第三节 书面表达(共15分)
你是李华,你的外国网友 Leo 和你一样刚上中学,但他发现很难交新朋友。请结合自身经历,根据表格中的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,给他一些建议。

注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 60 词左右(电子邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Leo,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
你是李华,你的外国网友 Leo 和你一样刚上中学,但他发现很难交新朋友。请结合自身经历,根据表格中的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,给他一些建议。
注意:1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 60 词左右(电子邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Leo,
I also felt nervous when I started junior high. At first, I was shy and worried about my appearance. However, with the help of my teacher and new classmates, I joined the Art Club after school and met friends who also loved drawing.
Here are two ways to help you make friends. First, be willing to talk to classmates. Say “Hello!” or ask about their hobbies and they will be glad to talk with you. Second, turn to teachers for help. They can suggest clubs or activities to help you make friends quickly.
Don’t worry! Making friends takes time. Stay confident and kind. Soon, you’ll find friends who trust and support you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Leo,
I also felt nervous when I started junior high. At first, I was shy and worried about my appearance. However, with the help of my teacher and new classmates, I joined the Art Club after school and met friends who also loved drawing.
Here are two ways to help you make friends. First, be willing to talk to classmates. Say “Hello!” or ask about their hobbies and they will be glad to talk with you. Second, turn to teachers for help. They can suggest clubs or activities to help you make friends quickly.
Don’t worry! Making friends takes time. Stay confident and kind. Soon, you’ll find friends who trust and support you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
I also felt nervous when I started junior high. At first, I was shy and worried about my appearance. However, with the help of my teacher and new classmates, I joined the Art Club after school and met friends who also loved drawing.
Here are two ways to help you make friends. First, be willing to talk to classmates. Say “Hello!” or ask about their hobbies and they will be glad to talk with you. Second, turn to teachers for help. They can suggest clubs or activities to help you make friends quickly.
Don’t worry! Making friends takes time. Stay confident and kind. Soon, you’ll find friends who trust and support you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给外国网友Leo写邮件,结合自身经历和表格提示,提供交朋友的建议。解题思路:1. 先对应表格“你的经历”,叙述自己刚上中学时的紧张害羞,以及在老师同学帮助下的具体经历(如加入社团);2. 对应“你的建议”,补充两点实用的交友建议(主动交流、求助老师);3. 对应“你给他的鼓励”,给予Leo信心,说明交朋友需要时间。
【解析】
按照邮件格式,先衔接开头,叙述自身经历:刚上初中时我也紧张害羞,在老师和同学帮助下加入了艺术俱乐部,认识了志同道合的朋友;接着给出两点建议:一是主动和同学打招呼、询问爱好,二是找老师帮忙推荐社团活动;最后鼓励Leo保持自信,交朋友需要时间,很快会找到朋友。
【答案】
Dear Leo,
I also felt nervous when I started junior high. At first, I was shy and worried about my appearance. However, with the help of my teacher and new classmates, I joined the Art Club after school and met friends who also loved drawing.
Here are two ways to help you make friends. First, be willing to talk to classmates. Say “Hello!” or ask about their hobbies and they will be glad to talk with you. Second, turn to teachers for help. They can suggest clubs or activities to help you make friends quickly.
Don’t worry! Making friends takes time. Stay confident and kind. Soon, you’ll find friends who trust and support you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、建议类书面表达、个人经历叙述
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活,要求结合自身经历和表格提示完成邮件,既考查语言组织能力,又考查解决实际问题的能力,内容易拓展,符合初中英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给外国网友Leo写邮件,结合自身经历和表格提示,提供交朋友的建议。解题思路:1. 先对应表格“你的经历”,叙述自己刚上中学时的紧张害羞,以及在老师同学帮助下的具体经历(如加入社团);2. 对应“你的建议”,补充两点实用的交友建议(主动交流、求助老师);3. 对应“你给他的鼓励”,给予Leo信心,说明交朋友需要时间。
【解析】
按照邮件格式,先衔接开头,叙述自身经历:刚上初中时我也紧张害羞,在老师和同学帮助下加入了艺术俱乐部,认识了志同道合的朋友;接着给出两点建议:一是主动和同学打招呼、询问爱好,二是找老师帮忙推荐社团活动;最后鼓励Leo保持自信,交朋友需要时间,很快会找到朋友。
【答案】
Dear Leo,
I also felt nervous when I started junior high. At first, I was shy and worried about my appearance. However, with the help of my teacher and new classmates, I joined the Art Club after school and met friends who also loved drawing.
Here are two ways to help you make friends. First, be willing to talk to classmates. Say “Hello!” or ask about their hobbies and they will be glad to talk with you. Second, turn to teachers for help. They can suggest clubs or activities to help you make friends quickly.
Don’t worry! Making friends takes time. Stay confident and kind. Soon, you’ll find friends who trust and support you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、建议类书面表达、个人经历叙述
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活,要求结合自身经历和表格提示完成邮件,既考查语言组织能力,又考查解决实际问题的能力,内容易拓展,符合初中英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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