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写作指导
1. 写作任务
我们都有一些难忘的学校旅行经历。某校英语俱乐部将组织以“Our School Trip”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文，与同学们分享你的旅行经历。
(1)What did you do on your school trip?
(2)What do you think of the school trip?
(3)How do you feel about the trip?
注意：(1)词数不少于80个。
(2)文章必须包括所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题
体裁：
人称：
时态：
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1)I went on to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers .
上周六，我和同学们、老师们一起参加了去现代农场的郊游活动。
(2)Last weekend, we with Miss Liu .
上周末，我们和刘老师乘火车去了北京。
(3)The weather . 天气晴朗而凉爽。
中间句：
(1)First, we .
首先，我们探索了这个农场。
(2)Then we and vegetables.
然后我们帮忙摘了苹果和蔬菜。
(3)In the afternoon, the farmer .
下午，农夫教了我们如何耕种
(4), we went to Tian'anmen Square.
第一天，我们去了天安门广场。
(5)We lots of there. 我们在那里拍了很多张照片。
(6) we went back, we and delicious food on Wangfujing Street.
在我们回来之前，我们买了一些礼物，并在王府井大街享用了美味的食物。
结尾句：
(1) the trip I that farming . 从这次旅行中，我了解到务农并不容易。
(2)We there. 我们在那里过得很开心。
(3)It was .
这很累人，但也很有趣。
(4)Today was really a day .
今天真的是一个值得纪念的日子。
(5)Beijing is a place .
北京是一个值得参观的好地方。
(6)I hope I can .
我希望我能再次参观它。
名言名句：
(1)Travel broadens the mind.
旅游开阔眼界。
(2)Life is a journey to experience, to learn and to enjoy.
生活是不断经历、学习和享受的旅程。
1. 写作任务
我们都有一些难忘的学校旅行经历。某校英语俱乐部将组织以“Our School Trip”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文，与同学们分享你的旅行经历。
(1)What did you do on your school trip?
(2)What do you think of the school trip?
(3)How do you feel about the trip?
注意：(1)词数不少于80个。
(2)文章必须包括所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题
体裁：
人称：
时态：
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1)I went on to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers .
上周六，我和同学们、老师们一起参加了去现代农场的郊游活动。
(2)Last weekend, we with Miss Liu .
上周末，我们和刘老师乘火车去了北京。
(3)The weather . 天气晴朗而凉爽。
中间句：
(1)First, we .
首先，我们探索了这个农场。
(2)Then we and vegetables.
然后我们帮忙摘了苹果和蔬菜。
(3)In the afternoon, the farmer .
下午，农夫教了我们如何耕种
(4), we went to Tian'anmen Square.
第一天，我们去了天安门广场。
(5)We lots of there. 我们在那里拍了很多张照片。
(6) we went back, we and delicious food on Wangfujing Street.
在我们回来之前，我们买了一些礼物，并在王府井大街享用了美味的食物。
结尾句：
(1) the trip I that farming . 从这次旅行中，我了解到务农并不容易。
(2)We there. 我们在那里过得很开心。
(3)It was .
这很累人，但也很有趣。
(4)Today was really a day .
今天真的是一个值得纪念的日子。
(5)Beijing is a place .
北京是一个值得参观的好地方。
(6)I hope I can .
我希望我能再次参观它。
名言名句：
(1)Travel broadens the mind.
旅游开阔眼界。
(2)Life is a journey to experience, to learn and to enjoy.
生活是不断经历、学习和享受的旅程。
答案
第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文（Narrative Essay）
人称：第一人称（First Person）
时态：一般过去时（Simple Past Tense）
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句子积累 填空
开头句：
(1) I went on a school trip to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers last Saturday.
(2) Last weekend, we took a train to Beijing with Miss Liu.
(3) The weather was sunny and cool.
中间句：
(1) First, we explored the farm.
(2) Then we helped pick apples and vegetables.
(3) In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to farm.
(4) On the first day, we went to Tian'anmen Square.
(5) We took lots of photos there.
(6) Before we went back, we bought some gifts and enjoyed delicious food on Wangfujing Street.
结尾句：
(1) From the trip I learnt that farming is not easy.
(2) We had a great time there.
(3) It was tiring but fun.
(4) Today was really a day to remember.
(5) Beijing is a wonderful place to visit.
(6) I hope I can visit it again.
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提纲 示例填空
引入话题
Time and the place: I went on a school trip to a modern farm last Saturday.
Weather: It was sunny and cool.
Way: We went there by bus.
具体活动
First, we explored the farm. It was big and beautiful. There were lovely animals and fresh crops.
Then we helped the farmers pick apples and green vegetables.
In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to plant vegetable seeds.
表达感受
From the trip, I learnt that farming is hard-working and we should treasure every grain of food.
We had a fantastic time. It was tiring but meaningful.
Today was really a day to remember forever.
Our School Trip
I went on a school trip to Red Star Farm last Friday. It was sunny. We went there by bus.
First, we explored the farm. It was big and interesting. There were many kinds of plants and animals. Then we helped pick apples. In the afternoon, we visited the greenhouse and learned about planting.
From the trip, I learnt that farming requires hard work. We had a wonderful time. It was tiring but enjoyable. Today was really a day to remember.
体裁：记叙文（Narrative Essay）
人称：第一人称（First Person）
时态：一般过去时（Simple Past Tense）
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句子积累 填空
开头句：
(1) I went on a school trip to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers last Saturday.
(2) Last weekend, we took a train to Beijing with Miss Liu.
(3) The weather was sunny and cool.
中间句：
(1) First, we explored the farm.
(2) Then we helped pick apples and vegetables.
(3) In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to farm.
(4) On the first day, we went to Tian'anmen Square.
(5) We took lots of photos there.
(6) Before we went back, we bought some gifts and enjoyed delicious food on Wangfujing Street.
结尾句：
(1) From the trip I learnt that farming is not easy.
(2) We had a great time there.
(3) It was tiring but fun.
(4) Today was really a day to remember.
(5) Beijing is a wonderful place to visit.
(6) I hope I can visit it again.
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提纲 示例填空
引入话题
Time and the place: I went on a school trip to a modern farm last Saturday.
Weather: It was sunny and cool.
Way: We went there by bus.
具体活动
First, we explored the farm. It was big and beautiful. There were lovely animals and fresh crops.
Then we helped the farmers pick apples and green vegetables.
In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to plant vegetable seeds.
表达感受
From the trip, I learnt that farming is hard-working and we should treasure every grain of food.
We had a fantastic time. It was tiring but meaningful.
Today was really a day to remember forever.
Our School Trip
I went on a school trip to Red Star Farm last Friday. It was sunny. We went there by bus.
First, we explored the farm. It was big and interesting. There were many kinds of plants and animals. Then we helped pick apples. In the afternoon, we visited the greenhouse and learned about planting.
From the trip, I learnt that farming requires hard work. We had a wonderful time. It was tiring but enjoyable. Today was really a day to remember.
