典例赏析
假如你是Peter,你非常喜欢足球,请根据下面的提示,以“My hobby”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。提示:
1.你非常喜欢踢足球;放学后你经常踢球;
2.长大后,你想参加世界杯。



审题指导:
体裁:记叙文 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称
写作框架:

优秀范文:

My hobby
My name is Peter. My favourite hobby is playing football.
I'm a member of our school football team. I often play football with my friends after school. We often talk about football and watch football matches on TV. My father is my favourite football player and he is my role model.
Playing football makes me feel great. I want to play in the World Cup when I grow up.

【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以Peter的身份，以“My hobby”为题写70词左右的记叙文。解题思路：1. 确定人称（第一人称）、时态（一般现在时）；2. 开篇点明身份与爱好；3. 围绕“喜欢踢足球”展开，补充放学后踢球的日常；4. 结尾表达长大后想参加世界杯的愿望，确保覆盖所有提示要点，控制字数。
【解析】
写作时需严格遵循要求：① 开头介绍自己（My name is Peter），点明爱好（My favourite hobby is playing football）；② 结合提示写日常：放学后和朋友踢足球，可补充相关细节（如聊足球、看比赛）；③ 结尾表达愿望（想参加世界杯）；④ 控制词数在70左右，语言通顺，符合一般现在时的用法。
【答案】
My hobby
My name is Peter. My favourite hobby is playing football.
I'm a member of our school football team. I often play football with my friends after school. We often talk about football and watch football matches on TV. My father is my favourite football player and he is my role model.
Playing football makes me feel great. I want to play in the World Cup when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，英语短文写作
【点评】
本题考查基础英语书面表达能力，贴近学生生活实际，提示明确，降低了写作难度，适合考查学生用英语表达个人兴趣与愿望的能力。
【难度系数】
0.3