典型例题
假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中所提供
的信息，给你的笔友约翰写一封电子邮件，介
绍一下我国华南虎的情况。不少于60词。

写作思路
1.时态:使用一般现在时
2.人称:主要使用第三人称和第一人称
3.结构:

写作模板句式
开头句:
1. Do you know South China Tigers?
你知道中国的华南虎吗？
2. They come from the south of China.
它们来自中国南方。
过渡句:
1. I like them because they're interesting and
smart.
我喜欢它们是因为它们有趣且聪明。
2. But they're in great danger.
但是他们正处于极大的危险之中。
3. People cut down many trees, so they're los-
ing their homes.
由于人们砍伐大量的树木，所以它们正在失
去它们的家园。
结尾句:
1. People must save the trees and not kill the
tigers.
人们必须保护树木并且不杀害老虎。
2. And we mustn't buy things made of
their fur.
而且我们不应该买用它们的皮毛制成的
物品。
范文欣赏
Dear John,
Do you know South China Tigers? They
come from the south of China. They are brown
and black with long tails. They're strong and
fierce. They can run very fast and catch small
animals. They are good at swimming, too. I
like them because they're interesting and
smart.
But they're in great danger. People kill
them for their fur. People cut down many
trees,so they're losing their homes. Now there
are only about 200 South China Tigers.
I think we must save them. People must
save the trees and not kill the tigers. And we
mustn't buy things made of their fur.
Yours,
Li Hua

Dear John,
Do you know South China Tigers? They come from the south of China. They are brown and black with long tails. They're strong and fierce. They can run very fast and catch small animals. They are good at swimming, too. I like them because they're interesting and smart.
But they're in great danger. People kill them for their fur. People cut down many trees,so they're losing their homes. Now there are only about 200 South China Tigers.
I think we must save them. People must save the trees and not kill the tigers. And we mustn't buy things made of their fur.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份给笔友约翰写介绍华南虎的电子邮件，要求用一般现在时，人称以第三人称（介绍华南虎）和第一人称（表达看法）为主，结构需包含引入华南虎、介绍其特征、说明生存现状、呼吁保护，且不少于60词。需结合给定的模板句式，按照邮件格式（称呼、正文、落款）组织内容，确保语言准确、逻辑清晰。
【解析】按照邮件格式，先写称呼“Dear John”；接着用开头句“Do you know South China Tigers?”引入，介绍华南虎的来源、外形、能力（跑、游泳），表达自己的喜爱；然后用过渡句转折说明华南虎的生存危机：被猎杀取皮毛、栖息地因树木被砍伐而丧失，数量稀少；最后用结尾句呼吁保护，强调保护树木、不猎杀、不购买虎皮毛制品；落款为“Yours, Li Hua”，全程使用一般现在时，人称符合要求，内容完整。
【答案】Dear John,
Do you know South China Tigers? They come from the south of China. They are brown and black with long tails. They're strong and fierce. They can run very fast and catch small animals. They are good at swimming, too. I like them because they're interesting and smart.
But they're in great danger. People kill them for their fur. People cut down many trees,so they're losing their homes. Now there are only about 200 South China Tigers.
I think we must save them. People must save the trees and not kill the tigers. And we mustn't buy things made of their fur.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、一般现在时运用、动物保护主题写作
【点评】该范文严格遵循题目要求，采用指定时态与人称，结构清晰完整，涵盖华南虎的基本信息、生存危机及保护呼吁，语言流畅准确，符合李华的身份设定，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.3