2026年优学1+1评价与测试九年级英语全一册人教版第252页答案
Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
人生不会一直是坦途。面对困境时,我们都需要一份勇气去穿过阴霾,超越自己。请根据以下中文提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下李明的故事。词数不少于80。
1.12岁时,李明在一次车祸中摔伤了腿,很长一段时间不能走路。
2.在家人和老师的帮助下,他没有放弃,每天坚持训练。
3.两年后,他终于可以正常行走,还参加了学校的运动会。
4.如今,他乐观、自信,经常鼓励身边的同学要勇敢面对困难。
5.我认为……
One possible version:
Life is never smooth sailing. Courage is the light that guides us through darkness and helps us overcome great difficulties.
When Li Ming was twelve years old,he broke his leg in a car accident and couldn't walk for a long time. With the help of his family and teachers,he didn't give up and kept practising walking every day. Two years later,he was able to walk normally and even took part in the school sports meet. Now he is optimistic and confident,and he often encourages his classmates to face difficulties bravely.
I'm deeply moved by Li Ming's story. From it,I know courage is very important in our lives. No matter what difficulties we meet,we should never give up.







答案

One possible version:
Life is never smooth sailing. Courage is the light that guides us through darkness and helps us overcome great difficulties.
When Li Ming was twelve years old,he broke his leg in a car accident and couldn't walk for a long time. With the help of his family and teachers,he didn't give up and kept practising walking every day. Two years later,he was able to walk normally and even took part in the school sports meet. Now he is optimistic and confident,and he often encourages his classmates to face difficulties bravely.
I'm deeply moved by Li Ming's story. From it,I know courage is very important in our lives. No matter what difficulties we meet,we should never give up.

解析

【分析】
这是一篇提示类英语记叙文写作,需围绕李明的故事展开,采用“总-分-总”结构:开头点题引出生活并非坦途、勇气的重要性;中间按时间顺序梳理李明的经历(12岁车祸伤腿→家人老师帮助下坚持训练→两年后正常行走并参加校运会→如今乐观自信鼓励同学);结尾结合自身感悟升华主题。写作时要覆盖所有提示要点,语言流畅,词数达标。
【解析】
按照“总-分-总”结构完成写作:
1. 开头:点明主题,引出勇气对克服困难的重要性;
2. 主体:按时间顺序叙述李明的经历,覆盖所有提示要点;
3. 结尾:结合自身感悟,强调面对困难不放弃的意义。
具体内容参考范文,确保语言准确,符合英语表达习惯,词数不少于80。
【答案】
One possible version:
Life is never smooth sailing. Courage is the light that guides us through darkness and helps us overcome great difficulties.
When Li Ming was twelve years old,he broke his leg in a car accident and couldn't walk for a long time. With the help of his family and teachers,he didn't give up and kept practising walking every day. Two years later,he was able to walk normally and even took part in the school sports meet. Now he is optimistic and confident,and he often encourages his classmates to face difficulties bravely.
I'm deeply moved by Li Ming's story. From it,I know courage is very important in our lives. No matter what difficulties we meet,we should never give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣提示要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,准确传达主题,符合英语写作要求,词数达标,是一篇优秀的提示类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6