根据下面表格中的内容,以“A weather report”为题,用英语简要介绍近两天的天气情况和适合的活动以及注意事项。词数不少于80。注意条理清楚,要点齐全,表达准确。

A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
答案
One possible version
A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
It is foggy and wet today. The temperature stays above zero, between 2℃ and 11℃. It's better to do some indoor activities because of the thick fog, and be sure to drive carefully in order not to cause any car accidents.
The temperature will drop a lot and there will be a heavy snow tomorrow. It will be very cold. The highest temperature will be 1℃ and the lowest temperature will be -10℃. Children will be very cheerful because they can make snowmen and have snowball fights outdoors. But don't forget to wear more clothes to keep warm while staying outside.
A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
It is foggy and wet today. The temperature stays above zero, between 2℃ and 11℃. It's better to do some indoor activities because of the thick fog, and be sure to drive carefully in order not to cause any car accidents.
The temperature will drop a lot and there will be a heavy snow tomorrow. It will be very cold. The highest temperature will be 1℃ and the lowest temperature will be -10℃. Children will be very cheerful because they can make snowmen and have snowball fights outdoors. But don't forget to wear more clothes to keep warm while staying outside.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“A weather report”为题写英语短文,介绍近两天的天气、适合活动及注意事项,词数不少于80。解题思路:先梳理表格中所有关键信息(今日天气、温度、活动、注意;明日天气、温度、活动、注意),再用规范英语将信息有条理组织,使用合适天气词汇,确保表达准确、要点全覆盖,满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,介绍今日情况:用“foggy and wet”对应“多雾潮湿”,说明温度在2℃到11℃之间,建议因大雾做室内活动,提醒小心开车;
2. 接着介绍明日情况:说明气温大幅下降、有大雪,温度为-10℃到1℃,提到可进行堆雪人、打雪仗等户外活动,提醒多穿衣服保暖;
3. 调整语句使逻辑连贯,确保词数达标。
【答案】
A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
It is foggy and wet today. The temperature stays above zero, between 2℃ and 11℃. It's better to do some indoor activities because of the thick fog, and be sure to drive carefully in order not to cause any car accidents.
The temperature will drop a lot and there will be a heavy snow tomorrow. It will be very cold. The highest temperature will be 1℃ and the lowest temperature will be -10℃. Children will be very cheerful because they can make snowmen and have snowball fights outdoors. But don't forget to wear more clothes to keep warm while staying outside.
【知识点】英语应用文写作;天气类英语词汇
【点评】本题为英语应用文写作题,考查学生对天气信息的英语转换能力,要求全面覆盖给定要点,语言准确通顺,符合天气预报文体特点,是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
本题要求以“A weather report”为题写英语短文,介绍近两天的天气、适合活动及注意事项,词数不少于80。解题思路:先梳理表格中所有关键信息(今日天气、温度、活动、注意;明日天气、温度、活动、注意),再用规范英语将信息有条理组织,使用合适天气词汇,确保表达准确、要点全覆盖,满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,介绍今日情况:用“foggy and wet”对应“多雾潮湿”,说明温度在2℃到11℃之间,建议因大雾做室内活动,提醒小心开车;
2. 接着介绍明日情况:说明气温大幅下降、有大雪,温度为-10℃到1℃,提到可进行堆雪人、打雪仗等户外活动,提醒多穿衣服保暖;
3. 调整语句使逻辑连贯,确保词数达标。
【答案】
A weather report
Hello, everyone! I'm happy to give you a weather report for these two days.
It is foggy and wet today. The temperature stays above zero, between 2℃ and 11℃. It's better to do some indoor activities because of the thick fog, and be sure to drive carefully in order not to cause any car accidents.
The temperature will drop a lot and there will be a heavy snow tomorrow. It will be very cold. The highest temperature will be 1℃ and the lowest temperature will be -10℃. Children will be very cheerful because they can make snowmen and have snowball fights outdoors. But don't forget to wear more clothes to keep warm while staying outside.
【知识点】英语应用文写作;天气类英语词汇
【点评】本题为英语应用文写作题,考查学生对天气信息的英语转换能力,要求全面覆盖给定要点,语言准确通顺,符合天气预报文体特点,是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
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