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假设你是李华,想利用寒假时间为爸爸妈妈设计一套服装。请根据以下提示,写一篇60~70词的英语短文,介绍你设计的衣服。
提示:1.妈妈的连衣裙是粉红色的,由丝绸制成;靴子是白色的,由皮革制成;
2.爸爸的T恤衫是黄白相间的,牛仔裤是蓝色的;T恤衫和牛仔裤都是纯棉的。
审题指导:
体裁:说明文 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
I want to design clothes for my parents.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother.
The dress is pink and made of¹ silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them².
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans
my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear³.
I think my parents will like them very much. ④
亮点词块
① is made of 由……制成
② look pretty in them 穿上它们看起来很漂亮
③ are comfortable to wear 穿起来很舒适
高分句子
④ I think my parents will like them very much.
(I think 后面是一个省略that的宾语从句)
假设你是李华,想利用寒假时间为爸爸妈妈设计一套服装。请根据以下提示,写一篇60~70词的英语短文,介绍你设计的衣服。
提示:1.妈妈的连衣裙是粉红色的,由丝绸制成;靴子是白色的,由皮革制成;
2.爸爸的T恤衫是黄白相间的,牛仔裤是蓝色的;T恤衫和牛仔裤都是纯棉的。
审题指导:
体裁:说明文 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
I want to design clothes for my parents.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother.
The dress is pink and made of¹ silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them².
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans
my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear³.I think my parents will like them very much. ④
亮点词块
① is made of 由……制成
② look pretty in them 穿上它们看起来很漂亮
③ are comfortable to wear 穿起来很舒适
高分句子
④ I think my parents will like them very much.
(I think 后面是一个省略that的宾语从句)
答案
I want to design clothes for my parents.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. The dress is pink and made of silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them.
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans for my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear.
I think my parents will like them very much.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. The dress is pink and made of silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them.
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans for my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear.
I think my parents will like them very much.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称第一人称，词数60-70，需覆盖妈妈的粉色丝绸连衣裙、白色皮靴，爸爸的黄白纯棉T恤、蓝色纯棉牛仔裤，还要表达对父母穿着效果的期待。写作思路：1. 开头点明为父母设计服装的目的；2. 介绍妈妈的服装，说明颜色、材质，表达对妈妈穿着效果的看法；3. 介绍爸爸的服装，说明颜色、材质，表达对爸爸穿着感受的看法；4. 结尾表达父母会喜欢的期待，注意使用给定的亮点词块，确保语句通顺、语法正确。
【解析】
按照上述思路组织语言：先写开头句点明设计目的；接着依次介绍妈妈的服装（粉色丝绸连衣裙、白色皮靴），说明颜色与材质，表达妈妈穿着会好看的期待；再介绍爸爸的服装（黄白纯棉T恤、蓝色纯棉牛仔裤），说明颜色与材质，表达爸爸穿着舒适的期待；最后收尾表达父母会喜欢的看法，形成完整短文，符合所有要求。
【答案】
I want to design clothes for my parents.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. The dress is pink and made of silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them.
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans for my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear.
I think my parents will like them very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、常用动词短语
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，准确运用了提示中的颜色、材质信息，使用了指定的亮点词块，语句通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.4
首先明确写作要求：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称第一人称，词数60-70，需覆盖妈妈的粉色丝绸连衣裙、白色皮靴，爸爸的黄白纯棉T恤、蓝色纯棉牛仔裤，还要表达对父母穿着效果的期待。写作思路：1. 开头点明为父母设计服装的目的；2. 介绍妈妈的服装，说明颜色、材质，表达对妈妈穿着效果的看法；3. 介绍爸爸的服装，说明颜色、材质，表达对爸爸穿着感受的看法；4. 结尾表达父母会喜欢的期待，注意使用给定的亮点词块，确保语句通顺、语法正确。
【解析】
按照上述思路组织语言：先写开头句点明设计目的；接着依次介绍妈妈的服装（粉色丝绸连衣裙、白色皮靴），说明颜色与材质，表达妈妈穿着会好看的期待；再介绍爸爸的服装（黄白纯棉T恤、蓝色纯棉牛仔裤），说明颜色与材质，表达爸爸穿着舒适的期待；最后收尾表达父母会喜欢的看法，形成完整短文，符合所有要求。
【答案】
I want to design clothes for my parents.
I want to design a dress and a pair of boots for my mother. The dress is pink and made of silk. The boots are white and made of leather. I think she will look pretty in them.
I want to design a T-shirt and a pair of jeans for my father. The T-shirt is yellow and white and the jeans are blue. They are both made of cotton. I think they are comfortable to wear.
I think my parents will like them very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、常用动词短语
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，准确运用了提示中的颜色、材质信息，使用了指定的亮点词块，语句通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.4
