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3 Write a proposal in about 60 words. 写一封60词左右的倡议书。
你想写一封倡议书给社区里的邻居们，请他们关注社区周边存在的污染问题。请从“空气污染”“噪声污染”“光污染”和“河道污染”这四种污染中任选一种进行写作。请先将写作框架补充完整，填入一些关键表达，再基于框架完成写作任务。
Dear neighbours,
Yours sincerely,
你想写一封倡议书给社区里的邻居们，请他们关注社区周边存在的污染问题。请从“空气污染”“噪声污染”“光污染”和“河道污染”这四种污染中任选一种进行写作。请先将写作框架补充完整，填入一些关键表达，再基于框架完成写作任务。
Dear neighbours,
Yours sincerely,
答案
(Answers may vary.)
Problem: River pollution around our community
Causes: Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers
Effects: Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community
Actions: Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks
Dear neighbours,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to draw your attention to a serious problem around our neighbourhood — river pollution.
The rivers near our neighbourhood are becoming very dirty. The main cause is that some people are dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers. This irresponsible behaviour is killing fish and producing bad smells. It is harmful to our health and spoils the appearance of our community.
Therefore, I suggest that everyone should stop polluting the rivers. We could also put up simple signs along the river banks to remind people to keep our waterways clean. Let’s take action to protect our water resources and keep our neighbourhood clean and beautiful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Problem: River pollution around our community
Causes: Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers
Effects: Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community
Actions: Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks
Dear neighbours,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to draw your attention to a serious problem around our neighbourhood — river pollution.
The rivers near our neighbourhood are becoming very dirty. The main cause is that some people are dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers. This irresponsible behaviour is killing fish and producing bad smells. It is harmful to our health and spoils the appearance of our community.
Therefore, I suggest that everyone should stop polluting the rivers. We could also put up simple signs along the river banks to remind people to keep our waterways clean. Let’s take action to protect our water resources and keep our neighbourhood clean and beautiful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】这是一道英语写作题，要求先补充社区污染问题的框架，再写一封60词左右的倡议书。解题思路：从给定的四种污染中选一种（如河道污染），先确定问题核心，梳理其产生的原因、带来的影响及可采取的解决措施，再将这些要点组织成符合书信格式、语言连贯的倡议书，确保要点齐全、表达清晰。
【解析】1. 补充写作框架：Problem处填“River”；Causes处填“Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers”；Effects处填“Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community”；Actions处填“Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks”。2. 撰写倡议书：开头自我介绍，点明社区河道污染问题，说明污染的原因与危害，提出具体环保建议，结尾署名。
【答案】Problem: River pollution around our community
Causes: Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers
Effects: Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community
Actions: Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks
Dear neighbours,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to draw your attention to a serious problem around our neighbourhood — river pollution.
The rivers near our neighbourhood are becoming very dirty. The main cause is that some people are dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers. This irresponsible behaviour is killing fish and producing bad smells. It is harmful to our health and spoils the appearance of our community.
Therefore, I suggest that everyone should stop polluting the rivers. We could also put up simple signs along the river banks to remind people to keep our waterways clean. Let’s take action to protect our water resources and keep our neighbourhood clean and beautiful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语写作，倡议书，环保话题
【点评】本题围绕环保主题考查英语写作能力，要求学生梳理问题的逻辑关系，将原因、影响、措施融入书信中，既考查词汇运用，也考查篇章组织能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 补充写作框架：Problem处填“River”；Causes处填“Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers”；Effects处填“Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community”；Actions处填“Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks”。2. 撰写倡议书：开头自我介绍，点明社区河道污染问题，说明污染的原因与危害，提出具体环保建议，结尾署名。
【答案】Problem: River pollution around our community
Causes: Dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers
Effects: Polluting the water, killing the fish, producing bad smells, harming our health, spoiling the appearance of our community
Actions: Stopping polluting the rivers, putting up simple signs along the river banks
Dear neighbours,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to draw your attention to a serious problem around our neighbourhood — river pollution.
The rivers near our neighbourhood are becoming very dirty. The main cause is that some people are dumping wastewater and throwing trash directly into the rivers. This irresponsible behaviour is killing fish and producing bad smells. It is harmful to our health and spoils the appearance of our community.
Therefore, I suggest that everyone should stop polluting the rivers. We could also put up simple signs along the river banks to remind people to keep our waterways clean. Let’s take action to protect our water resources and keep our neighbourhood clean and beautiful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语写作，倡议书，环保话题
【点评】本题围绕环保主题考查英语写作能力，要求学生梳理问题的逻辑关系，将原因、影响、措施融入书信中，既考查词汇运用，也考查篇章组织能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
