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第七课时 Reading for writing（5）单元写作
典例分析
你的英语老师 Miss Gao 想知道你对扫码支付的看法。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，向她表达你的观点。
Key points
Reference words and expressions
Opinion
Useful
Advantages
1. Take a few seconds to finish the payment
2. Pay with smartphones / without cash
3. Wide usage (shop, eat and travel...)
Disadvantages
Divulge（泄露）personal information
【审题要领】
主题
人称
时态
图2
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，表明观点 → In my opinion...
2. 介绍扫码支付的优缺点 → (1) ... has many advantages. For example...
(2) However, every coin has two sides.
(3) ... has some disadvantages.
3. 总结观点，表达期望 → (1) There is no doubt that...
(2) I look forward to more...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. Nowadays, there are two main ways of shopping, online shopping and offline shopping. 如今有两种主要的购物方式——线上购物和线下购物。2. Mobile payment is a new way to pay. 移动支付是一种新的支付方式。
中间句：1. People can use apps like Alipay and WeChat Pay to pay for nearly everything in daily life. 人们可以使用支付宝和微信支付等应用来支付日常生活中的几乎所有费用。2. Mobile payment makes it possible to buy things without cash. 移动支付使不用现金就能买到东西成为可能。
结尾句：1. Mobile payment is becoming more and more popular. It makes our lives more convenient. 移动支付正变得越来越流行。它让我们的生活更加便利。
【美文欣赏】
Nowadays, more and more people are using e-payment. In my opinion, it is really useful and lets people live a more convenient life.
Paying without cash has many advantages. For example, it helps people save time. It only takes a few seconds to finish the payment. When you need to pay, you can simply take out your smartphone and show the QR code. What a convenient way! In daily life, people can see this payment method everywhere, when they shop, eat, take the subway and so on.
However, every coin has two sides. Paying in this way also has some disadvantages. For example, although payment platforms try their best to protect users' safety, it's still possible to divulge personal information.
There is no doubt that paying by scanning QR codes makes people's lives easier. I look forward to more smart digital devices to bring us more fun.
典例分析
你的英语老师 Miss Gao 想知道你对扫码支付的看法。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，向她表达你的观点。
Key points
Reference words and expressions
Opinion
Useful
Advantages
1. Take a few seconds to finish the payment
2. Pay with smartphones / without cash
3. Wide usage (shop, eat and travel...)
Disadvantages
Divulge（泄露）personal information
【审题要领】
主题
人称
时态
图2
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，表明观点 → In my opinion...
2. 介绍扫码支付的优缺点 → (1) ... has many advantages. For example...
(2) However, every coin has two sides.
(3) ... has some disadvantages.
3. 总结观点，表达期望 → (1) There is no doubt that...
(2) I look forward to more...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. Nowadays, there are two main ways of shopping, online shopping and offline shopping. 如今有两种主要的购物方式——线上购物和线下购物。2. Mobile payment is a new way to pay. 移动支付是一种新的支付方式。
中间句：1. People can use apps like Alipay and WeChat Pay to pay for nearly everything in daily life. 人们可以使用支付宝和微信支付等应用来支付日常生活中的几乎所有费用。2. Mobile payment makes it possible to buy things without cash. 移动支付使不用现金就能买到东西成为可能。
结尾句：1. Mobile payment is becoming more and more popular. It makes our lives more convenient. 移动支付正变得越来越流行。它让我们的生活更加便利。
【美文欣赏】
Nowadays, more and more people are using e-payment. In my opinion, it is really useful and lets people live a more convenient life.
Paying without cash has many advantages. For example, it helps people save time. It only takes a few seconds to finish the payment. When you need to pay, you can simply take out your smartphone and show the QR code. What a convenient way! In daily life, people can see this payment method everywhere, when they shop, eat, take the subway and so on.
However, every coin has two sides. Paying in this way also has some disadvantages. For example, although payment platforms try their best to protect users' safety, it's still possible to divulge personal information.
There is no doubt that paying by scanning QR codes makes people's lives easier. I look forward to more smart digital devices to bring us more fun.
答案
科学技术
; 第三人称
; 一般现在时
; 第三人称
; 一般现在时
