写作指导
1. 写作任务
假如你所在的学校本学期增加了校车接送服务,请你根据下列提示,以“The School Bus Rules”为题写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍一下乘坐校车要遵守的规则。

要求:(1)包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)不少于80个词(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:get off 下车;around 在……周围
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题
体裁:
人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲

第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)Rules everywhere.
到处都是规则。
(2) we want to go to school by school bus, we need to the school bus rules.
如果我们想坐校车去学校,我们需要知道乘坐校车的规则。
中间句:
(1)First, we must the bus stop early and the school bus there. 首先,我们必须早点到达车站,在那里等校车。
(2)Second, we must the school bus .
第二,我们必须保持校车整洁。
(3)Third, we on the school bus.
第三,我们不能在校车内吵闹。
(4)And we on the bus either.
我们也不能在校车内奔跑或打架。
(5)Fourth, we the school bus before it stops.
第四,在校车停下来之前我们不能下车。
(6)Fifth, to play around the bus stop, so we can't do that.
第五,在车站附近玩耍对我们来说很危险,所以我们不能那样做。
结尾句:
To keep safe, we .
为了安全,我们必须遵守规则。
名言名句:
Nothing will be long without rules.
没有规则,一切都不会长久。
1. 写作任务
假如你所在的学校本学期增加了校车接送服务,请你根据下列提示,以“The School Bus Rules”为题写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍一下乘坐校车要遵守的规则。
要求:(1)包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)不少于80个词(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:get off 下车;around 在……周围
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题
体裁:
人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)Rules everywhere.
到处都是规则。
(2) we want to go to school by school bus, we need to the school bus rules.
如果我们想坐校车去学校,我们需要知道乘坐校车的规则。
中间句:
(1)First, we must the bus stop early and the school bus there. 首先,我们必须早点到达车站,在那里等校车。
(2)Second, we must the school bus .
第二,我们必须保持校车整洁。
(3)Third, we on the school bus.
第三,我们不能在校车内吵闹。
(4)And we on the bus either.
我们也不能在校车内奔跑或打架。
(5)Fourth, we the school bus before it stops.
第四,在校车停下来之前我们不能下车。
(6)Fifth, to play around the bus stop, so we can't do that.
第五,在车站附近玩耍对我们来说很危险,所以我们不能那样做。
结尾句:
To keep safe, we .
为了安全,我们必须遵守规则。
名言名句:
Nothing will be long without rules.
没有规则,一切都不会长久。
答案
第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称复数(we)
时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲
引入话题:school bus
校车规则:
First, arrive at; wait for
Second, keep; clean
Third, noisy; run or fight
Fourth, get off
Fifth, dangerous; play around the bus stop
简要评价:useful and important; follow
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) are
(2) If; know
中间句:
(1) arrive at; wait for
(2) keep; clean
(3) can't be noisy
(4) can't run or fight
(5) can't get off
(6) it's dangerous for us
结尾句:
must follow them
完整短文
The School Bus Rules
Rules are everywhere. If we want to go to school by school bus, we need to know the school bus rules.
First, we must arrive at the bus stop early and wait for the school bus there. Second, we must keep the school bus clean. Third, we can't be noisy on the school bus. And we can't run or fight on the school bus either. Fourth, we can't get off the school bus before it stops. Fifth, it's dangerous for us to play around the bus stop, so we can't do that.
These rules are useful and important. To keep safe, we must follow them.
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称复数(we)
时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲
引入话题:school bus
校车规则:
First, arrive at; wait for
Second, keep; clean
Third, noisy; run or fight
Fourth, get off
Fifth, dangerous; play around the bus stop
简要评价:useful and important; follow
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1) are
(2) If; know
中间句:
(1) arrive at; wait for
(2) keep; clean
(3) can't be noisy
(4) can't run or fight
(5) can't get off
(6) it's dangerous for us
结尾句:
must follow them
完整短文
The School Bus Rules
Rules are everywhere. If we want to go to school by school bus, we need to know the school bus rules.
First, we must arrive at the bus stop early and wait for the school bus there. Second, we must keep the school bus clean. Third, we can't be noisy on the school bus. And we can't run or fight on the school bus either. Fourth, we can't get off the school bus before it stops. Fifth, it's dangerous for us to play around the bus stop, so we can't do that.
These rules are useful and important. To keep safe, we must follow them.
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