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二、作文。
请以“My Birthday”为题,模仿阅读理解的短文写一篇短文。不少于5句话。
My Birthday
Hello,everyone.
请以“My Birthday”为题,模仿阅读理解的短文写一篇短文。不少于5句话。
My Birthday
Hello,everyone.
I'm Leo. My 12th birthday is coming soon.
My parents are going to have a small party for me at home.
My cousins and my best friend are coming. The party is on Sunday afternoon.
My mum is going to make a big chocolate cake. She is buying things for it now. I'm going to wear my new blue T-shirt.
My dad says he has a surprise gift for me. I'm so excited and I think the party will be so much fun!
答案
范文:
My Birthday
Hello,everyone. I'm Leo. My 12th birthday is coming soon. My parents are going to have
a small party for me at home. My cousins and my best friend are coming. The party is on
Sunday afternoon. My mum is going to make a big chocolate cake. She is buying things for it
now. I'm going to wear my new blue T-shirt. My dad says he has a surprise gift for me. I'm so
excited and I think the party will be so much fun!
My Birthday
Hello,everyone. I'm Leo. My 12th birthday is coming soon. My parents are going to have
a small party for me at home. My cousins and my best friend are coming. The party is on
Sunday afternoon. My mum is going to make a big chocolate cake. She is buying things for it
now. I'm going to wear my new blue T-shirt. My dad says he has a surprise gift for me. I'm so
excited and I think the party will be so much fun!
解析
【分析】本题为英语命题作文，要求以“My Birthday”为题写一篇不少于5句话的短文，需围绕生日的相关内容（如生日时间、家人朋友的安排、活动内容、个人心情等）展开，模仿给定范文的结构，做到语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头打招呼并介绍自己，引出生日话题；2. 说明生日的具体情况（如年龄、时间）；3. 描述家人或朋友为生日做的准备；4. 提及生日当天的活动或礼物；5. 表达自己的心情或期待，确保句子数量不少于5句，内容贴合主题。
【答案】My Birthday
Hello, everyone. I'm Tom. My 12th birthday is coming. My parents are going to hold a small party for me at home this Sunday. My best friend and my cousin will come to the party. My mom will make a delicious chocolate cake for me. My dad says he has a cool surprise for me. I'm so excited and I believe the party will be great fun.
【知识点】英语命题作文、英语短文写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕特定主题进行英语写作的能力，要求内容贴合生日主题，语句连贯，符合英语表达规范，有助于提升学生的英语书面表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头打招呼并介绍自己，引出生日话题；2. 说明生日的具体情况（如年龄、时间）；3. 描述家人或朋友为生日做的准备；4. 提及生日当天的活动或礼物；5. 表达自己的心情或期待，确保句子数量不少于5句，内容贴合主题。
【答案】My Birthday
Hello, everyone. I'm Tom. My 12th birthday is coming. My parents are going to hold a small party for me at home this Sunday. My best friend and my cousin will come to the party. My mom will make a delicious chocolate cake for me. My dad says he has a cool surprise for me. I'm so excited and I believe the party will be great fun.
【知识点】英语命题作文、英语短文写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕特定主题进行英语写作的能力，要求内容贴合生日主题，语句连贯，符合英语表达规范，有助于提升学生的英语书面表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
