you... / You should... / You could...等，人称以第一、第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，词数要求80左右即可。
2. 写作结构梳理：
① 规范书信格式：包含称呼、开篇共情回应David的困扰（本单元对应David的典型困扰：近期学业压力大、父母安排了过多课外辅导班，还和好友发生了争吵，情绪低落）
② 给出2-3条具体可行的针对性建议，贴合日常逻辑
③ 结尾表达美好祝愿，符合笔友交流的语气
3. 注意事项：避免使用超纲词汇，语句连贯自然，符合八年级学生的表达水平。
2. 写作结构梳理：
① 规范书信格式：包含称呼、开篇共情回应David的困扰（本单元对应David的典型困扰：近期学业压力大、父母安排了过多课外辅导班，还和好友发生了争吵，情绪低落）
② 给出2-3条具体可行的针对性建议，贴合日常逻辑
③ 结尾表达美好祝愿，符合笔友交流的语气
3. 注意事项：避免使用超纲词汇，语句连贯自然，符合八年级学生的表达水平。
要求:(1)需要回复信中的所有问题;(2)80—100词(短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm writing to you because I'm in trouble now. I'm so worried about my health. Usually, I don't have breakfast because I often get up too late. Also, I don't like vegetables and I never exercise. I almost eat candies every day, so I have a toothache. I really worry about myself. I'm only thirteen. What should I do? Could you please give me some good advice?
Yours,
David
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I'm writing to you because I'm in trouble now. I'm so worried about my health. Usually, I don't have breakfast because I often get up too late. Also, I don't like vegetables and I never exercise. I almost eat candies every day, so I have a toothache. I really worry about myself. I'm only thirteen. What should I do? Could you please give me some good advice?
Yours,
David
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life. I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(92 words)
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(92 words)
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需回复David信中所有问题，词数80-100，开头结尾已给出。David的问题包括：因起晚不吃早饭、不爱蔬菜、从不运动、每天吃糖导致牙疼，询问健康建议。解题思路：先表达对David的关心，再针对他的每个问题逐一给出合理建议，最后表达希望帮助，确保内容覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】按照要求撰写回信，针对David的问题给出对应建议，控制词数在80-100之间，内容如下：
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、健康话题表达
【点评】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求紧扣问题给出实用建议，考查学生的英语表达能力和解决实际问题的能力，符合初中英语的学习要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照要求撰写回信，针对David的问题给出对应建议，控制词数在80-100之间，内容如下：
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days. I think you need to have a good rest. You should stop staying up late and go to bed early. You should eat breakfast every day. You need to eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. Water is good for your health. You should also do some exercise in your free time. Although candy is sweet, you shouldn't eat candies every day. Health is the most important thing in your life.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、健康话题表达
【点评】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求紧扣问题给出实用建议，考查学生的英语表达能力和解决实际问题的能力，符合初中英语的学习要求。
【难度系数】0.6
