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“人工智能,无人驾驶,智能机器人……”最近几年科技掀起一波又一波高潮,给我们生活的方方面面带来了巨大的影响。未来又会是什么样子呢? 每个人都有自己不同的想法。请以“What Will Our Life Be Like in the Future?”为题,根据提示内容谈谈你和你的家人对未来生活的展望。
提示：
注意: 80~100词。
“人工智能,无人驾驶,智能机器人……”最近几年科技掀起一波又一波高潮,给我们生活的方方面面带来了巨大的影响。未来又会是什么样子呢? 每个人都有自己不同的想法。请以“What Will Our Life Be Like in the Future?”为题,根据提示内容谈谈你和你的家人对未来生活的展望。
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注意: 80~100词。
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答案
What Will Our Life Be Like in the Future?
My family and I have our own expectations for the future life. Every family will have a smart robot to help with all the housework in daily life. We will take new safe flying cars as transport, and we can even go on a vacation on the moon. To make this dream come true, I will work hard at science and learn more high-tech knowledge.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题是未来生活，需结合思维导图的四个要点：日常生活（机器人）、交通（飞行汽车）、度假（月球度假）、个人准备（学习科技）。思路为：开头引出家人对未来的期待，接着分别阐述各方面的未来情况，最后说明自己为未来做的准备，全程使用一般将来时，控制字数在80-100词。
【解析】按照写作思路，依次组织内容：先点题说明家人对未来生活的期待，再写每个要点：每个家庭有智能机器人做家务；交通用安全的飞行汽车；可以去月球度假；最后写自己要努力学习科学知识实现梦想，确保时态正确、语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】What Will Our Life Be Like in the Future?
My family and I have our own expectations for the future life. Every family will have a smart robot to help with all the housework in daily life. We will take new safe flying cars as transport, and we can even go on a vacation on the moon. To make this dream come true, I will work hard at science and learn more high-tech knowledge.
【知识点】英语话题写作；一般将来时运用
【点评】作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖提示要点，时态准确，语句连贯，符合字数要求，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作思路，依次组织内容：先点题说明家人对未来生活的期待，再写每个要点：每个家庭有智能机器人做家务；交通用安全的飞行汽车；可以去月球度假；最后写自己要努力学习科学知识实现梦想，确保时态正确、语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】What Will Our Life Be Like in the Future?
My family and I have our own expectations for the future life. Every family will have a smart robot to help with all the housework in daily life. We will take new safe flying cars as transport, and we can even go on a vacation on the moon. To make this dream come true, I will work hard at science and learn more high-tech knowledge.
【知识点】英语话题写作；一般将来时运用
【点评】作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖提示要点，时态准确，语句连贯，符合字数要求，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.6
