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假如上周六你和好友去海滩度过了愉快的一天。现在请你根据下面的图片提示写一篇不少于60词的短文，描述一下你们的活动内容。
假如上周六你和好友去海滩度过了愉快的一天。现在请你根据下面的图片提示写一篇不少于60词的短文，描述一下你们的活动内容。
答案
A Happy Day at the Beach
Last Saturday, I went to the beach with my good friends. When we arrived there, we felt very excited to see the blue sea and beautiful scenery.
First, we worked together to put up our tent on the sand. Then we took out all our food and had a nice picnic beside the tent. After the meal, we played beach volleyball happily for nearly two hours.
All of us had a great time that day, and it was really a wonderful trip.
Last Saturday, I went to the beach with my good friends. When we arrived there, we felt very excited to see the blue sea and beautiful scenery.
First, we worked together to put up our tent on the sand. Then we took out all our food and had a nice picnic beside the tent. After the meal, we played beach volleyball happily for nearly two hours.
All of us had a great time that day, and it was really a wonderful trip.
解析
这是一篇图表提示类记叙文，写作注意要点如下：1. 叙事人称使用第一人称，描述上周六发生的事，整体时态统一用一般过去时；2. 完整覆盖四幅图的活动要点：①和好友抵达海滩，看到海边美景十分兴奋；②大家一起在沙滩上搭建帐篷；③拿出备好的食物在帐篷旁野餐；④之后一起开心地打沙滩排球；3. 最后补充个人感受，体现游玩的愉快体验，用词符合七年级知识范围，保证词数不少于60，语句通顺连贯即可。
